p.s. π....Weird crazy pierced dude...is a definite someone in our story.... he should own one of the world's & where every time you sneeze... you have to have a piercing π or some thing like that (or you pick an idea??!!...at the moment I really can't think of anything saneπ)
you can steal any of my idea's if you like themπ ...(although they are pretty simliar to yoursπ).
Hey guys! I saw on the thread that you lot moved here....and making up a story...well can we have some one as freddy kreuger coming into their nightmares (maybe Jawaher)...i mean he is married to CC, don't blame the guyπ
Hey guys! I saw on the thread that you lot moved here....and making up a story...well can we have some one as freddy kreuger coming into their nightmares (maybe Jawaher)...i mean he is married to CC, don't blame the guyπ
hahaπ fab idea. We still need to add them to the story. Maybe you want to do their introduction...maybe they are the reason for Nivi's lost body π
Thanks Bahar, I had exams for a while so wasn't on much but 'IT' is Stephen Kings movies (it is AMAZING) but then again I watched the film when I was a kid so don't remember it clearly and plus it's from 1990's...but there a evil clown in there...I wont ruin it for you in case you get the chance to watch it....hmmm I have the urge to watch it now!
I used to follow my brother around quite a lot when I was younger and he was into rock and heavy metal, so I always came across people with big BIG holes in their ears (I never knew they did it purposely lol)...so literally when they take it out, their skin hangs????π€’ WOW!
What about the guy with the pins sticking out his face....he might be a hazard for anyone around himπ....if my mum sees them...she'll just feel sorry for their parents lol
Ok so let me think...Freddy Krueger (in this case Jawahar) is a lost soul, evil Cinderella took it (yes her own husband) because she's in love with..... (maybe pin piercing man)????
...so he's another ghost in the making and back to take possible revenge but ninja boy gets involved with his high tech ninja movesπ
Sorry it's lame but thats all I could think of but I really want to know what the piercing gang are searching for??
But the two characters, I've introduced are all murderers, I hope that doesn't mean I'm psychologically unfit π lol
Anyways I present the IT clown (he looks funny now but watching him when I was maybe a toddler was terrifying (weirdly didn't put me off clowns)
Oh wow I just found a pic of possible Krueger blades (he could be a part time soul snatcher as the blades are detachable, so possible dual identityπ)
All story bits are in purple π........ I just clicked on edit to write whoa what a long post!!! i wrote back to both you...... Bahar & pooja in the same post .......π... I will change it to two nowπ... hope it doesn't get confusingππ
@ Bahar
I just saw your posts & though if I quote you' it's gonna be a crazy long what where huh post again...... don't wanna scare people with the length of out posts π this one might be confusing coz I'm reading yours and then replying on a new post!!.... Here goes .... hope it works!!
Do you think people are getting scared of our craziness?? π
And yeah definitely a scene of the piercing gang swimming π .....hope it's not to dangerous for them what with the knife's stuck in no.1 nose & bars in no. 2 face'....I think the lady would be safe!! π
Don't evil people go evil because of love storys π... there heart gets broken & they go crazy ... well that's what I've learn't from the serial world π€£
The vampire being the grey parallel lead sounds good... ππΌ' hope he turns good in the end...maybe because of his lady friend βΊοΈ.... double chick flick ending π
I like the soul idea!!.... A romance of a Soul & Ninja... never heard of that before π....I approveπ
Haha my knowledge about Indian dramas is a little limited too.... I watch quite a few but not on a regular basis.... I'm sure they all have the same storyline though π.....Bollywood sounds better' I like DDLJ'
'.Loving your story so far...... will add like a next part idea type to it when I have more time!! (am preparing for tomorrow)... got a birthday party to go to at 6π... then meeting friends for my third birthday party at half 7 π... i can't even remember how long it's been since my birthdayπ.. & going bowling at 1 with familyπ & at 3 o' clock am going to another town to pick up a cake for the 6 o clock birthday partyπ still trying to figure out how am going to do it all π.. p.s. I only just realised I', really bad at wrapping presents!! π
Your questions in the story so far..... Let's see if I can add idea's there whilst i have timeπ'
Neha lost her body because she sacrificed it (like Nivi does π) for happiness.... because Freddy Kruger with his magical spell casting powers (I like that Freddy idea!!) tricked her when she was sleeping into thinking that if she wanted to find eternal happiness (or a good night sleep π) then she would have to give something to him. Neha not realising it was her soul that Freddy wanted said 'ok'' ............then when Neha found out, she tried to stop him....in all the confusion Freddy said the spell wrong (like one or two words wrong) & instead of the soul going.... the body went instead and the soul (Neha) got lots of powers including the ability to cross worlds, but she doesn't know about them yet like you said π
The bounty hunters name errm ....... holy hunter's π (can't think of better at the moment will try after my brain has recharged π)
I like the name 'hoops' π or 'Metal Face Metalica' π or 'Pin man' π for the leader of the gang!! I'm not sure about what his magical powers could beπ' but he should be able to kill people using his face as a weapon π€£
Keep the name 'Wolverine' for the bar face dude........ that names hilarious on him!! π
@ Pooja
Hiya....... I'm Rani π
I like the DDLJ Field scene......... I'm imagining it & laughing to myself!!.......mum keeps looking at me like I've gone crazy π
And sorry NO CLOWNS PLEASE!!π€’... Especially not ITπ€’....... I'm scared of clowns because of ITπ€’....... I watched it when I was younger to....... The clown picture really scares me so after Bahar's seen it can you either put a smaller one on or take it off please!!...... I'm really scared of clowns!!... proper phobia!! π... (am actually writing on word because when I scroll down on your post I can see the top of the picture!!π)..... I also work with children & when a clown entertainer come's in I have to hide in the office coz I get freaked out!! π...everyone thinks I'm really weird!!π
Hope you don't mind sorry!! ..
anyway......away from clowns (happy thoughtsπ)
My mate......he's got a stretcher piercing he told me how they do it & I was about to throw up!!........I don't like them at all
I think too many piercings look freaky but when I see a freaky piercing I tend to go up to the person & ask them about it........most of them are pretty nice people!!π.... only met one idiot & then I was like well if you didn't want to get noticed why have such a stupid thing on your face π....he really annoyed me π
piercing guy...Hazard π.......bet he gets his own seat on the bus π€£
To add onto my bit about Freddy trying to steal Neha's soul (posted above in purple).....
' that could be the reason why' because evil Cinderella (CC) stole it from him π........ & he needs a soul now...........I love the evil Cinderella being in love with then piercing gang leader....... but no matter how weird he looks & probably is how can he love evil Cinderella (CC)......... after listening to her for a few days he'd be banging his head against the wall....... going the woman doesn't listen to anyone!! π
Ninja boy ........don't you mean Ninja Mard!! π€£....... also can our Ninja's not wear face masks that show just the eyes........ I think I prefer the face π³
And about the psychologically unfit phrase!!........ It's alright were all crazy here π.......... that's why our story is going to be the greatest story ever told!!
welcome to our world π
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