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peacefulblossom
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Pooja's invention
Sunshine234
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Kahani_Ki_Rani
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....kinda funny since we are like totally new members compared to you Rani....... because if you are when I write I shall put you in the story (don't know how yet!!
....... but it shall be revenge!!)... just kidding before you stick me in the story!!... I forgot for a moment you were writing first.... I'll be extra nice now!!
.... haha yep my snooper abilities did me no favours in being promoted ...... it took me roughly 4 years to get this far 
I wish the creators wouldnt spoil the stories ... but i keep watching more... i think my brain is broken... i try to stop watching any & it's like nah... watch another one and the cycle repeats... i got one for you to watch actually its called 'Apno Ke Liye Geeta Ka Dharmyudh' on Zee TV..... I really dislike it but for some reason I can't stop watching it
....everyone including the leads annoy me...... to be honest no matter how cursed you could be..... I can't let you be tortured with that serial 
... it kills brain cells & promotes anger Liking the water idea.... i swear the more this story moves forward the more evil we get ...... i love how no one is thinking of the leads yet... i can imagine serial storyteller going crazy with there story like us (except their sense of humour is a lot drier)... no wonder the villians always get more screen time then the leads in serials... i always wondered why that happened... now i know...... oh the joys of writing about the villian's
...so going to give up until tomorrow and hopefully get some will power back again.......I usually quote crazily coz I miss like 15 posts. & try to reply to them all in one post... then i have a super long post that confusing... my bad!!
........you all must have inherited posting powers when you became senior members... I'm hoping to get mine in the next few days!!...... & although i don't think it is... I swear it feels like I'm in different time zone to all you lot...
Kahani_Ki_Rani
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LOL I was just catching up on CCBM (todays part) and it all lovey dovey and then CC comes up on the screen and I burst out laughing, all I can think of is WITCH WITCH! WE'RE GOING TO KILLLL YOUUUU' hehe...I don't think I can ever take her parts seriously from now on
we are all evil & now I'm going to think that too...... glad you didn't say that out loud....from what you've told me I can imagine your family's reaction if you did ...
Mr Miyagi having an affair with a vampire lady and Sid being his love child ... & Dadi finding out & asking Freddy for super powers to take revenge...Superdadi physically abusing Mr Miyagi with her endless supply of chappals ....Mr Miyagi battered & in fear running away & being captured by pirates & then she misses him and changes her ways ... omg what a story ........ I love Sid being the illegitimate love child of Mr Miyagi... Sid is half vampire & half human with a secret ability to be able to learn karate..... he could be the next karate kid.... he should also be a daywalker!!
........when dadi gets her powers they should show her sewing her own Superdadi suit &............also she should have her own background superhero theme tune going on when she appears in the suit... I'm loving dadi... a victim of betrayal by her husband who chooses not to be a doormat & punishes him by beating him... that's not evil its called justice!!
Haha I liked that we're giving CC a slow death and then when you start thinking 'aww she's finally good'....'BANG' pin man kills her. Any reason is a good enough reason to kill CC (and Nandu has eclipse due to her....SHE NEEDS TO PAY!) Nandu would go mental if both bangs fall off, he can go on a killing spree and fight big head as well (she's such an easy target)
maybe Nandu can be the serial killer after he loses his bangs ... he goes crazy... whoa wait i just realised the serial killer's big heads love interest & so does that mean Nandu wins against Sid in the fight for her love ... maybe when Big head finally saw his average head bang-less she fell in love with the handsome face behind it I really don't know if I can digest it all
lost and found items..... i can just imagine the serial killer going casually..... "oh a chappal.... i'll put that in my bag for future use"..... i think my mind is finally warped
Sunshine234
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Joined: 10 March 2011
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My family already think I'm insane and even more now because of the sudden increase in random laugh attacks
....so I'd like to say thank you in advance...you're probably going to have me sent to an asylum soon
) but not with chappals....Instead she pushes him out during the day (this happens numerous times whenever he tries to attack)....obviously Sid will be in a great deal of pain....sid can turn into ash if he wants....dadi laughs, sweeps him up and then brings him back inside to reform on his own...whilst that's happening dadi won't be worried of step child trying to kill her. So that's another reason she wants Mr Miyagi back.....sid and dadi have sort of a love hate relationship happening
........when dadi gets her powers they should show her sewing her own Superdadi suit &............also she should have her own background superhero theme tune going on when she appears in the suit
I can just imagine it...dadi flying across the TV screen with her tune playing and shooting lasers out her glasses. Classic, when she's not fighting evil she; sews suits, refills her chappal supply, re-adjusts the laser beams. I just had a sudden thought, during the 'dadi and pin man showdown', imagine dadi spinning pin man in the air and then flinging him across the room'.but during the spinning his pins get stuck in dadis suit'.all hells going to break loose if Dadi needs to re-stitch'.poor pin man never had a chance against dadi
a victim of betrayal by her husband who chooses not to be a doormat & punishes him by beating him... that's not evil its called justice!!
it sound like your advertising to sell her'.beware! superdadi might unleash herself on you
maybe Nandu can be the serial killer after he loses his bangs ... he goes crazy... whoa wait i just realised the serial killer's big heads love interest & so does that mean Nandu wins against Sid in the fight for her love ... maybe when Big head finally saw his average head bang-less she fell in love with the handsome face behind it I really don't know if I can digest it all
my stomach hurts laughing soo much! I know what you mean this story's just going to a whole new level'and just when I was about to say I want an alien or the boogey man/ boogey girl in the story'
LOL I'm loving Nandu as a serial killer because he lost his bangs'that's one hell of an attachment. Sid can lose the fight, I mean he's going to be very weak and highly depressed because he's being beaten and disintegrating on a daily basis. Awww big head accepts Nandu with his insecurities but he should continue trying to destroy the head until one day he just gives up in exhaustion'.omg what would wouldn't their baby inherit from them
Funny enough I can imagine after a few year of marriage, Nandu still collecting items, saying "oh a chappal.... i'll put that in my bag for future use" coming home and attempting to murder the head whilst big head sleeps peacefully! That's what you call undying passion'
peacefulblossom
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This unusual tale started many years ago with soul...A soul Nivi looking for her body and her journey far across the realms of the 13 lost worlds. Unknown to her the Pin man & his gang of holy hunters are following her. This gang using their unique style and magical piercings to capture and destroy their victims, have become known throughout the 13 world as the most fierce and deadly bounty hunters that ever lived. Tthey were following her for her mysterious powers that she is yet to know of.
In her lonely quest of body searching she gets trapped between the blades of the wolverine of the gang and to her luck....and ninja wearing black comes to her rescue.
With a few ninja kicks the gang member is thrown through several walls (true 70/80/90s style Indian action) He was covered in dark top to toe. The only thing you could see is his piercing wild brown eyes. If one looked deeply inside them eyes you would see a wounded and lonely soul.
"Are you ok? Ninja guy ask
"You can see me?" Nivi back
"Did you hit your head...ofcourse I can see you"
"I'm ok thanks" She replies in shock and confusion to why he can see her. The gang member had special weapons to catch souls but he seems normal why can he see her.
She decides to keep it to herself and doesnt want to enclose her weakness to a stranger even if the stranger helped her. After some talking Nivi decides to ask the ninija to become her bodyguard...because she is worried that attacks on her were increasing... Ninja disagree first but when he finds out about her ability to cross realms, he readily agree.
Because he too has a secret curse he wants to get rid of...and travelling the realms could help him.
On the corner of the screen a pair of red eyes flash...someone or something is closly following the ninija.
The red eyes focus on the direction of the Nivi and Ninja and then the eyes fade into the shadows.
As Nivi and the Ninja slowly walk towards the direction of the Sun knowing it would lead them to where the Ocean, Earth and Sky meets.... where this world ends and the 1st lost world known as Shahkaj (Short for shahruck & Kajol ) begins.
The Ninja, confused as to how Nivi gained her ability to cross in to the lost worlds decided to ask her questions, hoping she would reveal her secrets....
"Ermm" said the Ninja
Nivi looks towards the Ninja.
"Did you say something?" ask's Nivi
"Yeah... I did... how did you exactly lose your body? ... I mean how does that happen?" replied the Ninja
Nivi looks at the Ninja....staring deeply into his eyes wondering... thinking... should she trust him?... a man who saved her life, a man whose helping her still, a man who she's mysteriously drawn to. As she continued to stare hypnotically into his eyes, the Ninja cheekily said "i only asked because your body might have run away and if that's what happened I'd like to be warned in case it happens to me"
Nivi smiled back saying "no that's not what happened"
"I lost my body because I thought I was doing a good deed and it all went wrong. A forth night ago I went to sleep and dreamt the strangest dream. In this dream there was a man named Jawahal who asked me if I was willing to sacrifice a small unimportant part of me that I wouldn't miss in exchange for eternal happiness. Although I didn't need it for myself I thought that my sister whose sad face I can never see could do with some happiness so I said ok. He took me to a room where in front of him was a tattered book, he started reading and I heard him chant that to gain eternal happiness my soul would be traded... I shouted my body needs my soul and so do i.... how do I live without my soul?... he smiled and then I knew I was never going to leave this place.... I prayed I woke up, I screamed, I shouted but nothing!.... no one came to help me... I knew then that I was alone.... I ran up to him hitting him with all my power he shouted your ruining my chant, if its broken now I don't know what will happen but it won't be good I promise you!.... suddenly I woke up, panting, shivering I felt a little better thinking it was all a dream... only to find out my dream wasn't a dream it was a nightmare and now my nightmare had become real... I had no body and nobody could help me."
The ninja looked at her with a slight sadness in his eyes like he knew what it was like to have his life ruined.
). It was all serious again....got carried away trying to get some romance in . SInce you guys put details I added details too....lol....too much? Hope you like it. Feel free to change delate whatever. And check my crazy grammar.... I'll put the uncovering in next time.
peacefulblossom
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Joined: 19 January 2011
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...... because if you are when I write I shall put you in the story (don't know how yet!!....... but it shall be revenge!!)... just kidding before you stick me in the story!!... I forgot for a moment you were writing first.... I'll be extra nice now!!.... haha yep my snooper abilities did me no favours in being promoted ...... it took me roughly 4 years to get this far Ooooo your going to add me in the story...wait one second going to change my update and add you ... but i keep watching more... i think my brain is broken... i try to stop watching any & it's like nah... watch another one and the cycle repeats And the viewers just wasted their life watching it . Looks like I'm joining your cycle too... i got one for you to watch actually its called 'Apno Ke Liye Geeta Ka Dharmyudh' on Zee TV..... I really dislike it but for some reason I can't stop watching it....everyone including the leads annoy me...... to be honest no matter how cursed you could be..... I can't let you be tortured with that serial ... it kills brain cells & promotes anger ... i swear the more this story moves forward the more evil we get ...... i love how no one is thinking of the leads yet... i can imagine serial storyteller going crazy with there story like us (except their sense of humour is a lot drier)... no wonder the villians always get more screen time then the leads in serials... i always wondered why that happened... now i know...... oh the joys of writing about the villian's...and we are enjoying torturing people hahaha. Looks like its easier being evil . Atleast the leads have some role in the story...until we start adding all the villains we have invented ....Me....where are the good guys then? ...we can let our imagination go wild.......I usually quote crazily coz I miss like 15 posts. & try to reply to them all in one post... then i have a super long post that confusing... my bad!!........you all must have inherited posting powers when you became senior members... I'm hoping to get mine in the next few days!!...... & although i don't think it is... I swear it feels like I'm in different time zone to all you lot...
peacefulblossom
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