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momma1128

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
This is a first time for me.  I have never written a poem for SaaVan, but I made one for this very poignant moment when Shravan and Saachi meet and hug on the stairs when she realizes that she has amnesia and has forgotten her married life and husband.  I was a little nervous putting this up being a first time and all and would like to thank Anki for her encouragement and Sunaina, whose pic of this scene, inspired me to write this.




On The Stairs

On the stairs,

He glanced a furtive glimpse.

And in that moment he conveyed to her

His being

And his being without her.


She saw him

Standing there,

Heart wide open,

Beckoning her,

Cautiously.


His eyes pleading,

She slowly ascended to him

Like a cloud.


He searched her face and stared

Deeply into her dew drop eyes.

She searched his.

They drew her in

Like the hearth glows for the weary traveler.


They both looked deep into the universe

They once shared.

She reached into him, around him, within him.


He melted into her,

As the sunset melts into the horizon.

She into his protection, warmth,

Vaguely familiar soul.

And he,

finally,

Into serenity.

A moment stood still.



Edited by momma1128 - 10 April 2011 at 2:34pm

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
its the most beautiful poem ever Anu

and now on behalf of all people on this forum i welcome another beautiful writer in our midst

you have always known anu and most of the others would have noticed that how i love this scene this beautiful hug

and now with this poem you have immortalized this ...

thanks a lot

i loved it i loved i loved it

its beautiful and descrives everything in those hearts beating as one

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
anu,its  beautifulllllllllllllllllllllll.
 
please keep writing .
 
wonderful lines for one of the best hug of saavan.

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
WOOOW!!! Anuji its a beautiful poem!!

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Wow Anu !!Clap Beautiful poem !!! Tooo gooood !!!

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Anu, you were nervous about this??? Are you kidding me?? This was SUPERB! Clap I dont think any one of us could've described this scene any better then this! The emotions that played a huge role in this scene, you caught on to it and made it feel so magical!
Please dont be nervous about this anu, as you're really good at it and please do keep em coming!  Thumbs Up


Edited by desigirl2 - 10 April 2011 at 3:44pm

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
It is absolutely Superb !!!
 
Ek kothae  Darun  
 
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap


Edited by sunaina02 - 10 April 2011 at 3:59pm

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Anu
 
 
Right now I am posting this in the FC .
 
 
Once you come back online, you post it there and I will defnitely edit my post
 

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