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Jeevansathi (RTMC ff) Pt 12 in Pg 54

Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged

Heya buddies, h r u all? i know i know u all r gonna kill me after what I'm going to say. LOL Well i'm starting yet another ff on RTMC. i know u all r gonna murder me with bare hands or atleast throw rotten eggs n tomatoes as i still hvnt finished my other two RTMC ffs n here starting yet another LOL  but what can i do? Big smile i just cant stop myself frm posting this ff. I'm misng RTMC sooo much. CryPata nehi kab aayenge saath mein yaar? CryNeways enough of my blabbering. I'm posting the CS and 1st part. Then u all will decide whether I sud continue or not. 






Avantika Sishodia: A very beautiful yet very simple girl. She is a very loving and caring person. She believes in giving others happiness and joy even if it comes at the cost of her own happiness. When she loves someone she does so with her whole heart and can do anything for the person.

Siddharth Singhania: He is a business tycoon. A very handsome man and the most eligible bachelor. he is the heartthrob of many girls. once he used to be very charming and happy personality but an unfortunate incident in his life has changed him to be a serious minded and extremely workaholic person. He loves his family very much and he too can go to any extent if he loves anyone truly.

other characters:

Shailendra Singhania:A renowned businessman and father of Siddharth and priyanka. A loving and caring father and husband.

Anamika Singhania:A housewife and the supreme authority of the household. A very kind hearted woman and a loving and caring mother and wife.She is the wife of Shailendra Singhania and mother of Siddharth and priyanka.

Priyanka Singhania: The daughter of Shailendra and Avantika Singhania and the sister of Siddharth. She is a very chirpy, sweet and bubbly person, loves her family and her brother a lot. She loves making friends and is a bit talkative.

Arjun Oberoy: Siddharth's best friend and the only person who knows him in and out. Siddharth can share his deepest worries and secrets with Arjun.

Dadisa: Avantika's grandma. A very sweet and kindhearted lady who loves her family a lot.

Pratap Sishodia: Father of Avantika and a doctor by profession. he loves his family way too much but it is his daughter whom he loves the most.

Amrita Sishodia: She is the mother of Avantika and Harsh. A sweet, quiet and kind lady whose world revolves around her family.

Harsh Sishodia: He is the brother of Avantika. he too is a doctor like his dad. He is a very responsible  doctor, son, grandson and brother. He loves his sister a lot, in fact the most.

Manju Gupta: Avantika's best friend and the only person with whom she can share her deepest secrets and worries without any hesitation.



Edited by sweetshera - 18 May 2012 at 11:47pm

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Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged

Part 1 - pg 1 
Part 2 - pg 6
Part 3 - pg 10
part 4 - pg 12
Part 5 - pg 15
Part 6 - pg 20
Part 7 - Pg 28
Part 8 - Pg 31
Part 9 - Pg 36
Part 10 - pg 40
Part 11 - Pg 47
Part 12 - Pg 54
Part 13 - Pg 58
Part 14 - Pg

Edited by sweetshera - 20 July 2012 at 12:07am

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Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged


The small, simple yet elegant cottage that belonged to the Sishodia family had been decorated just as a bride who was going to get married. The whole house had been decorated with beautiful lights of different colours which caused the house to glow with all resemblance to the glow that prevails over a bride's features. The railings of the terrace of the house had been decorated with garlands of flowers which had been spiraled against the railings and topped up with garlands of small bulbs. The windows and entrances of the house had been decorated in the similar way as the railings of the terrace, with flowers and lights. In the lawn that surrounded the house was set up the canopy made of beautiful cream white silken cloth which was also decorated with flowers. The entrance gate that led to the lawn was decorated in flowers and was so much clad with flowers that it fully gained the appearance of being a gate of flower and the hard iron frame was concealed somewhere beneath the flowers.

The day, rather the night, was a very auspicious one for the Sishodia family as the night was going to see the most beloved daughter and the charm as well as life of this house stepping into a new life which would bring her affluence as well as all the happiness and love that she deserved and would also bless her with a loving and caring companion who would guide her through the difficult of times and be by her side throughout her whole life. It is the dream that every parents dream when they entrust some other person with the responsibility of their beloved daughter and her happiness and send the apple of their eyes away, placing stone on their hearts. Yes the night was the wedding night of the beloved daughter of the Sishodia family.

The guests had already started to arrive and Harsh Sishodia, who was the elder brother of the bride and Pratap Sishodia , who was the father of the bride and of Harsh, were welcoming the guests alongwith their relatives.

The sweet fragrance of flowers, the beautiful glow of the lights and the glow on the faces of the members of the family, relatives and other people were aptly representing the ambience of wedding. Soon enough a silver colored scorpio reached the gate of the "Sishodia Nivas" and screeched to a halt.

Out of it stepped a man with a striking appearance and personality who was in his late 40s. He was the father of the bridegroom, Mr.Shailendra Singhania who was also the most renowned businessman of the country and also had his business spread over several parts of the vast world. He was followed by a pretty woman who was in her early 40s, clad in a designer maroon saree and was looking gorgeous in it, who stepped out of the back seat of the car, followed by a young girl of about 19, clad in a gorgeous blue lehenga and looking very pretty in it. They were the mother and younger sister of the bridegroom respectively.

Harsh and Pratap Sishodia approached them and welcomed them warmly and cordially. The affable and cordial behaviour that they received in return from the family of the bridegroom astonished many people who were present at the very spot as the snobbishness and the air of superiority that many a times the family and friends of the bridegroom possesed was completely absent in them. The relatives and the other people were whispering that the Sishodias were lucky to get such relatives.

Pratap: "Samdhisa jamaisa nehi aaye ab tak?"

Shailendra smiled at his anxiety: "fikar mat kijiye samdhisa. Aapke jamaisa bas aa hi raha hain. (Just then a loud screeching noise caught his attention and he turned back and a smile crept up on his lips) Yeh dekhiye aa gaye aapke jamaisa."

A BMW screeches into halt just beside the scorpio. It was decorated with roses just as a bridegroom's vehicle ought to be.

The door beside the driver's seat opened and stepped out a chirpy looking boy.

The boy: "oye sab bahar aa jao aur dulhe raja ko bahar le aao bhai. Hum pahuch gaye."

Then the door of the back seat opened and stepped out two other boys and soon after them the tall and broad shouldered person who stepped out of the car was indeed the bridegroom as could easily be deduced from the turban with the veil of flowers covering the face of the bridegroom which was called "shehra". The bridegroom was wearing a dark blue colored desighner sherwani which matched pretty well with his fair complexion. Slowly he took off the turban which revealed an incredibly handsome face with large, brown eyes, which possessed the depth of the ocean and anyone could just drown into them without even knowing it, and slightly pink lips for which every girl craved. A slow, gentle breeze blew causing his jet black hair to fell over his forehead which was adding even more to his charming and handsome appearance.

His very appearance brought smiles in everyone's lips and whispers of admiration. Both Pratap and Harsh, alongwith their relatives, approached him to welcome him and take him and his family inside the house. As pratap approached him, the bridegroom bent down to touch his feet. Pratap smiled proudly at going to have such a son in law with such great culture. He blessed him by putting his hand on his would be son in law's head.

Pratap: "Jeete raho. Humesha khush raho Siddharth beta."

Harsh came forward and both Siddharth and Harsh hugged each other. As they broke out of the embrace, pratap asked them all to come in as the auspicious time for the marriage was approaching nearer. All agreed to this and the bridegroom and his friends and family were escorted by the bride's family and relatives, led by Harsh, Siddharth and Siddharth's friends and followed by Pratap, Shailendra, his wife Anamika, their daughter Priyanka and others.

As they reached the entrance door to the house, a woman who was in her mid 40s and another woman who was in her mid 60s came over with their faces shining with warm smiles. They were followed by many other women, some of whom were relatives and others were neighbours. Also there were some young girls among them who were indubitably the friends of the bride.

The older woman smiles: "Arey Amrita, tumhare jamaisa bhi aa gaye. Ab toh tum saas banne wali ho. Toh ab tum bhi burhi ho hi gayi."

Amrita smiles back: "Agar aaj ki is khushi ke din ko dekhne ke liye mujhe burhi bhi kehlana parhe toh mujhe wo bhi manjoor hain masa."

Her mother in law smiles: "Hmmm'wo toh thik hain par kya daamaad ko yehi khara kar rakhne ka iraada hain. Jaldi se swagat karke usko andar toh le aao."

Amrita: "Ji Maasa."

Amrita walked up to Siddharth and performed  the rituals to welcome the bridegroom. Now as it was a part of the rituals, she was about to pull the bridegroom's nose when his friends pulled him away and all the people present their roared with laughter. She tried again but failed again. It was now that Anamika, Siddharth's mother stepped in.

Anamika: "Chalo yeh rasam hain. Ab Siddharth ko choro aur Samdhansa ko rasam poori karne do."

The earlier chirpy looking boy: "Par kakisa isse toh humari haar ho jayegi."

Anamika smiled: "Arjun, rishton mein haar ya jeet nehi, sirf pyar aur vishwas hona chahiye. Aur jeet humesha uski hoti hain jiske saath pyar aur vishwas hota hain."

Arjun smiled: "Ji kakisa."

He gestured the others to leave Siddharth and they all obeyed.

Now Amrita pulled Siddharth's nose very lightly as such to fulfill the ritual and meanwhile taking care to avoid hurting her would be son in law. Siddharth bent down and touched her feet. She blessed him happily. Now he bent down again and touched the feet of the bride's grandmother who also blessed him happily.

All the people entered the house. The hall was decorated with flowers. It was not too large if it was not small. Couches were there, arranged in perfect order for the guests to sit and rest.

Anamika: "Samdhansa, humari beti kahan hain?"

Amrita: "Wo upar hain apne kamre mein taiyar ho rahi hain."

Priyanka: "Wow mujhe bhavs se milna hain. Plz kakisa."

Amrita smiled: "Haan haan beta kyun nehi. (Turning to the bride's friends) Tum log priyanka beti ko saath lekar jao."

One of the girls: "Ji kakisa. (turning towards priyanka) hi Priyanka! Main Manju hu. Tumhari bhavs ki best friend. Aur aaj se tum bhi meri dost ho. Kyun banogi na meri dost?"

Priyanka smiled sweetly: "offcourse! Aur mere dost mujhe priya kehte hain."

Manju: "Okay Priya. Lets go."

Priya: "Yup."

And all the girls left the place alongwith Priyanka.


(The bride's room)

The girls entered the room, chattering excitedly. The room was decorated in a very simple yet eye soothing way with yellow roses all over the place as it was the favourite flower of the bride.

As they entered, the women who were helping the bride to get ready parted to both sides providing a clearer view of a girl sitting near the mirror with her back turned to the door. Her head was slightly bowed and as her head was covered with the "orhni", her face was not visible.

Manju smiled and approached her. She put her palm on the bride's shoulder.

Manju: "Avantika dekh toh kaun aayi hain tujhse milne."

Now the young girl raised her face up to look at the mirror. Her reflection mesmerized priyanka. Never before had she seen such an epitome of stunning, dazzling beauty. She had two large beautiful black eyes which were shining with happiness and full of life, glossy, pink lips and rosy cheeks. Two strands of  beautiful, black and silky hair covered a part of both of her rosy cheeks, thereby adding to the charm and beauty.

She got up from the stool in front of the mirror and turned back. A smile of recognition glittered in her lips.

Priyanka approached her: "OMG Bhavs u r looking stunning yaar! I mean I have seen you earlier also and that time too you were extremely beautiful, but today you are just mesmerising. And that glow on your face is just spellbinding. I must say Bhai ki toh nikal pari."

Avantika blushed badly at such appreciative comments and mostly at the last comment made by her would be sister in law. She went all red which added even more charm to her beauty.

Manju: "Oye hoye! Dekho toh jara dulhaniya humari sharmane lagi. Arey priya yeh saara nikhar toh unhika, matlab humare jijosa ke intezar ka, unke naam ke sringar ka hi natiza hain."

With this all the girls and women present there giggled, including Manju and Priyanka.

Avantika slightly rebuked Manju: "Manju dekh maarungi tujhe main haan."

Manju giggled: "Haan toh maar na. Maar ne se sach thore hi na badalta hain."

Avantika: "Manju!"

A voice startled them: "Arey larkiyon cherkhani baad mein karna. Ab jaldi bhi karo. Muhrat ka waqt najdik aa raha hain."

They wheeled around to see Amrita standing there. As they parted her gaze fall upon her daughter who was looking stunningly beautiful in her bride's attire. Tears brimmed up in her eyes, tears of happiness offcourse.

Slowly she walked up to Avantika and on reaching her, she put her palm on Avantika's head affectionately.

Amrita spoke up with tears welling up in her eyes and smile at her lips: "kitni pyari lag rahi hain meri bacchi. Bhagwan kare teri khushiyon ko kisiki najar na lagey. Tujhe ek saccha aur sabse accha jeevansaathi miley."

Both the mother and daughter got emotional and Avantika hugged her mother tightly who embraced her back.

Manju slapped her arm on her forehead: "Yeh lo! Kakisa humein kehke aap khud beh gayi ab! Arey jaldi kariye. Neeche bhi toh jaana hain na. Aur dekhiye aap meri Avani ko rulaiye mat. Saara make up kharab ho jayega. Aur fir yeh toh ekdum churail lagegi. Fir toh jijosa bhaag hi jayenge darr ke maare."

Everyone giggled while Avani pinched Manju who shrieks. However, Priyanka came forward in Avani's defence.

Priyanka: "Bhool jao Manju. Humne pehle bhi dekha hain bhavs ko aur bina kisi make up ke bhi wo itni hi khoobsurat lagti hain."

Saying this she walked up to Avani and gave her a side hug who responded with a warm smile.

Amrita smiled: "Chalo larkiyon. Muhrat ka waqt ho chala hain. Ab humein neeche chalna hoga.."

Avantika smiled and nodded: "ji ma."

Manju and Priyanka helped her to get the veil over her head.

Then Amrita and Manju came to both sides of Avantika and toghether they took her out of the room, followed by the other girls and women.


(The canopy set for the performance of the wedding rituals)

All the guests were waiting for the arrival of the bride. The priest was sitting in front of the holy fire in front of which the performance of the rituals had to take place. Siddharth was sitting in front of the holy fire and opposite to the priest facing him while the seat beside him which was meant for the bride was still vacant. Harsh was engrossed in conversation with  Siddharth's friends and some of the relatives of their own age. Pratap Sishodia and Shailendra Singhania were engrossed in conversation with some people of their own age while Anamika Singhania was engaged with some women of her age. The other people were scattered here and there, busy chatting with each other.

The priest: "Kanya ko bulaiye. Muhrat ka waqt bita ja raha hain."

Pratap: "Ji panditji. Wo bas aa hi rahi hogi. (And as he turned back to enquire he caught glimpse of the ladies arriving with the bride) yeh lijiye aa gayi."

Every single face turned towards the entrance and was enchanted at the sight of the stunning beauty of the bride. Whispers of admiration and excited buzz filled the ambience. The ladies at both sides of the bride led her to the place where the bridegroom was sitting in front of the holy fire and made her sit by the side of the bridegroom. The priest then began the rituals of the wedding. One by one all the rituals were performed and then the priest asked the bridegroom to put the vermilion on the bride's head and tie the "mangalsutra" around her neck. Siddharth did so and then Siddharth and Avantika also performed the ritual of the "saat phere".

After the fulfilment of all the rituals, the priest finally declared them to be man and wife.

Priest: "Saat pheron ke saath hi yeh vivah sampann hua aur aaj se aap dono pati patni hue. Aaj se aap dono ek dusre ke jeevansathi, ek dusre ke har sukh dukh ke saathi ban gaye."

All the people began to congratulate the bride and the bridegroom and also both families. Every single face was shining with happiness. The bride and groom came down from the platform set for the wedding and one by one they took the blessings of their elders.

Amrita gestured Manju to come near her and when Manju approached her, she whispered something in her ears. Manju giggled and immediately consented and then she whispered something into priyanka's ear and both the girl grinned. They alongwith some other girls went to Avantika and took her to one of the two chairs situated on a raised platform for the bride and the bridegroom  and made her sit on one of them while Siddharth's friends alongwith Karan took him and he sat down on the other chair.

Arjun: "Arey yeh kya baat hain bhai? Humare dost ki shaadi hain aur koi gaana bajana nehi hoga?"

Priyanka and Manju replied toghether: "kyun nehi hoga bhai bilkul hoga."

Arjun grinned widely: "Toh what are we waiting for? Lets go for it."

The girls led by Priyanka came down from the raised platform and after walking a few feets they turned back and smiled and priyanka clicked her thumb and index finger toghether. The music began.

Priyanka pointed towards Siddharth in a dancing gesture:

Pyare bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya

Pyara bhaiya mera

Pyara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya

Pyara bhaiya mera

Resham ki pagri mein sara ghar aangan mehka gaya

Pyara bhaiya mera

The other girls sang in chorus and started moving holding hands around priyanka:

Pyara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya

Pyara bhaiya mera

The boys then entered the ground and the girls dispersed while the boys came to the fore:

Resham ke pagri mein dekho ghar aangan mehka gaya

Dekho yaara mera

Again the boys dispersed and the girls came to the fore led by Priyanka.

Priyanka put both of her hands on her left waist and tapped her right feet:

Aaj kaisi dhoom hain goonj rahi sehnaiyan (priyanka twirled around and continued dancing)

Aanchalo ke chao mein baitha bhaiya saiyan (She stopped and pointed again to Siddharth)

Sajke doli aayegi lautke jab saath mein (Priyanka walked to the raised platform and approached Avantika who was smiling sweetly)

Pyari si bhabhi ka haath lungi apne haath mein (Priyanka took Avantika's hand in her own hand)

Fir ek din arey kya kehna ek phool sa khilega aangana (priyanka winked at both Siddharth and Avantika and folded her arms in the manner of craddling a baby. Avantika blushed and dropped her gaze while Siddharth rose his hand playfully to hit his naughty sister but she managed to scuttle away.)

Pyara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya

Pyara bhaiya mera

Priyanka  returned to the other girls and resumed dancing.

The girls dispersed and the boys again came to the fore led by Arjun:

Dekho kaise saj rahi surat mere yaar ki

Masti mein kya jhoomti shaam aayi pyar ki

Goriyo ke beech mein baitha kaise shaan se

Aise hi poore ho din mere bhi armaan ke

(Arjun rest his face on his palm and feigned being engrossed in dream and let out a fake sigh)

In haatho mein bhi koi haath aaye

Apne bhi suhaag ki raat aaye

(Arjun stole glances at manju who was standing with Avantika and smiled)

Resham ke pagri mein dekho ghar aangan mehka gaya

Dekho yaara mera

Now the girls joined the boys and holding hands toghether and all started dancing toghether.

Finally the dance came to an end and the whole place echoed with rounds of applause.

In this festive and rapturous ambience, time seemed to flew by and soon approached the time of departure in what seemed within no time. 

Edited by sweetshera - 12 April 2011 at 12:22am

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megha01 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
hey  jaanu
just  read d character sketch 
awesomeeeeeeeee , superb, gr8 star cast  sweetu

will b back  wid d comments on d 1st part

kal  ka exam  de lun kaise bhi karke

but u knw my condition rite now. sochne samajhne ki  shakti nahi  hai  dimaag me LOLLOL
aaj  to  440 volts ka jhatka lag  gaya boss

as soon as i'll b back  to  my senses , i'll join u  hereLOLLOL
tk  cr
luv u
Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 August 2009
Posts: 5982

Posted: 12 April 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by megha01

hey  jaanu
just  read d character sketch 
awesomeeeeeeeee , superb, gr8 star cast  sweetu

will b back  wid d comments on d 1st part

kal  ka exam  de lun kaise bhi karke

but u knw my condition rite now. sochne samajhne ki  shakti nahi  hai  dimaag me LOLLOL
aaj  to  440 volts ka jhatka lag  gaya boss

as soon as i'll b back  to  my senses , i'll join u  hereLOLLOL
tk  cr
luv u

Thanx soooooooooo much jaanu
will b w8ing Wink
kaise bhi karke? tu sar se bhoot utar rahi hain kya? LOL
haan meri jaan i know pretty well ki u r still not back from ur lala land LOL
i just pray ki exam se pehle wapas aa jaye tu barna exam mein RT ki biography aur saath hi mein apna ek love letter likhke aa jayegi LOL
440 kam par gaya yaar LOL ek aur zero add kar LOL tujhko 4400 volt ka jhatka laga hain LOL
then i hope ki u get back 2 ur senses soon par mujhe doubt hain ki wo jaldi hoga bhi ya nehi LOL
u 2 tk cr
luv u 2

Janakivallav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
awesome update. nice character sketches.
loved it.
 continue soon.
-Araina- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
will edit soon. 

n pls do cont. 
fatzfathi Senior Member

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
hey was an awesome start..! Clap loved d names u gav to RT n MC.. Heart its very diffrnt n suits tem bot very nicely..! Embarrassed continue soon..!
lov yaa..take care..! Hug

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