Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 6

ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice1 dear..........

par sare mislim family itne conservative nahi hote........

love nupur's charector

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Posted: 13 years ago

Baap re baap .............ye tune kya likha hai Fiza:(

mujhe kitna time laga parne me!!!!

bt thanks k tune english bhi likh di.............nahi to meri watt lag jati........by god!!!!bt i knw Urdu is one of d most sweetest language :-D ....bt still lil difficult for me :-P, m nt able to read fast, ok with me, bs english meaning likhte rehna, nahi to kuch words k meaning mujhe samajh me nahi ayega:-P ;-)

nice update dear :D

diya-nups convo was grt............it lovely.............diya is such a sweet sis :D

love them :D

nups-adhiraj convo was also grt............a perfect jija-sali combo :D

adhiraj loves nupur very much.........more than zeenath............bt why she shouted on her???

nw m waitinf for would be dulah................its mayank offcourse :P

update soon

thanks for the pm,

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago

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jiya

@--jiya--

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: drfizaahmed

thnks dear

im glad u likd..evn more glad to know u enjoyd urdu

fiza... i love the language, i believe it is one of the most beautiful languages of the world, and thorugh your FF I get to be close to it... bas aur humein kuch nahi chahiye

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Gul

@DhanakZ

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Masha Allah Bohat hi Pyari or Achi kist thi

Bohat hi Nafees andaz ma likha ha ap na

Humma npur Ka halat or Ahsasat ka bakhobi andaza ha K ka

Hamara Muashra ma her Larki ki zindagi ma ye Dor atta ha or usa is napasandida amal se guzarna parhta ha

Humma Bohat pasand aya

Pegham bhejna ka bohat Bohat Shukria

kahani ko aga jaldi Barhaie ga hum imntezar kara ga😊

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valliyah

@valliyah

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

Fiza yeh kya kiyaaa...............maar daala Allah😳................Sharneel i mean Neela ki yaad agayi..............ab jyada intezar na karwana..........Aapke update ke intezar mein😳...............!!!

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samira

@-Samira-

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 13 years ago

woow sis masha-Allah

amazing start Fiza

i'm loving this story

update soon next part insha-Allah

thanks for the pm

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527159

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Posted: 13 years ago

superb starting fiza................u portrayed a common girl life almost perfectly...........loved it...........plz update soon..............

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: sharneel
Fiza ji..Aadab. pehle to har uss khata ki muaafi maangte hai jo aapki tehrir se nazrein churane per kiye humnain. yaqeen maane hamara... na likhne ka waqt naseeb hota hai aur na parhne ka sabar baksha Khuda ne. Aaj bhi yeh jo likhne aagaye woh sirf iss liye k iss bahane aap se 2/4 baatein to ho jayengi 😊 accha likkha aap ne...bohat hi 'Urdu' style me hai 😊 kisika saath nibhane ka vaada hum nahi karte kyunki aise vaade akser toot jaaya karte hai per hamare naik tamanna aur duayen hamesha aap k saath hai. likhte jayye aur aapke alfazon ko aise hi sarahay sab...Ameen!

oh btw...kuch inspiration chura k le jaa rahe hai in panno se, shayed hum bhi phir likhna shuru kar paaye.

-Neela

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hum se na poocho k khata kaise aur kab hue..
dard me doobe rehte hai akser...aankhein phir bhi nam kab hue

Neela ap taswar nhi ker sakti ap ko yaha pa ker humain kitni khushi hoi...jis insaan ny humain is zaban mein apni baat kahny...aur pesh kerny ki himat di...woh khud yaha ajay....hum ny asa soch bhi nhi tha.....maafi mang ker na hi humain shrminda kerain aur na hi paraya.....aur khuda ra likhny k waqt nikal liya keray...hum buaht bekarai se muntazar hotay hain......

hum janaty hai....islyan ap se oii vaada nhi mangty....ap yah aai ....humaray liyan naik khwashisaat k izhar kiya ...humaray liyan buhat bari baat hai.....

ap humary pano se inspiration....shrminada na keray ......

buhat buhat shukriaya apny alfaz humari nazar kerny k liyan

thnku so much for ur coment ..khushi hoi k ap ny is tahreer ko saraha...

u dont know how it felt...i almost scrd my collogue whn i saw ur coment n shouted

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: vampire_girl
hayyeee allah..!!😳
kya update hai
it was really nice part api...😛
loved the relation between adhi and nups..
it was really amazing bond😊

haan sach kaha nupur ne
aise kaisi kisi ke saath bhi shadi hosakti hai😔

waise ek baat kahun..y do i feel ki yea story me thodi thodi truth hai😉
mujhe sachai...nazar arahi hai😳😆
itna chota update mat diya karo
aur jaldi update karna😳

love
tasfia

hello janu

hay Allah tum bhi......yeah hay Allah kuch zayada hi comon hai.....

thnku so much dear for liking

oye hoay dekho zara asay kasay shadi.....hmmm...tu kiya irada hai janab k

u made me laugh tasu

yeah kam as kam meri kahani nhi hai plzz...hain sachi islyan hain k sab k gharo mein shyad asa hi hota hai

oki baba ....jaldi kero gi

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: -moona-
BeautiFul Part Fiza, Really Liked it..

thks dear

yeah mona darling k coment shrink kyun hotay ja rahy hai ....

mongabo bulkul khus nhi hoa...nt to worry abhi exams horahy hain kya tumhary?

lov ya

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