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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Nice Story

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
A very nice and fresh story Shreya ....  I liked it quite a lot !!! Nice to see a new writer here with a very very nice story. Simple and in flow ... I liked the way you handled the whole plot !!!! Will try post a detailed review later but in short great job buddy Clap hoping to read more from you soon !!!

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nice one ................. shreya..............ClapClapClap

       will do the review later..........

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Clapfantastic story!! i liked it!!Clap

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged
WOW!! very nice story shreya.
gr8 work..
 

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Shreya just finished reading it. Its fabulous. The treatment of the plot is very smooth. Entirely iin flow. Well doneClap

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Lovely story Shreya....do keep writing more. I feel like believing that this is the 'Kolhapur ke palace ka raaz' which most  of us missed due to the match. LOL
 
Just a few things....some of the spellings are a bit confusing - like 'woh chiki hogi, cheli hogi'....it should have been 'chillayi...'. I know it's tough writing Hindi in English scipt. Otherwise it was a nice refreshing change to see a purely investigative story here.Thumbs Up


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