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Kahani_Ki_Rani
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Joined: 05 January 2008
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My parts are in red... feel free to change anything you like... I really don't mind!!
This unusual tale started many years ago with soul...A soul (Neha/Nivi) looking for her body and her journey far across the realms of the 13 lost worlds. Unknown to her the Pin man & his gang of holy hunters are following her. This gang using their unique style and magical piercings to capture and destroy their victims, have become known throughout the 13 world as the most fierce and deadly bounty hunters that ever lived. Tthey were following her for her mysterious powers that she is yet to know of.
In her lonely quest of body searching she gets trapped between the blades of the wolverine of the gang and to her luck....and ninja wearing black comes to her rescue.
With a few ninja kicks the gang member is thrown through several walls (true 70/80/90s style Indian action)
"Are you ok? Ninja guy ask
"You can see me?" Nivi back
"Did you hit your head...ofcourse I can see you"
"I'm ok thanks" She replies in shock and confusion to why he can see her. The gang member had special weapons to catch souls but he seems normal why can he see her.
She decides to keep it to herself and doesnt want to enclose her weakness to a stranger even if the stranger helped her. After some talking Nivi decides to ask the ninija to become her bodyguard...because she is worried that attacks on her were increasing... Ninja disagree first but when he finds out about her ability to cross realms, he readily agree.
Because he too has a secret curse he wants to get rid of...and travelling the realms could help him.
On the corner of the screen a pair of red eyes flash...someone or something is closly following the ninija.
The red eyes focus on the direction of the Nivi and Ninja and then the eyes fade into the shadows.
As Nivi and the Ninja slowly walk towards the direction of the Sun knowing it would lead them to where the Ocean, Earth and Sky meets.... where this world ends and the 1st lost world known as Shahkaj (Short for shahruck & Kajol () begins.
The Ninja, confused as to how Nivi gained her ability to cross in to the lost worlds decided to ask her questions, hoping she would reveal her secrets....
"Ermm" said the Ninja
Nivi looks towards the Ninja.
"Did you say something?" ask's Nivi
"Yeah... I did... how did you exactly lose your body? ... I mean how does that happen?" replied the Ninja
Nivi looks at the Ninja....staring deeply into his eyes wondering... thinking... should she trust him?... a man who saved her life, a man whose helping her still, a man who she's mysteriously drawn to. As she continued to stare hypnotically into his eyes, the Ninja cheekily said "i only asked because your body might have run away and if that's what happened I'd like to be warned in case it happens to me"
Nivi smiled back saying "no that's not what happened"
"I lost my body because I thought I was doing a good deed and it all went wrong. A forth night ago I went to sleep and dreamt the strangest dream. In this dream there was a man named Freddy who asked me if I was willing to sacrifice a small unimportant part of me that I wouldn't miss in exchange for eternal happiness. Although I didn't need it for myself I thought that my sister whose sad face I can never see could do with some happiness so I said ok. He took me to a room where in front of him was a tattered book, he started reading and I heard him chant that to gain eternal happiness my soul would be traded... I shouted my body needs my soul and so do i.... how do I live without my soul?... he smiled and then I knew I was never going to leave this place.... I prayed I woke up, I screamed, I shouted but nothing!.... no one came to help me... I knew then that I was alone.... I ran up to him hitting him with all my power he shouted your ruining my chant, if its broken now I don't know what will happen but it won't be good I promise you!.... suddenly I woke up, panting, shivering I felt a little better thinking it was all a dream... only to find out my dream wasn't a dream it was a nightmare and now my nightmare had become real... I had no body and nobody could help me."
The ninja looked at her with a slight sadness in his eyes like he knew what it was like to have his life ruined.
My parts pretty serious 
... i though I'd start the Pyar Ki Kahani......& adventure... will add comedy next time!!
Feel free to delete & change what
you want
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I go a little crazy expressive at times........today I am J K Rowling!!
Sunshine234
Senior Member
Joined: 10 March 2011
Posts: 261
Hey Rani, Bahar! Good weekends??
Bahar I loved Divya having the big head (I can actually imagine it) and smallish body'.everyone's cursed and I forgot about Sid, and I agree Rani he should definitely have a key role in this story as CCBM haven't done much for him. So will Sid be Virens relative or no? I like him being a vampire'he can finally have the transition period from GOOD to EVIL (the guy needs some attention) and back to good if you want
) blah blah blah'.you know typical bollywood filmy scene
. Oh and then the group of bad people hold him down whilst the main person hits him and then Kinshuk will somehow flings them all off. So I think he'll be able to handle it'instead of thinking that Viren is going to take his mask of & show his face to Nivi in a lovely dovey way.....I think something bad is going to happen & then Virens face is going to be exposed in a dramatic way......'
Like they did in spider man? Well I can't remember all his face being revealed but I remember the scene when he gets stuck and Kristen Dunst sort of lifts his mask a little and then it's all smoochey smoochey from there
. Can't imagine Nivi doing that though'.she's unfortunately not besharam enough
I love Shahkaj as the first lost world'.this is truly Bollywood inspired 
'.but just let me know if I did it wrong'.I'll add my bit now
Sunshine234
Senior Member
Joined: 10 March 2011
Posts: 261
This unusual tale started many years ago with soul...A soul (Neha/Nivi) looking for her body and her journey far across the realms of the 13 lost worlds. Unknown to her the Pin man & his gang of holy hunters are following her. This gang using their unique style and magical piercings to capture and destroy their victims, have become known throughout the 13 world as the most fierce and deadly bounty hunters that ever lived. Tthey were following her for her mysterious powers that she is yet to know of.
In her lonely quest of body searching she gets trapped between the blades of the wolverine of the gang and to her luck....and ninja wearing black comes to her rescue.
With a few ninja kicks the gang member is thrown through several walls (true 70/80/90s style Indian action)
"Are you ok? Ninja guy ask
"You can see me?" Nivi back
"Did you hit your head...ofcourse I can see you"
"I'm ok thanks" She replies in shock and confusion to why he can see her. The gang member had special weapons to catch souls but he seems normal why can he see her.
She decides to keep it to herself and doesnt want to enclose her weakness to a stranger even if the stranger helped her. After some talking Nivi decides to ask the ninija to become her bodyguard...because she is worried that attacks on her were increasing... Ninja disagree first but when he finds out about her ability to cross realms, he readily agree.
Because he too has a secret curse he wants to get rid of...and travelling the realms could help him.
On the corner of the screen a pair of red eyes flash...someone or something is closly following the ninija.
The red eyes focus on the direction of the Nivi and Ninja and then the eyes fade into the shadows.
As Nivi and the Ninja slowly walk towards the direction of the Sun knowing it would lead them to where the Ocean, Earth and Sky meets.... where this world ends and the 1st lost world known as Shahkaj (Short for shahruck & Kajol () begins.
The Ninja, confused as to how Nivi gained her ability to cross in to the lost worlds decided to ask her questions, hoping she would reveal her secrets....
"Ermm" said the Ninja
Nivi looks towards the Ninja.
"Did you say something?" ask's Nivi
"Yeah... I did... how did you exactly lose your body? ... I mean how does that happen?" replied the Ninja
Nivi looks at the Ninja....staring deeply into his eyes wondering... thinking... should she trust him?... a man who saved her life, a man whose helping her still, a man who she's mysteriously drawn to. As she continued to stare hypnotically into his eyes, the Ninja cheekily said "i only asked because your body might have run away and if that's what happened I'd like to be warned in case it happens to me"
Nivi smiled back saying "no that's not what happened"
"I lost my body because I thought I was doing a good deed and it all went wrong. A forth night ago I went to sleep and dreamt the strangest dream. In this dream there was a man named Freddy who asked me if I was willing to sacrifice a small unimportant part of me that I wouldn't miss in exchange for eternal happiness. Although I didn't need it for myself I thought that my sister whose sad face I can never see could do with some happiness so I said ok. He took me to a room where in front of him was a tattered book, he started reading and I heard him chant that to gain eternal happiness my soul would be traded... I shouted my body needs my soul and so do i.... how do I live without my soul?... he smiled and then I knew I was never going to leave this place.... I prayed I woke up, I screamed, I shouted but nothing!.... no one came to help me... I knew then that I was alone.... I ran up to him hitting him with all my power he shouted your ruining my chant, if its broken now I don't know what will happen but it won't be good I promise you!.... suddenly I woke up, panting, shivering I felt a little better thinking it was all a dream... only to find out my dream wasn't a dream it was a nightmare and now my nightmare had become real... I had no body and nobody could help me."
The ninja looked at her with a slight sadness in his eyes like he knew what it was like to have his life ruined.
peacefulblossom
Senior Member
Joined: 19 January 2011
Posts: 834
Its going places.but ninja moves 
...he doesnt need to worry he has Nivi the nurse him. And 70/80s action scenes lol....everyones a superman there ....I think Neha will have a heart attack before she does that scene. ...the poor actors are going to die trying to flight them all ...but what happened to big head Divya then? Whos looking after her? Or maybe after the curse she got trapped with some circus people and the heros will get to that world and save her (indian movie with circus anyone?)?...and then Freddy/JW. Maybe we should stick to CCMB names and describe the characters. Will add some description to story ...
Sunshine234
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Joined: 10 March 2011
Posts: 261
at cicus people! I was thinking Sid could turn into a vampire during the story, possibly due to big head and then circus people take her....aaaaahhh maan can't we just leave her in circus land...she'll fit right in, a mix between katrina and salman names). You can use others lol, it was just a spur of the moment thing Thanks Bahar, I wanted to feel sympathy for the guy and like Rani said in one of the earlier posts, that its uaully a heartbreak that makes them evil....so YEP he sort of has a heart somewhere deep down
peacefulblossom
Senior Member
Joined: 19 January 2011
Posts: 834
at cicus people! I was thinking Sid could turn into a vampire during the story, possibly due to big head and then circus people take her....aaaaahhh maan can't we just leave her in circus land...she'll fit right in...we'll make her alittle bit nicer in our story....maybe after all them years in circus she turned nicer. I agree looks like Indian movie/serial creators love the lightening effect. And also the actress getting scared of the lightening ....I want to see a scene with the actor getting scared of the lightening and grabbing the girl , Maybe he was always a ninja and somehow Sid turned into a vampire and got stuck with Viren....need to work this one out. Any ideas?, a mix between katrina and salman names). You can use others lol, it was just a spur of the moment thingHavent they broken up already? Imagine we create a world with them and they are killing eachother....thats a idea. The heartbreak world. Trying to think of a Salman movie that has heartbreak ... Thanks Bahar, I wanted to feel sympathy for the guy and like Rani said in one of the earlier posts, that its uaully a heartbreak that makes them evil....so YEP he sort of has a heart somewhere deep down We are at it again....developing the evilness of the story but wheres the main characters storyline
Sunshine234
Senior Member
Joined: 10 March 2011
Posts: 261
Viren jumping into Nivis arms when he gets scared of lightening....he'd probably just fall right through her on the floor cuz she's just a soul and all. I can actually imagine that and a alittle fire keeping them warm....and then nivis in control as he is acting like the girl if that helps lol....I want to see salman playing evil roles....i think he'd be really good in them. and then ninja mard rescues her but gets scratched by freddys claws in the process leading for something to happen....oooo the uncovering of his face!!!! I'm too attached to freddy
, thats a little spooky! Theres little about the leads here and more about evil, our state of minds are not right...I blame society
peacefulblossom
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Joined: 19 January 2011
Posts: 834
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