PHIR DILL MILNE LAGGE:AR FF note on pg 72 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sejal719

Hey :) so I just read the part and I like it very much please do write mire sooon:) and add me to ur pm list if you have one.... And I'm going to try and think of a new name for this cause u asked for it lol :p.... Nice start plz write more soon :)

thnx... as u liked it...

n ya i do have a pm list...

n send me a buddy request.... so i'll pm u...

Originally posted by: cutiedevil1

Nice concept.
Charpata part..!!! Even I had started to hate sid!!!
Haha.. I lived how I twisted d whole thing.

Continue soon and thanx for the pm.

actually i dint saw that epi....( n never intend to do so )

only some promo n comments on that part.....

as i cant imagine ridz doing that..... so instead i thought to twist that....according to my way....

Originally posted by: mehak_mangi

nice one..do continue soon.thanx 4 pm😊

thnx dear....

HEY FRIENDS THANKYOU SO MUCH WHO HAVE LIKED MY STORY!! HOPE U LIKE THIS PART TOO... N SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES......

*******************

PART 2

ARMAAN was crying like as in he was the one who made his basket suffer so much!! he was standing in the basketball court bent on his knees as if asking for forgiveness that he believed sid loved ridz.. he was crying and crying... when suddenly atul appears from behind ( hey he doesnt knew that armaan had returned ) and he sees a figure crying badly in the basketball court and was confused ki who is it??

Atul (in mind) : ye bilkul mere bhai jaisa lag raha hai!! pata nahi mai khud ko uske paas jaane se rok kyun nahi paa raha?? aisa lagta hai iske saath mera bhot ghera rishta hai !! mujhe isko dekhkar apne bhai ki yaad aa rahi hai!! par bhagwaan mai nahi chahta ki wo ab yaha aaye apni riddhima ko kisi aur ke saath dekh nahi paayega...

and with this he goes towards that figure and puts his hands on his shoulder......

with this armaan turns.. and is shocked to see armaan!! he thinks that he got to know that riddhima is married thats why.. and tears appears in his eyes too after seeing this condition of armaan and says armaan tum???

Ar : he immediately stands up and hugs atul and is crying and b etween the sobs he is just saying... champ.... riddhima....champ....riddhima...champ ...riddhima

AT : bas kar bhai bas kar!! mai jaanta hun ( thinking that armaan got to know that riddhima is married)

as u know now atul has become strong physically so he carries armaan ( just like a brother lolzzz ) on his back and takes him to his house( ab atul senior doc ban gaya hai atleast ghar to afford kar sakta hai ) ..

and makes him sleep.. and just sits on the other side of the bed caressing his hairs and asking god the reason why his bhai who only brings smile on everyone's face is going through all this???

IN MORNING...

armaan gets up and sees that it is not his home and then atul comes with two mugs of coffee in his hands and gives it to armaan.. and says ja fresh hoke aa jaa ..uske baaad baat karte hai..

armaan goes and freshen up and comes to atul and sits beside him with his closed eyes..

AT : armaan mere bhai kaisa hai?? tu theek to hai na?? hume chodke kahaan chala gaya tha??

AR: champ tu sab jaanta hai na!!

AT : nahi jaanta tabhi to phuch raha hu??

AR: us shootout ke baad jab mujhe hosh aaya tab mujhe pata chala ki mere brain mei spot hai aur uski wajha se mai 2 saalo mei sab kuch bhool jaaunga.. sabse phela khayal mere dill mei aaya ki agar ye sab basket ko pata chala to wo ye she nahi paayegi.. mai jaanta tha ki wo mera saath kabhie nahi chodegi par mai ye bhi janta tha ki aisa karne se uski poori zindagi kharab ho jaayegi... tab maine decide kiya ki mai aisi jagha chala jaaunga jahan mujhe koi bhi naa dhoond paaye!! tum sabse itna door aur aise time pe ki tum sab ko lage ki mai acha insaan nahi hun aur riddhima ko lage ki mai usse kabhie pyaar nahi kar sakta tha.. to maine shashank sir ko riddhima se ye khene ke liye kaha ki mai uska puri zindagii boj nahi utha sakta isliye mai chala gaya.. isse riddhima ko mujhse nafrat ho jaayegi aur mai panchgani ke mental assylum mei shift ho gaya.. meri tabiyat din par din bigadti jaa rahi thi aur tab mujhe pata chala ki riddhima mujhe dhoond rahi hai to mai panchgani ke paas ek gaaon hai wahan chala gaya .. us timme bhi meri haalat bhot kharab thi mai kisi dawaayi ko respond nahi kar rha tha uske baad mujhe riddhima dikhi shayad wo mujhe dhoondte dhoondte aayi thi wo mere ghar mei behosh padi thi maine ek letter likha aur kaha ki hum dono kabhie ek nahi ho sakte hai aur wahaan se chala gaya lekin mai akela nahi gaya tha mere saath mere jeene ki umeed bhi saath mei gayi thi !! mai treatment ko respond karne laga aur meri haalat sudharne lagi.. aur mujhe meri memory bhi waapas mil gayyi aur phir maine socha ki ab mai apni riddhima ke paas jaakar usse maafi maangunga aur apni haalat samjhaunga paar ... par yahan aakar mujhe pata chala ki uski shaadi ho gayi hai( he started crying...) lekin mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki us sid .. us sid ..( anger rose in him and he stands and goes towards the wall) us sid ne to kabhie riddhima se pyaar to kiya hi nahi .. use to apni patni se behave karna bhi nahi aata .. usne riddhima ki izzat ke saath khilwaad karne ki koshish ki... aur maine samjha ki wo usse pyaar karta hai aur main un dono ko milwaane ke koshish kar raha tha kyunki mujhe laga ki meri wajha se un dono ke rishte mei daraar aa gayi hai .. lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki meri basket ko itna zulm sehna padega... ( with this he starts hitting the wall with his fist)

atul comes and stops him and embraces him into a hug!! they both started crying...

AFTER SOMETIME BOTH RELAXES AND THEN

AT : tu riddhima se pyaar karta hai??

AR: haan champ ... ye bhi koi puchne waali baat hai..

AT: riddhima tujhse pyaar karti hai???

AR : haan champ ye to mai jaanta hun par ye bhi jaanta hu ki wo kabhie sid ko divorce nahi degi...

AT : tumne sacha pyaar kiya tha ek dusre se??

AR ( irritated) : champ tu ye kya bakwaas kar raha hai ... tujhe nahi pata ki hum dono ek dusre ke liye jaan bhi de sakte hai!!!

AT : lekin tujhe ye nahi pata ridz kyun nahi divorce de sakti!! tune sirf apne point of view se soch na.. ap mai tujhe riddhima ke point of view se samjhata hun.. ho sakta hai tere bheje mei kuch akal pad jaaye...

riddhima ne ye shaadi apni mom dad ki izzat bachane ke liye kii thi.. yahan pe sabko lagta hai sid ek bhaut mahaan insaan hai jo riddhima se sacha pyaar karta hai aaur usne riddhima ki izzat bachane ke liye usse shaadi kii... yahan tak ki shashank sir ko ko bhi aisa lagta hai.. agar ab wo tumhare aane par sid ko divorce deti hai to sab usse hi galat samjhenge !!! sabko lagega ki ridz aur tumhara pyaar itna selfish hai ki jis insaan ne uski izzat bachayi riddhima uski zindagi barbaad karke tumhare saath jaa rahi hai au yahii nahi usko ye bhi pata hai ki iske liye sab tumhe hi zimmedaar kahenge???

to ab kuch samjh aaya???

AR ( thinking ) : acha to ye baat hai????

now background tune ... the same one when armaan used to play pranks...

AR: iska to simple solution hai and hi winks to atul...

AT: ohhh like that....

AR : ya like that... and he gives a million dollar smile...

*************************

NOW GUPTA HOUSE

riddhima gets up from the bed with a very heavy head and as she was going to washroom she remembers the last night events... and washes her face and thinks ohh shit.. ab sab kya soch rahe honge?? ab pata nahi sid kya karega??? wats next??? and as she goes out of her room .. she sees shashank (SH)and was about to wish him and then he says...

Sh : uth gayi tum!! mujhe tumse ye umeed nahi thi ki tum apne pati ko aise treat karti ho??? mai to usse nazre milane ke kaabil bhi nahi raha ... mujhe siddhaanth ne sab bata diya hai... mujhe nahi pata tha ki jis beti pe mujhe naaz tha wo aise karegi... tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho??

R : par papa..

Sh ( in loud voice ) : ab bhi kuch rhe gaya hai khene ko??? jitni bezatti tumne siddhanath ki kii utni kafi nahi thi ki

R ( crying ) : par papa meri baat to suniye... wo sid galat ..

SH : apni galti siddhaanth ke sir par mat daalo !! ek to uske hum par phele se hi itne ehsaan hai... usne tumhari aur tumhare pariwaar ki izzat bachane ke liye tumse shaadi ki.. aur agar koi jaghda ho bhi gaya aur usne tumhe kuch khe bhi diya to uski public announcement karne ki kya zaroorat thi?? pati patni ke beech to jhagde hote hi rhete hai ... lekin iska matlab ye to nahi ki agar wo tumse gusse mei kuch khe de to tum wahi baat puri duniya ko bataogi....

R( just crying.. ) : says sorry and goes to her room..

AFTER SOMETIME......

RIDDHIMA calls someone but unfortunately the phone is on voicemail... so she decides to leave the message ...

MSG ... - please please ..come back soo.. i need u .. i need u .. please please please diii

******************

as u all know anjie is in US ( as shown in dmg..)

FLORIDA .. CURE HOSPITAL ( guys i dont know if it even exists...)

anjie reads the msg and starts worrying about ridz and thinking God ab kaunsi problem hai meri choti si bhen ki zindagi mei.. pata nahi god aap ache logo ke saath aisa kyun karte hai.. usne to kisi ka kuch nahi bigaada tha na to uske saath hi kyun???

and a tear flows down through her cheek..

suddenly a person comes and sits beside her and asks kya hua anjie??? tum kyun ro rahi ho??

An : pata nahi rahul ridz ki zindagi mei aur kitni problem hai??? why is God so cruel to her???

...YES GUYZ THE PERSON IS NONE OTHER THAN OUR VERY OWN RAHUL... AND HERE NOBODY KNOWS THE REASON Y ARMAAN LEFT RIDDHIMA OR ANYTHING ABOUT SID???

RA: pata nahi anjie hum sabke saath aisa kyun hua ?? mai jaanta hu armaan ko wo aise riddhima ko chodke nahi jaa sakta tha?? pata nahi mera dill kheta hai ki riddhima ne ye shaadi apni marzi se nahi ki!!

AN : rahul mai bhi jaanti hu ki armaan aise nahi jaa sakta !! ek baar uske pyaar par shak kiya tha aur uske baad bhaut pachtayi thi.. par maine bhi riddhima ko yahi yakeen dilane ki koshish ki thi ki armaan ne use dhoka diya hai kyunki uski zindagi wahi ruk gayi thi.. mujhe nahi pata armaan kyu gaya par itna zaroor jaanti hu ki wo jahaan bhi hoga riddhima ke liye tadap raha hoga..

aur mai ye bhi jaanti hu ki riddhima ye shaadi se zyaada khush nahi thi .. par mujhe laga agar papa ne sid ko ridz ke liye chose kiya hai aiur ridz ne haan kardi hai to maybe wo apni life mei aage bad sake...

lekin aaj jab uska msg mila to mujhe lagta hai ridz khush nahi hai ..

rahul mai INDIA ja rahi hu !! mujhe lagta hai ridz ko meri sach mei bhaut zaroorat hai..

RA : mai bhi tumhare saath INDIA aa raha hu!!

AN : rahul tum kyu aa rahe ho?? tum to already yahan settle ho chuke ho??

RA : anjie mai to humesha se hi INDIA mei rhena chahta tha.. par mom dad ki wajha se yahaan aa gaya tha aur shayad muskaan se bhaagne ke liye bhi..

par ab mom dad to hai nahi aur muskaan to patiala mei hai to mai soch rha hun mumbai mei hi settle ho jaaun..

waise bhi koi aur farz to nibha nahi paaya atleast dosti ka to nibha lu?? shayad ek farz to nibha pau aur meri guilt thodi kam ho jaaye..

SO LETS GO TO INDIA.. BUT KISI KO MAT BATANA HUM UNHE SURPRISE KARENGE...

**********

ATUL calls a person

AT : hello

Person : hello hanji aap kaun??

AT : muski yaar tu kitni badal gayi .. apne dost ki aawaaz bhi nahi phechan paayi ..

MU : hello atul.. oye khote tune kaise soch liya ki mai tujhe bhool gayi.. bas tera phone expect nahi kiya tha.. bol aaj itne maheeno baad meri yaad kaise aa gayi?? waise mai jaanti hun tu ek number ka kameena hai koi problem mei phasa hoga tabhie meri yaad aa gayi nahii anjali aa rahi hogi usko patane ke tips lene honge tabhie yaad aa gayi !! ab kuch bolega bhi ??

AT: agar kuch bolne degi tabhie to bolunga!!

MU : haan to maine kab roka hai??

AT : tera hero wapis aa gaya hai??

MU : kya?? kab ?? kaise?? par ridz ki to shaadi... hey bhagwaan ab kya hoga??

Atul tells the whole story ki wat happened to armaan and under wat circumstances riddhima was married and also about sid how he treats riddhima!!

AT : hello muskaan kahaan gayi?? hello

MU( shouting ) :yaar menu to phele hi pata tha ki sid ek number ka kutta kameena hai...ye to us chachundar rahul se bhi gaya guzra insaan hai... isko to mai chodungi nahi... iske chote chote chote chote chotee tukde karke kutto ko daal dungi... nahi nahi kutto ki kya zaroorat haii rahul ko hi daal dungi....haa ye sahi hai hum waise bhi kidnapping to already kar chuke hai... ab murder bhi kar dete hai... n kisi ko kuch pta nahi lgne denge n agar pa bhi lag gaya to saara ilzaam us kankhajure rahul pe daal denge... wow muskaan u r genious..... ek teer se do nishaane...

AT: muskaan chup ho jaa meri maa... n ek baat bta eri har baat rahul se shuru hokar usi par khatm ho jaati hai....

MU: chup baith... maine kab rahul ka naam liya??? tu hi us kankhajure ka baar baar naam le rha tha.....n then suddenly getting emotional...... yar pata nahi humare dosto ki zindagii mei kya likha hai??

inki zindagi to heer ranjha aur romeo juliet se bhi complicated hai!! lekin yaar ab kya karenge??

AT : yaar tu abhi bhi nahi samjhi ...

MU : kya ??... ohh .. haan ... ab samajh aaya ... wo kya hai na bade din ho gaye koi mission pe kaam nahi kiya to samajh nahi aa raha tha.. waise mai jald se jald wahaan aa rahi hu aakhir hero aur heroin dono ko meri bhaut zaroorat hai..

AT: acha chal see u soon..

*********************

hey guys hope u like this....

actually maine armaan ki story isliye daali kyunki mujhe laga dmg mei to uski suffering dikhayi kya dhang se bataayi bhi nahi thi aur ridz ka pov bhi zaroori tha..

n pls guyz do press the like tab n comment tooo....

it really means a lot.....

Edited by gupta.aditi20 - 13 years ago

very nice concept
liked it
gr8 update
continue soon
add me to ur pm list

note:

hey guys pls send me a buddy request for all those wants pms....

hey i read this before on dmg blog, par loved it then and loved it again now lol!

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

hey i read this before on dmg blog, par loved it then and loved it again now lol!

thnx... i'll soon post more parts.....

actually there all wanted arsh... so i just stopped writing.....

Originally posted by: mohit_aggarwal

very nice concept
liked it
gr8 update
continue soon
add me to ur pm list

thnx yaar

pls send me buddy request if u want pms

VERY GOOD UPDATE.YOU MAKE SID SO BAD.BUT I LOVE IT.PLS CONTINUE SOON.