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Guyzz I really like this...so i want to write a FF on this... my lead character are same as Navya


DO you want me to continue?


Chapter 1

Childhood of Navya


Episode 1



THE SUN IS RISING BEAUTIFULLY IN A SMALL TOWN. THE PEOPLE OF THE TOWN ARE ENJOYING THERE DAY AS TODAY IS DIWALI.EVERYONE IS WAITING FOR THE NIGHT TO BECAME SO THEY CAN ENJOY THE DIWALI.


BUT IN THE TOWN THERE WAS AN UNPLEASANT ORPHANAGE WHERE A CRUEL MADAM WAS LOOKING AFTER THE ORPHANS. NAVYA IS ONE OF THEM.SHE IS A VERY SWEET AND A HUMBLE GIRL.SHE HAS MANY FRIENDS AROUND IN THE ORPHANAGE.SHE WAS FRIEND WITH MOST OF THE ORPHANS.BUT HER AND OTHER ORPHAN'S LIFE WAS LIKE AN HELL...!!! NO TIME FOR ENJOYMENT , ONLY WORK...


Scene 1:

Navya and Shruti(best friend) are on their work cleaning the floor and dusting the windows.Shruti is really sad.

Navya:Shruti! What is it?

Shruti(sad): Navya You know! Today is Diwali and everyone enjoys at  time.Blasting Patakas

Shruti starts crying

Navya sighs and say: Hey Friend! Our Orphans life is only like this. Don't cry! We shall soon get out of here

Shruti and Navya hug each other

"STOP IT! YOUR IDIOTS"Madam Shetal shouts at them

Shruti and Navya are really afraid and start to shiver.

Madam Shetal:(Shouting) No Crying!You Fools..and No Diwali for You...Continue your work. And remember one thing you both will not get your lunch if the work isn't finish!(she laughs)


Shruti and Navya start to work


The Time Fells. And the orphans are done with their daily works. They all are done with their lunch also. Shruti and Navya are looking outside the window seeing the wonderful view...the children are playing and blasting patakas and playing all around...


Navya's eyes fills with tears...

Navya:(in heart) Mom and Dad If you were here I would really missed you.!!!



Episode 2



The other orphans are also sad sitting on their bed and are weeping silently.Suddenly a bright idea burst in Shruti's mind. And she jumps up.


Shruti(excited) Hey!! We will enjoy the Diwali!!

Everyone(confused):How?

Shruti: Well!! We will not burst patakas but we will enjoy and dance!! isn't it gr8?

Everyone looks at each other and jump with enjoyment along Navya.

Tiha(stand up from her bed and shouts) No Are you all mad? (Tiha is a bad fellow of Navya and Shruti and she is jealous of orphans liking Navya more than her)

Navya:No!! We are not! If you like to join us so we are welcome

Tiha makes faces and refuses

Everyone Ignores her


Background Music begin!!!

They all join their hand in a circle and start dancing in a circle. 

They all start to jump around and are really happy but Tiha is sitting angrily staring at Shruti and Navya enjoying.She is really angry and want to take revenge from Navya for insulting her in front of everyone. 


They all are happy and Soon they all fell in a deep sleep with a smile.


Navya dreams of a beautiful town with friendly people around and is being friendly with Navya.It seems like she is in Heaven.


Suddenly Navya wakes up and think is it a sign that I am going to be release from this hell? She looks at the time its 5:00 in the morning.


Navya gets up from her bed and go to the widow and cross her hands and watch the wind blowing.Tears fell from Navya's Eyes. 


Precap:

Madam Sheetal is shouting at Navya. Madam Sheetal: Now you will be punished. Small Navya is really scared and is shivering.



Episode 3:


Madam Sheetal wake all the children at 6:00 am to do the core work...Navya and her friends are feeling sleepy as they all were enjoying the half of the night..


Madam Sheetal: Navya!! Come here

Navya come running to her

Madam Sheetal(shouting): GO and clean my office!! Go fast

Navya takes the cleaning cloth and runs to Madam Sheetal office...


Navya is feeling really sleepy!! She is feeling laziness also...but she start to clean the  office...


Navya is cleaning the table and the other item...

Suddenly when Navya move her hand to the table...Madam Sheetal's favourite vase fell...with a "Thump"

Navya gets scared...


Madam Sheetal came shouting in the office: What have you broken?


Navya gets more scared when she hear her shouting...


Madam Sheetal enters the office and gets angry seeing her favourite vase broken...


She looks down and stare angrily at Navya...

Madam Sheetal is shouting at Navya.

Madam Sheetal: Now you will be punished for what you have done.

Small Navya is really scared and is shivering.

Madam Navya grabs Navya's hand tightly...and drag her outside

Navya starts crying...

Navya(crying): No mam!! I am sorry

Navya's friends are scared seeing this...

Shruti wants to help her friend but can't help

Tiha is really seeing Navya in dangers and she thinks this is her punishment for insulting her..

Madam Sheetal in violence drag Navya and lock her in Store room...

Navya start crying loudly but Madam Sheetal don't listen

Madam Sheetal looking at sacred children: Donn't you all dare to help her!! Gotta it

Sacred Children moves back and start doing their work

Navya is crying in the store room...


Madam Sheetal is in her office talking to the Mishras...

Mr.Mishra: We want to adopt two little girls.

Madam Sheetal: Yes!! Please...Wait here

Madam Sheetal run to the children and directly go to store room and opens it.

Madam Sheetal: Navya! Wipe your tears!! don't dare to cry in front of my guest..and come outside..t(turns to the children)they are coming to adopt two girls


Everyone is excited ...Navya thinks that her dream might come true


Precap:

Mr.and Mrs. Mishra are choosing two girls to adopt...Navya is praying that she and Shruti gets adopted together



How was it??


Title is changed to Navya Ki Zindagi!!


Episode:4

Madam.Sheetal goes to her offices...



After few minutes she come with Mr. and Mrs.Mishra..


The couple is excited to adopt two girls..


Madam Sheetal(confused): Why are you adopting two girls?

Mrs.Mishra: Well! For the company of other...As two will make a good company for each other...and 1 girl might be not comfortable alone with us so...

Madam Sheetal: OK

Mr.Mishra and Mrs. Mishra start to look at the children...


Navya is praying that she and Shruti gets adopted together...


The couple are dicussing to adopt who..They like Navya and her innocent


Mr.Mishra goes to Navya and bows down...


Navya is excited...


Mr.Mishra: Sweet Girl!! Who is your best friend?

Navya point out Shruti


Madam Sheetal looks angry...

Mr.Mishra and Mrs.Mishra discuss that they will adopt Navya and Shruti..


The couple calls Madam Sheetal in the office and tell her who they are going to adopt


Madam Sheetal tries a lot to change the couple mind but they are love with that small girls so madam Sheetal's plan fail..

Madam.Sheetal: OK! I will make them ready


Madam Sheetal goes to the children and looks angrily at Navya and Shruti


Madam Sheetal: Navya and Shruti! Get ready you both are adopted... Its your lucky day other wise no one wouldn't adopt you!


Navya and Shruti's face glows up with enjoyment..They rush inside to get ready

Tiha is angry...


Navya and Shruti gets ready and are excited


Navya(big smile on her face): Shruti!! We are free now


Shruti hugs her friend..


They both goes out and bid bye to their friends


Madam Sheetal takes them to the couple. The couple is really happy...

Shruti and Navya give the couple a sweet smile...


Mr.Mishra: Meeta  take the girls in the car while i will pay Sheetal


Meeta Mishra: My children lets go in the car...


Shruti and Navya hold Meeta Mishra's hand.


They go in the car


Mr.Mishra pays Sheetal and goes in the car


The couple loves the girls...


Mrs.Mishra(Meeta Mishra): You both will enjoy!!


She kiss the girls


The car starts and they head to another town


Navya and Shruti enjoy watching the view of the outside...


In few hours they reach in a small town. The town is really beautiful...There are beautiful houses around and  children are playing around.


The car stops near a big house...


Navya and Shruti looks at the big house house and are really excite about living there.


Precap:

A boy of same age of Navya comes to the house and Navya and the boys look at each other...







How was it?



And Guyzz! I will now stop editing this becoz this is becoming a mess...

Now i will post the link to my new chapter...but i will continue on only this post(no new post)


Episode 5:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1654103&TPN=4&#41281453

Episode 6:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1654103&TPN=6&#41322804

Episode 7:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1654103&TPN=8&

Episode 8:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1654103&TPN=9&#41401871

Episode 9:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1654103&TPN=10&#41449259

Episode 10:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1654103&TPN=10
















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sure u can

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ya plz continue i wanna read ffs on this show 

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waiting eagerly. Clap

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good start dear...
plz do continue soon

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Sure!!! By the way thanks!

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