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Saavan ki Baat Pakki hai--A musings!!!

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Hello everyone
This is a new attempt by me writing about our beloved Saavan.Hope you all will like it..
 
Plz leave your comments without fail..Read on and you will see all familiar titles in Indian television..So enjoy this musings from Saavan POV..Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile
 
Siggie courtesy Niru and Geethu(thanz to u two)
 
BTW I have taken liberty with the lang, so plz ignore grammatical mistakes
 
 
 
                                                           
 
Baat hamrai Pakki Hai
Saavan ka Pyaar ki ye ek kahani hai
 
Holi ka Gulaal aur Rang badalthi odani
Jaisa rang bhi rangi kahani yeh
 
Hum dono Ram miye jodi hain
Mein Tere liye aur thum mere liye
 
Yeh rishta kya kehlata hai
Kahani ghar ghar ki hogi hai
 
Thumari Sapnon se bhare naina mujhe
Hamesha Zor ka jhatka detha hai
 
Hamara is Pavitra ristha mujhe
Bahut Maryada detha hai
 
Mere Ghar pe thum ek Choti bahu hai
Yeh Saas bina saruraal nahi hai
 
  Is ghar mein Sasuraal genda phool hai
Yahan Hamari devrani pyaari hai
 
Hamara Kismat hai ki hum dono ki
Beech mein Kitani mohabbat hai
 
Doondh legi manzil hamein
Kya karna hai is dhuniya mein
 
Uttaran nahi hai mere paas
Par Pratigya liya meine zaroor
 
Dil se liya vachan ko
Zindhagi bhar nibhaunga mein
 
Gunahon ka devta nahi hai aap
Sab ki jodi wohi banaata Bhagyavidaata
 
Tere mere sapne ek hai Shravan ji
 Hamara Pyaar mein twist khabi nahi
 
Choti si zindhagi hai hamara
Par usme Yeh pyaar na hoga kum
 
Bandhini hai yeh rista hamara
Rakt sambandh hoga baccha hamara
 
Baat hamari pakki hogai
Saath vachan se badkhar
 
Aathvan vachan nibha rahein hum
Saathiya hogai is zindhagi mein hum
 
Entertainment ke liye hum kuch bhi karegen
Indian idols bangaya hum dodno
 
Saavan ke Pyaar ka bandhan agni ki sakshi hai
Is kahani shuru with love guru(Ram ji)
 
Hamara Jodi kamaal ki hai
Hamara yeh Yatra hamesha chal sake
 
~~~~~~~~~~The end~~~~~~~
 


Edited by maris08 - 07 April 2011 at 7:37pm

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
gud one maris. oh wat a connection yaar. luved it. the titles of each and every serial is suitin nicely. indeed i already knew before ki ur a great poet.Thumbs Up 

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
hahaha........awesme nd cool idea maris dii.........
wow.......it was like remembering most of the serials..........
toooooooooooo gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it.......
keep writing.........

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Hey Maris, Lovely...U have put all the Serial or Show Names in this I think..Coz I dont Many of them...But They all are Very Well Arranged in the Poem...Superb...Good Keep it up..and Keep Coming more...

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
what a gr8 idea, Maris!!! loved it!!! must have taken a lot of effort to combine the names of the shows to frame them into a meaningful verse...hats off!!!ClapClap

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Maris, your talent has no bounds. I am sure it takes a lot of hard work and thinking to be able to write something like this but kudos to you for keep bringing out the best. Loved this all the way. Keep it up. Very proud of you!Clap

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Very nice maris!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.you keep reminding us how talented you are.Clap

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Maris you have rendered me speechless. Words are not enough to praise you. Absolutely brilliant. You get better everyday. Keep up the gr8 work, waiting to read lots more.

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