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Nazmaa Goldie

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haha loved it x :) maan jealous of someone who looks like him .. hehe x

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nice update!!!
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awesome part
continue soon
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so ? will u upload the next part on this sunday ? :p
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gv the nxt update plzzz IF-Dazzler

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hey :) 
loved it yaar 
KreyaArshiLover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 October 2011 at 6:36am | IP Logged

I am really sad, i didn't get many comments last time,Cry guys if you have losing intrsset in this ff please tell me i will stop it at the moment. And i am also not getting ideas about how to continoue it, Please give me ideas.

 chapter 31

It had gone awhile now Maan couldn't control over it. He was mad, he stood her past half an hour she was not finished?

He got up to her hand closed the screen of the lap top. And he thought Geet will become mad but instead her show was finished and got down from the bed.

She asked Maan

G:- haan Maan, what did you want?

Maan come out from his thoughts and said

M:- umm... dinner is ready.

G:- OK. And went downstairs.

Maan had seen her all day she was trying to hide something. When ever he came near her she just changed.

M:- What has happen with her? So quiet with me and she is going away from me every time I come close? What's has happened to her? I will talk to her After the dinner. Maan thought.

After dinner was over Geet was about to go to her room when Maan took a hold of her wrist.

M:- Geet I need to talk to you.

G:- Maan can we talk tomorrow I am tired.

M:- No, now.

Geet sighed and went with him to his room.

They has on his bed.

M:- Geet what has happen with you?

G:- What do you mean, I am totally normal.

M:- NO, you are not. You are not fighting with me. You so into your computer all day. You didn't get mad at me when I closed the screen, are you ignoring me?

Geet looked at the side and said

G:- no I am not!!

Maan cupped Geet cheek and turned her to his side. And saw Geet teary eyes.

Maan got really scared

M:- Geet what has happen? Tell me!!

Then it struck Maan

M:- You are.. are you angry at me for the incident in school?

Geet looked at him, and saw that he was hell sacred. And fast she said

G:- No,no no Maan I complete trust you, I know you didn't do anything.

M:- Then what is it Geet?

Geet lay her head in Maan's lap and said

G:.- Its just that I am missing... home.

Maan heart winced in pain when he heard that. But he couldn't do anything about it. Because of the situation.

M:- Maan brushed his hand throw her head.

After awhile Geet stared to cry also. And Maan let her cry as he knew her situation.

An hour later Maan got a message form Vicky to tell him come on Skype they needed talk.

When Geet heard it she got excited like a kid. Maan got happy seeing her smile, a little smile of hers can make him so happy.

He logged in on Skype and said to Geet to wait as they didn't know that she was here.

He saw the whole family there and started talking to them. Vicky was about to give the good news about Brij and Daarji when Maan said that he has a surprise for them.

On the other side Maan was getting deathly glances form Geet and he understood why.

All on other side was confused, what it was. And looked at each other.

DA:- Maan come one say what is, now come one son. Daadi said.

M:- No you have to guess.

Y:- come on bro say it now.

Maan winked at Geet to come here, Geet came and sat between Maan's legs.

Maan took his hand form the cam and showed them there surprise.

All got really shocked and happy seeing Geet.

And stared asking her questions one after the other.

Geet sighed and yelled

G: ONE AT THE TIME!!!!!!!!!!

All became quiet.

G:- Oh come on say now.

Rano started to ask her questions after questions, how she is, if she is eating properly, wakes at time, goes to school, how her class mates are. And Geet answered them patiently. Then all the girls stared asking her about is she had seen, all the dramas and stared discussing about it.

Two hours later:

All girls where still discussing about there serials.

All of them was tried of hearing it and at last Maan said

G:- Geet you have a own computer and a own Skype ID. Can you please go there and discuss about it there.

Geet looked annoyed at Maan

G:- Fine. And went away and so did all girls there too.


please guys give me commnents and new ideas abou track, becouse i can't come up with anything


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dh_riti Goldie

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Posted: 30 October 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
it was a gr8 update. plz before some twist & turns gv us some maneet private moments so dat we can sing mahi mahi on that. aur vaise bhi aaj kal serial mein bhi mahi mahi ko miss kar rahe hain. plz plz plz plz

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