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When she had rushed back from Shamli, she had fully anticipated to be whipped by her angry grandfather for stepping out of the palace without his permission. But this'..this turn of events had taken her by surprise.
But to her intense surprise, no reprimand came. Instead, her grandfather only asked, "Hmmm'so tell me'.what were Prithvi and that ' that girl fighting about?"
Rajeshwari heard a warning bell ring somewhere'.something told her that she shouldn't divulge anything more about what she had noticed about the relationship between the young couple'..that she could be doing them some kind of harm by speaking of the delicate nuances of that scene she had witnessed.But'but for the first time in her memory, grandfather was not looking at her with anger or hate or scorn'.she couldn't let him down by pleading ignorance.
"I ' I think he likes her'..likes her a lot'.but she doesn't like him," Rajeshwari said eagerly, "And there is another boy who likes Nandini but I don't know whether she likes him."
"Your majesty, young men are often interested in girls, but they mistake it for love when it is mere desire. I am certain that once he gets what he wants, the attraction will die a natural death."
"Then make sure my grandson gets what he wants," the old man said carelessly. "And who is this girl to refuse his interest! If he wants her, he will have her, for as long as he wishes. Give her as much money as she wants. If she proves to be a problem later, just get rid of her ' and her family too if need be."
As she opened the diary, a photograph suddenly dropped onto the tabletop, face up. Slightly taken aback, Nandini stared at it for a second, and then picked it up to study it better.
She couldn't see the man's face as it was turned away from the camera and utterly focused on the child, but she felt intuitively certain that it was not a planned pose. He had been caught unawares by an unknown photographer.
I haven't missed my friend so much in a long long time as I did today when I saw his little son...I suddenly felt overcome with memories of my friend. The boy is him in miniature."
Every woman on the planet was out there on the grounds except the one he was looking for.
Where on earth was she...
In you heart Prithivi...gosh, y can't you just accept that?!
Aww...Nandini. She knows him quite well, inside-out.
Prithvi spun around, clearly startled, and then glowered at the cheerful looking girl.
"I wasn't looking for you," he said tersely.
"Okay, I believe you," she nodded seriously and then laughed as he turned red.
Awesome retort by Nandini, 10/10.
After fighting some kind of personal battle for a minute, he curtly asked, "For how long?"
Finally!!! He spoke...good.
"She wants us to stay for a month,"
"A month?" he repeated angrily.
Now now...someone was not even caring about her, then why's he so angry about being left alone for a whole month. Man, Prithivi needs to sort things out.
"But I won't be able to stay for that long because of college. So nothing has been decided as yet," she said reassuringly. Flushing at the consolation in her voice, he muttered, "I don't need the pity. In fact, I think a month isn't too much. You should go for at least two," he advised coolly.
Look who's taking again...O God, Prithivi please leave you ego for sometime. Btw, he would look so cute while getting embarrassed.
"What?" he turned with annoyance.
She raised her hand and flung the handful of red powder right into his face.
"Does that make a difference to you?" she asked tartly.
*Wipes her eyes* Did Nandini really do it??!!!! I mean, like seriously!!!!! O God, I so wanted to be present there to see this happen...Btw didi...I love your description. It brings everything alive.
"Have you gone crazy? Why did you do that?" he spluttered angrily.
"Are you angry with me?" she asked innocently.
"Very," he snapped.
"Then it won't make a difference if I do it?"
"Do what?" he asked suspiciously.
"This," she replied, and lifting her left hand, splattered purple powder on him, and then doubled up with laughter at his suddenly unrecognizable face. There was not an inch of colour-free patch on his skin, his kurta was now an exotic mix of white, red and purple, and his thunderous expression only made it funnier.
*Pinches herself* Did she really really did that again??!!!!! Man, this update is getting better abd better and better...
He only paused a second before lunging out for her. She gasped and backed away, but her dupatta came into his grasp, and with deliberate intent, he yanked it off her body.
And then his head descended again to imprison the stinging vermillion of her soft lips.
Ahem ahem...the rest of the paras...were so . I really don't know how to describe it. I am just having a Prithivi-Nandini hangover today...Haye, for this so umm, update. Love their jodi.
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Thank u di for the PM and the amazing update. Loads of love...
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Hi Ranju dear…How r u…Hope u r good and everything is going well….and first I m really very very sorry for not commenting on previous 3-4 parts…but actually earlier there was a big problem with my pc and it was not working and then sometimes net problems also….agar ek prob solve huaa to dusra shuru and this continued almost 2-3 months…and then in the last week of Jan there was my cousin sis marriage so I was busy the whole month…so bcos of all these I was not able to comment regularly on the uds….but this last 4-5 parts were the most romantic uds of Prithvi till now...and I loved them allthanks a lot for all the wonderful uds…and once again sorry dear...
I just loved each and every ud…and each and every scene, every lines of the uds….specially Nandini's Birthday celebarations wala part….that 2 parts are the most romantic one….liked their kitchen scene..and the terrace scene…their first night together on terrace our favourite place….kya scene tha…awesome….just lovely ud…..
Well mere maan me abhi bhi bahot se sawal uth rahe hai jiska ans pata nahi ki hume kab milenga…
Que no. 1. Hume abhi tak yeh pata nahi chala hai ki Prithvi ne Nandini ko gift mei kya diya…whats there in the box…Nandini ne to open hi nahi kiya…wasie hum sab ne guess to kiya hai ki Prithvi ne use woh payal hi gift ki hongi…par kuch kah nahi sakte after all he is Prithvi so kuch bhi ho sakta hai….hehe…ab yeh baat to hume tabhi pata chalengi jab nandini woh box open karengi ya phir tum hume batao to aur pata nahi ki woh din kab aayenga….Q. 2. Kya nandini ne abhi tak Mochi bhaiya ka gift bhi open nahi kiya kya….I want to see her reaction….mujhe dekhna hai ki jab woh idol ko dekhengi to kaise react karengi……3. Kisi ki shaddi honewali thi…sorry I forgot her name…woh shaddi actually mei kitna postpone huyi hai…kab honewali hai shaddi jiske liye Naidini ne woh pink color ka dress-lehnga bhi kharida tha…kab shaddi hongi..kab woh pahanegi aur kab Prithvi usse dekhenga uss dress mei….chalo abhi ke liye itne sawal kafi hai…pahle itno ke ans mile phir dusre ques sochati hu…hehe….arre ha ek aur samar uncle kab vapas anewale hai….
Now again coming to the point..to the comments…over all the parts are just beautifully written…amazing parts…enjoyed reading them….
And now about the latest ud….loved it too….valentine par holi…wah wah kya baat hai….agar sbs ke jaisa bole to sirf yahan aur kahan….Nandini ne finally Prithvi ko rang laga hi diya…good going girl…and liked the way Prithvi play holi with Nandini…and found it interesting…what a colorful holi….and waiting for more…I know ki picture abhi baki hai….
aur Prithvi and Nandini bachapan se hi staring at each other...kya baat hai..hhmmm...so inki dosti sirf abhi nahi bachapan se hi hai...
par yeh Rajeshwari ne king ko kyun bata diya sab kuch….nahi batana chahiye tha….now hope ki it will not create any big problem in our Prithvi-Nandini's life…lets see what will happen….aur ha Prithvi-Nandini ko phir se jayda dino tak door mat rakhna…I know she is going…but plz jaldi se usse wapas le aana…not for so long time….want to see them together….thank u Ranju dear for this wonderful ud and aage ke sare parts ke liye bhi thanks a lot….love you…..
and now eagerly waiting for the next ud…hope we will get it soon…take care dear…and take care of ur health too…..
~ Nipa ~
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And then his head descended again to imprison the stinging vermillion of her soft lips. i want the next part frm the very next second of tis scene...
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