Bhavanab IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Not only him ... Ravi forgot to write review of his story once telling which was his LOL...

Astonish na yaar ... itna khatarnaak nahi likhegi Vis hopefully !!!!

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visrom Coolbie

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by astonish

Then Vis... I was looking at the the older posts and wondering...
What plot every1 would have created...  STopped at the point where you said you watched daya ke dulhan ka raaz...

What's brewing??? Winksuhaani ne kahaa ki... you should be present in the story..
so kahin..abhi sir ko kidnap karke...shaadi karke  ...abhijeet ke dulhan ka raaz toh nahi likh diya ???Tongue


Edited by visrom - 04 May 2011 at 1:33am

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged

Abhijeet ki dulhan ka raaz(according to Astonish's idea)

Abhijeet finds himself tied to a chair and a girl appears.
Abhijeet : Kaun ho tum?
Girl: Yeh important nahinhai ki main kaun hoon...yeh important hai ki main kya chahti hoon.
Abhijeet: Ek CID officer se baat karne ki tameez nahin hai?
Akaash neela hota hai, par June mein baadal aate hain...aur tum bohot khoobsoorat ho...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Girl: Bas mujhe yahi sunna tha. Mujhse shaadi kar lo.
Abhijeet: Yeh kya hai, hain??  Mainbas mazaak kar raha tha...aur tum shaadi ki baat kar rahi ho?
Girl: Agar tumne shaadi nahin ki, toh tumhare dost Daya ko goli se uda doongi.
And they reveal in true bollywood style a video recording showing Daya tied up to a wall and some others pointing a gun at him.
Abhijeet: Theek hai...tum Daya ko chod do, main tumse shaadi karta hoon.
And we see an elaborate wedding.
Later in the bureau...
ACP: Daya, tum choot gaye?
Daya: haan sir...pata nahin un logon ne mujhe itni aasani se kaise chod di
Abhijeet walks in with a depressed expression.
Daya: Arey Abhijeet, tum bhi choot gaye? itna udaas kyon ho?
Abhijeet: Haan main choot toh gaya, lekin zindagi bhar ke liye qaidi ban gaya. Ouch

Edited by visrom - 04 May 2011 at 1:55am

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NandiniRaizadaa IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Visrom...what a story !!!ROFL
Bhavanab IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Vizzyy !!!! Yeh kya likha tumne ???? No no no ... it's hillarious but imagining it is making me scared !!!!

But haan the last dialogue was funny and I was imagining a true saas bahu style thingy in store !!! Luckily .. TP gal is now Kaajal .. so thinking it impossible Tongue !!!

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged
astonish IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Mine is a mix of
1. Stolen Dynamite, AKA
2. Daya ki shaadi (sort of...Wink)
3. Injured Witness
4. Talking parrot, Daya's abduction (this part I think everyone has to..because the story theme is like that)
5. Bomb robbery
...and an old member comes back too...keep guessing who!!! Tongue
LOL Good one
Daya ki shaadi sort of... Talking parrot and Daya's abduction done...
Bomb Roberry last scene can be return of abhi sir and daya sir back to bureau...Only that there is no Tongue
Wondering what scenes from Stolen Dynamite... Injured witness  Wink

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