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FF: You complete me-6-Epilogue-Pg 17 (Page 30)

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Superb story


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 Absolutely lvd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Lovely ff
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I m actually at loss of words to express myself after i finished reading this FF! It took me some 5 days to finish reading this FF! And before writing this comment i took some half hours as i was just not ready to accept the twist even after finishing reading this FF! Okay here u go...


I felt every damn emotion while reading it n i enjoyed every scene, moment of Maaneet in this FF! Be their nok-jhok, falling for each other, accepting it to themselves to confessing it to each other, taking care of each other! Geet wearing Sari for Maan as he loves to see her in that despite being pregnant or Maan taking care of every need of his Geet, maing her strong n independent! Thet were truly made for each other like couple n their journey was totally magical until the shocking part which came in part 89 i guess! Trust me m still unable to believe that the twist really happened as Maaneet are the only couple who can make me feel extreme emotions even with FFs! It was so dreamy n i was soo lost in Maaneet n this story n the flow of it till part 88 that it really took me some time to sunk in the fact that the story had a leap n Maaneet were separated! I mean i literally enjoyed this FF like anything n it has come in my top 10 Maaneet FFs but the leap twist just pinched me so badly n i wont lie it also left a bad taste in my mouth! I dint like the fact that Geet dint trust Maan even after knowing what all he did for her, her reasons might be strong enough specially the one that Maan was also in HP when she was getting married to Dev, the land papers n fight n Maan n Sameera story which she already heard from Naintara n also that Maan was at fault for hinding it to Geet but i thought their relation is strong enough n it would come out of this hurdle and more over Dadiman knew everything about it so the leap n separation was really confusing! I also hated the fact that Geet could actually stay away from Muskaan her own baby for 6 long years! After leap the story lost its charm i felt may be cause it confused me like anything! There were many loopholes like what did Vicky n Dev do when they heard Naintara threatening Kia after that hospital update where Naintara attacks Geet, u left that part half way without explaining things n dint Naintara n Dev were going to Hyderabad for new project exactly the day after the hospital scene then how n when Naintara started filling Geet's mind or post leap updates the one where Geet reveals how she doubted Maan n how her doubt was cleared by Dadimaa, Kia n Vicky when they came in Chennai! At one place u said that none knew where Geet was staying after she left Maan n Muskaan n also none knew the reasons behind their separation n later at the end u said that Shasha had seen Geet in airport n Dadimaa met with her 3 years back n sorted all the doubts n differences from Geet's mind! My question is if Dadimaa knew why Geet left Maan n Muskaan then why she dint tried explaining things to Maan as well rather seeing him suffer everyday? I know m comment wont mean anything now as this FF is over long back n may be u wont even read my comment but still if u ever plan to read the story again u would get what i wanted to say by my comment! And with all means i m not at all insulting u or ur work in fact this FF has come in my top 10 but only for those beautiful n flawless 88 parts and if i be true to you as a reader it is not cause there were Maaneet happy moments or all lovey dovey stuff in those 88 parts it was cause i saw the trust build in their relationship n i had faith in that relationship that no matter what Maan n Geet wont leave each other over some misunderstandings in those whole 88 parts! But nonetheless i dint regret reading the FF n enjoyed it thoroughly! I just wanted to express my views as it was killing me to know that Maaneet actually were separated for 6 long years when they couldnt even leave for a second without each other! I hope my comment dint hurt u n if it did then m extremely sorry!


-Sanjana!
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awesome ff
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awesome ffClapClap




read it already 3 timesWink




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