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Kahani_Ki_Rani
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All story bits are in purple 
........ I just clicked on edit to write whoa what a long post!!! i wrote back to both you...... Bahar & pooja in the same post .......
... I will change it to two now... hope it doesn't get confusing
@ Bahar
I just saw your posts & though if I quote you' it's
gonna be a crazy long what where huh post again...... don't wanna scare people with the length of out posts this
one might be confusing coz I'm reading yours and then replying on a new post!!.... Here goes .... hope it works!!
Do you think people are getting scared of our craziness??
And yeah definitely a scene of the piercing gang swimming .....hope it's not to dangerous for them what with the knife's stuck in no.1 nose
& bars in no. 2 face'....I think the lady would be safe!!
Don't evil people go evil because of love storys ... there heart gets broken & they go crazy ... well that's what I've learn't from the serial world 
The vampire being the grey parallel lead sounds good... 
'
hope he turns good in the end...maybe because of his lady friend 
.... double
chick flick ending
I like the soul idea!!.... A romance of a Soul & Ninja... never heard of that before ....I approve
Haha my knowledge about Indian dramas is a little limited
too.... I watch quite a few but not on a regular basis.... I'm sure they all have the same storyline
though .....Bollywood sounds better' I like DDLJ'
'.Loving your story so far...... will add like a next part idea type to it when I have more time!! (am preparing for tomorrow)... got a birthday party to go to at 6
... then meeting friends for my third birthday party at half 7 ... i can't even remember how long it's been since my birthday.. & going bowling at 1 with family & at 3 o' clock am going to another town to pick up a cake for the 6 o clock birthday party still trying to figure out how am going to do it all .. p.s. I only just realised I', really bad at wrapping presents!!
Your questions in the story so far..... Let's see if I can add
idea's there whilst i have time'
Neha lost her body because she sacrificed it (like Nivi does
) for happiness.... because Freddy Kruger with his magical spell casting powers
(I like that Freddy idea!!) tricked her when she was sleeping into thinking that
if she wanted to find eternal happiness (or a good night sleep ) then she
would have to give something to him. Neha not realising it was her soul that
Freddy wanted said 'ok'' ............then when Neha found out, she tried to stop him....in all
the confusion Freddy said the spell wrong (like one or two words wrong) &
instead of the soul going.... the body went instead and the soul (Neha) got lots
of powers including the ability to cross worlds, but she doesn't know about
them yet like you said
The bounty hunters name errm 
....... holy hunter's (can't think of
better at the moment will try after my brain has recharged )
I like the name 'hoops' or 'Metal Face Metalica' or 'Pin man' for
the leader of the gang!! I'm not sure about what his magical powers could be'
but he should be able to kill people using his face as a weapon
Keep the name 'Wolverine' for the bar face dude........ that names
hilarious on him!!
Kahani_Ki_Rani
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@ Pooja
Hiya....... I'm Rani
I like the DDLJ Field scene......... I'm imagining it & laughing to myself!!.......mum keeps looking at me like I've gone crazy
And sorry NO CLOWNS PLEASE!!
... Especially not IT....... I'm scared of clowns because of IT....... I watched it when I was younger to....... The clown picture really scares me so after Bahar's seen it can you either put a smaller one on or take it off please!!...... I'm really scared of clowns!!... proper phobia!! ... (am actually writing on word because when I scroll down on your post I can see the top of the picture!!)..... I also work with children & when a clown entertainer come's in I have to hide in the office coz I get freaked out!! ...everyone thinks I'm really weird!!
Hope you don't mind sorry!! ..
anyway......away from clowns (happy thoughts)
My mate......he's got a stretcher piercing he told me how they do it & I was about to throw up!!........I don't like them at all 
I think too many piercings look freaky but when I see a freaky piercing I tend to go up to the person & ask them about it........most of them are pretty nice people!!.... only met one idiot & then I was like well if you didn't want to get noticed why have such a stupid thing on your face ....he really annoyed me
piercing guy...Hazard .......bet he gets his own seat on the bus
To add onto my bit about Freddy trying to steal Neha's soul (posted above in purple).....
' that could be the reason why' because evil Cinderella (CC) stole it from him ........ & he needs a soul now...........I love the evil Cinderella being in love with then piercing gang leader....... but no matter how weird he looks & probably is how can he love evil Cinderella (CC)......... after listening to her for a few days he'd be banging his head against the wall....... going the woman doesn't listen to anyone!!
Ninja boy ........don't you mean Ninja Mard!! ....... also can our Ninja's not wear face masks that show just the eyes........ I think I prefer the face 
And about the psychologically unfit phrase!!........ It's alright were all crazy here .......... that's why our story is going to be the greatest story ever told!!
welcome to our world
peacefulblossom
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...with eyes showing (Kinshuk has nice eyes)...then we can have a dramatic love scene between Soul and ninja when his face gets uncovered . Slow motion and eye contact and all Maybe some dancing around too(Rani's word), gets injured and she starts nursing.
Sunshine234
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@ Rani: lol sorry! Had no idea about the clown phobia, I've taken it down now but 'IT' could very well do permanent damage like that at a young age.
Is the stretcher, the one the big empty holes? But the people covered with piercings are usually really nice...thank god I've only met the nice ones. If I came into contact with a mean one, he'd probably just scare me to the core! Haha I know what you mean, if you don't want to be noticed much, learn how to blend in (face wise).
). Bahar as long as during the the story his mask does come offthat just made me laugh, mum and dad just giving me some looks as well like what the hell's wrong with her....funny enough I can actually imagine pin face man in that scene with CC and banging his head against the wall, he'd probably pin his face to wall accidently in the process
Hey Bahar, clown pic taken down and out the story lol
Have you seen Alice in Wonderland? Is there a possible slot for the elder sister with BIG HEAD? I quite liked her weirdly sized head
Umm who are the holy hunters? I love the reason behind Nehas lost soul....very creative!
peacefulblossom
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@ Rani: lol sorry! Had no idea about the clown phobia, I've taken it down now but 'IT' could very well do permanent damage like that at a young age.
Bless you missed our other conv when you were doing your exams. Before i forget Good luck with your results
Is the stretcher, the one the big empty holes? But the people covered with piercings are usually really nice...thank god I've only met the nice ones. If I came into contact with a mean one, he'd probably just scare me to the core! Haha I know what you mean, if you don't want to be noticed much, learn how to blend in (face wise).
I havent meet many people/if any with crazy piercing like this....obviously not seen much of the world
). Bahar as long as during the the story his mask does come off...or have the face exposed scene quickly.that just made me laugh, mum and dad just giving me some looks as well like what the hell's wrong with her....funny enough I can actually imagine pin face man in that scene with CC and banging his head against the wall, he'd probably pin his face to wall accidently in the process
I burst out laughing with every post too Good job I am in my own room and no one is hearing me
Have you seen Alice in Wonderland? Is there a possible slot for the elder sister with BIG HEAD? I quite liked her weirdly sized head
lol....thats interesting. Whos the older sister?
Umm who are the holy hunters? I love the reason behind Nehas lost soul....very creative!
Holy hunters are the piercing dudes gang name I like the Nehas losing her body story too
LOL
Sunshine234
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@ Rani: lol sorry! Had no idea about the clown phobia, I've taken it down now but 'IT' could very well do permanent damage like that at a young age.
Bless you missed our other conv when you were doing your exams. Before i forget Good luck with your results
! Haha I know what you mean, if you don't want to be noticed much, learn how to blend in (face wise).I havent meet many people/if any with crazy piercing like this....obviously not seen much of the world
I usually just say to everyone that I don't get out much which is true...I'm more of an innie than an outie. The only reason I know a few mega piercing people are because of my brother but they are in most cases really nice
). Bahar as long as during the the story his mask does come off...or have the face exposed scene quickly. thats alright then as long as his face his shown quickly
(sorry girly moment)that just made me laugh, mum and dad just giving me some looks as well like what the hell's wrong with her....funny enough I can actually imagine pin face man in that scene with CC and banging his head against the wall, he'd probably pin his face to wall accidently in the process
I burst out laughing with every post too Good job I am in my own room and no one is hearing me
lol....thats interesting. Whos the older sister?
Maybe CC can sing 'Sheila ki Jawani' or 'Zor ka Jhatka' to him or actually 'Munni Badnam Hui' would probably suit her more for Pin Man....along with attempting the dance moves...that would just have me on the floor laughing if we ever get to see that. Imagine the look on Pin face...what the hell??? And then Rani's idea of banging his head in the wall
LOL...I'll have to read the rest when I'm alone so I still have a chance of family thinking I'm partly sane.)
peacefulblossom
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...I keep indoor in at home...but love travelling. . Lets take some ideas from CCBM . Before the soul taking part...Nivi and Sid liked eachother....Divya likes Sid...Nivi wants to sacrifice her love for Divya. Hence goes to JW to wish for Divya's eternal happiness (Nivi would never go for her own eternal happiness).....the spell goes wrong....JW e.g. freddy gets annoyed and curses Divya....rather then giving her eternal happiness....gives her a big head small body....and Sid is looking for Nivi....and looking after Divya btw with CC and Pin face.....the first post was mostly Bani's (Omshanti111). We end up starting two stories. ....Had fun writing it. Then Bani got busy and was forgotten. ...liking the vampires ninja and ghost and singing and dancing.
Kahani_Ki_Rani
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I'm back!!!... and 'wow' you two have been busy ..... I think this is gonna
be one of those crazy long posts again!! .....this time I am going to try replying
to you both on the same post .....wish me luck!!
@ Bahar & Pooja
Sorry for the extremely late reply..... had a crazy weekend .....a
super busy Saturday & today's mother's day so been busy with the family
celebrating!!
I did run away Bahar .....but I accidently ran in a circle & found myself
back on this thread again .....luckily no clowns here by then!!!.......... Thanks for taking the IT picture off Pooja....clowns
Urghhhhh!!... My brothers & sister told me IT was a comedy when I was
little & made me watch it!!... They were evil back then ..... been scared of
clowns ever since!!...
Yep the stretcher is the big empty hole one. My friend has one and I think it looks really horrid!!
I noticed the whole developing the evil characters love
tales but we haven't even started on the love story of the leads ..... I'm a
little scared of how our brains work now .... were more interested in the evil characters
then the lead's!!...
....well just because he is a ninja & he has to play the
part....I think we should show just the eyes..... by the way anyone know how good
kinshuk is in his action sequences .... don't wanna hurt the man with all the
kung fu he's gonna have to do in his ninja outfit ....
And then later I like Bahars idea of the whole face being
shown scene & agree with Pooja have a face revealed quick like in the first
15 minutes of the character being introduced ..... eye contact & slow motion
are good ... but no dramatic shots of anyone else that's in the place & no
lightening noises ..... I always wonder why serials make background lightening noises
in dramatic scenes!! ... see am going evil again ...instead of thinking
that Viren is going to take his mask of & show his face to Nivi in a lovely dovey way.....I think
something bad is going to happen & then Virens face is going to be exposed
in a dramatic way......
By the way any of you two notice we have way to many bad
people!! ..... Freddy, Evil Cinderella, The Vampire (well he's actually grey!! ),
Pin man & his holy hunters!! ... In the serial world our story could last
about 10 years!! .......
Haha I forgot about all the pins in his head ....... now I'm
imagining him stuck to a wall. ......poor man stuck to the wall so he can't even
escape CC
Evil CC trying to entice the Pin man (is this part horror or
comedy??).... I would pay serious money to see that ........
'Munni Badnam Hui' would probably suit her more for Pin Man...along with attempting the dance moves...that would just have me on the floor laughing if we ever get to see that. Imagine the look on Pin face...what the hell??? And then Rani's idea of banging his head in the wall
That scene would be epic...I'm laughing so much
I haven't seen Alice in wonderland....but a sister with a big
head sounds cool.... I think she'll fit right in!! & Bahar I like your Divya
idea... I love how everyone is cursed .... Is sid
cursed too?? .... he should be.... don't want the poor man to feel left out... like
he is in CCBM .... Maybe he could be the vampire & he's attached to Viren
but he's actually following Nivi!!
Talking about innies & outies.... am more of an outie ....
I'm almost always out!!..... and dragging people out too!!... Only bad thing is
the weather .... it's kind of crap here!!... but then I take my car & go
for a drive.... I love just leaving the house... with no plans & no idea what I'm
going to do.... I've ended up seeing some amazing places!!.... not been out the country
recently though 
...I love going
travelling & I'm more of a 'we paid money so we gotta see & experience
as much of this country life as possible'... people say I'm way too hyperactive on holiday!!
I will write my bit into the story on the next post!!... will quote from you Bahar!!... then Pooja if you like can write your section in to the story by quoting my post (with my added bits in it)....... does this make sense??...this ya this ....
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