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Living together with love or friendship? End

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged

Living together with love or friendship? Part 1

It is a rainy evening...
Thunder's sound irritates Prachi.So shegoes near the window to close it.The rain drops remind her of her own tears.
Her mind reminds her with pain:The rain fall reminds me of my own tear fall when i came to know that Milind is in love with Ayesha.

Milind and Prachi are childhood friends.But Prachi falls in love with him unknowingly.Her heart was broken when Milind kept his heart for Ayesha.
But Prachi accepted her fate and supported Milind's relationship with Ayesha.

Unexpectedly Prachi hears Milind's voice:Prachi!Prachi!
She opens the door.She sees the depressed Milind drenched in rain.
PRACHI:Onu!Come inside.
He gets inside the house with luggages.She sees it.
PRACHI:First you dry your hair and change clothes.Otherwise you will catch fever.
He goes inside and changes his clothes.He dries his hair also.Then he comes back.
PRACHI:Onu..what happened?
MILIND:I left the house.
Prachi is shocked:Why?
MILIND:Dad is against my relationship with Ayesha.He wants me to marry someone else.So i broke my relationship with that house.
PRACHI:But can you break your relationship with your parents?
MILIND:Mom is with me.But dad...he is too cruel.
PRACHI:You could have tried to convince him.He may not be knowing how serious you are about Ayesha.
MILIND:There is no use.I tried my level best.But he does'nt believe that Ayesha is my true love.
MILIND:Today morning she left to UK for her studies.I went to her bedroom to surprise her.She was sleeping.She had worn a violet night gown.She looked so beautiful.I caressed her beautiful silky hair.She opened her eyes.She was surprised to see me.
Prachi can imagine that scene.
AyeshMilind:Onu..why did'nt you tell me that you are coming here now?
MILIND:To give you a surprise.
AYESHA:Really?Then i will also give you a surprise.
She tickles him.They both burst into laughter.
Milind to Prachi:it was such a sweet moment.I dropped her to the airport.We both wept.Ayesha will be in UK for more than one year.I will miss her.Since she has gone there we can't get married soon.I don't want to tell Ayesha about me leaving the house.She will be upset.
PRACHI:Don't worry Onu.You can stay here till your dad's anger melts.
He smiles:Thank you so much Prachi.You are my best friend.No one does such a great thing for the best friend.
She says in her mind:You are more than a best friend for me.



Edited by jasminerahul - 29 April 2011 at 9:05am

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111priyan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged
very nice start, so Milind thought he loves Ayesha, great lets see the story goes. thank for PM , thankq so munch.
continue soon...............

Edited by 111priyan - 30 March 2011 at 10:36am
nimmi101 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Nice update jasmine
pls continue soon
ytanuja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
That was a great start pls do cont.
Cutie_Pri IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 2:36am | IP Logged
HEy Jass Thanxxxxxxx a lot for dis ff for MiChi Hug
I really luved d TaAnu Version n always wanted a MiCh version for d same EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Plzz update soon luv dis ff a lot Heart

OptimisticEyes IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged

nice start jasmine....plz cont soon.

prachimishra85 Goldie

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Very Nice concept Jasmine......
Prachi loves Milind a lot.......
Want to read more so update quickly....
Heart Prachi
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged

Prachi:Milind...don't be angry with your dad.He will be very upset now.He loves you very much.
Milind:You are supporting my dad?Why is he against my love.He knows how much i love Ayesha.
PRACHI:He will understand how much you love her.Give him some more time.One more year is left.Right?
Milind is silent.
MILIND:Yes,one more year is left.I hope he will realize his mistake.Living a life without Ayesha for one year...oh!I miss her Prachi.
Prachi smiles slightly even though his words give her pain.
She thinks:Ayesha is so lucky to be loved by Milind. look very upset.Chill.Everything will be alright.
His face is dull.
PRACHI:Let's go out for dinner to be fresh.

Milind and Prachi go to a restaurant.Milind looks upset.
PRACHI:Milind..i have ordered your favourite food.Atleast now be happy.Be happy about having your favourite food.
He smiles.
He keeps his hand on her hand.Her face blossoms like a flower.
MILIND:If you were not my best friend i would not have been able to sit like this now.I would have gone crazy.
She smiles.
MILIND:I was scared whether you will also leave me alone.
PRACHI:I will never leave you Milind.Because you are my best friend.You remember..we used to fight a lot during our childhood days.But we used to get along with each other very well.Now also there is no change.
He smiles.
MILIND:I'm lucky to get a best friend like you and a best girl friend like Ayesha.When Ayesha expressed her desire to do higher studies i did'nt agree..because i did'nt want Ayesha to be away from me even for a moment.We had a small argument.Others thought we are breaking up.But everyone was surprised to see us together at the party.
Milind recalls...
Ayesha was dressed in a grand green saree and matching accessories.Milind was bowled over by her beauty.He could not resist himself.He went towards her surprising everyone including Ayesha.Because everyone thought that they had a break up.
Ayesha could not believe it.
MILIND:Won't you dance with me?You hate me that much?
Ayesha became upset.
She holds his arm.
AYESHA:Let us dance.
He smiled.
They both are dancing to the song
'Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hai
jaane kya bole man Dole sunke badan
dharkan banii zubaan..{Khamoshi}.

Milind and Ayesha looked at each other while dancing.
AYESHA:I was surprised when you invited me to dance with you.Because i thought you want to break up with me.
MILIND:Breaking up with you?If so,i would not have told you not to leave India for studies.I want you to be with me always.
AYESHA:Milind...i'm sorry.I will not go anywhere.
MILIND:No Ayesha.You must do your higher studies.Only for one year or something.Time will go very fast.
She was surprised:Milind!
He smiled.She also smiled.

Milind:I told Ayesha that time will move very fast.But it's moving slowly.
PRACHI:Don't worry Milind.Wait patiently for your love.

Milind and Prachi reach home.The calling bell rings.Prachi open the door.That is Milind's twin brother Rishi.
PRACHI:Rishi!Come inside.
Rishi comes inside.
MILIND:Rishi!How did you know that i'm here.
Rishi:I saw you both in the car.So i guessed you are with Prachi.
MILIND:How is the situation over there?
Rishi:Dad is sad.But he is still angry.
MILIND:Dad is stubborn.
Rishi:Did Ayesha contact you after reaching UK?
MILIND:No.Once she gets the number she will contact me.
Rishi:I'm leaving to UK for my job.
MILIND:Really?That's good.
Rishi says in her mind:I'm sorry Milind.I'm cheating you.I'm going to UK not only for my job.My main intention is to gain Ayesha's heart.I love your Ayesha and i want her.

Edited by jasminerahul - 01 April 2011 at 10:28am

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