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aweomse parts, keep it up, and congrats on the new ff. update soon :)

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Part 3

Geet took her jewellery off and threw her gungroo off..she hated wearing them. Everyone praised her for her performance but she did not care less. She went and took solace in Heer Bhai lap...she put her head down.
"Maa kab tak main naachti rahoo gi..thak chuki hoon main"
"Beta agar tumne naachna bund kar diya toh tume pata hain ye bhaireye tum khaa jaye ge"
Geet went upset, she shuddered at the thought of sleeping with any man for money.

She went and prayed and raised her hand in dua
"Allah paak muje bachai iss keechar se, main ye sab nahi chahti, kyon aapne muje yaha bej diya, main bhi chahti hoon mera shohar ho ghar ho par ye daag tawaif wala toh muje lag gaya...aap hi koi raasta dekhai".
She cried and cried...she had a lot of belief in praying.

Maan on the other beat the manager and sorted the mess. He was told by his clients that if he wanted the contract he had to personally supervise the work.
He went to sleep forgetting about Geet. In the middle of the night he dreamt about Geet performing that number...but at the end she looks at  him and smiles..he comes close to touch her...his heatbeat increases and he feels million of stars shooting that...he wakes up! Maan was sweating...he gets up and has water..he could not believe this girl was haunting him in dreams. But he did not know anything about love so he put it down to the mind replaying things..par Maan babu what about touching her?LOL

The holy month of Muharram had started and no muslim celebrates it..everyone goes into mourning...Geet did not perform for 2 months during this period. She had a big admirer called "Jagu dada"LOL. He many times asked Heera bhai to sell Geet for the night but she put such a hefty price that mujre se hi kaam chala leta.

He wanted Geet to perform at his sisters wedding. Geet refused
"Jagu dada aapko pata hain ke iss paak mahine main...main mujra nahin karti"
"Tawaif aur mazhab?"
"Tawaif hoon par apna jism nahin bejti aur ye meri majboori hain zaroorat nahin...Geet jab aik bar naa karti hain toh koi bhi nahin usse haan karwa sakta samje tum"
Jagu started to force Geet to perform and was going to abduct her..he pulled her by the arm down the mandi bazaar...Geet called for her Maa Heera bhai but he pushed Heera bhai aside.

Suddenly a jeep came and stopped abruptly. Maan came out in his attitude style.
"Acha kal ki maar yaad nahi jo aaj aik larki ke sath zabardasti kar rahe ho?"
"Eh Maan Singh Khurana iss tawaif keliye mujse dushmani mat mor..ye aik tawaif hain tawaif"
"Kyon tawaif aik aurat nahin hoti?"
Geet looked at Maan shocked. She smiled he called her a lady. He started beating Jagu and she looked at him. He was wearing a black vest with jeans. He was well toned and his biceps ufff were driving her insane...she looked at him *Hai Rabba kitna sona hain ye larka*.

Maan gave the last punch and put him in his jeep to hand him to the police and looked back at Geet. She bought her hand to her forhead, a gesture saying thank you. He looked away not acknowledging her gratitude.

She came down and Adi approached her "Aap ka show dekha bahut acha naachti hain aap"
"Suno ye tumare boss hain?"
"Haan aur dost bhi"
"Mera kaam karo ge muje apna mobile number dena"
"Kyon?"
"Iss farishte se muje pyar ho gaya hain"

Adi smiled and knew she was a decent girl and fulfilled her request. He knew Maan was attracted to her from the day he saw her. So decided to play cupid by setting them both up.

"Adiiii!"
"Haan sir atta hoon" He stuttered.

Geet kept playing his words "kyon tawaif aurat nahi hoti?" and smiled she had found her dream guy. She was in love with his masculinity and his sympathy towards tawaif's. She stopped dancing altogether. She was in love and nothing else mattered.

Precap, Maan nahin dega Geet ko ghaas, magar Geet ne laga li Maan se aas, bujai ga apne mann ki pyas ya tarpai ga Geet ka ehsaas? (Maan will not give any weight to Geet, but Geet has placed her trust in Maan, will he quench his thirst or make Geet's feelings suffer?)

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 31 March 2011 at 11:14am

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awesome update
love at first 4 geetEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
continue soon
 

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Big smile I loovedddd it!!!!!!

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the PM's...............I am loving this FF.. chapter 1 wah dadima with her blackmail too good.. and dev sending pics of random girls ha hah..
and then he sees her performing................ and the way he saved her... him being a true knight in shining Armour.. which girl would not fall in love.. geet.. mhh.. lets where this lovestory goes.............. more soon


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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 7:12pm | IP Logged

naddiya pls translate

the precap poor me not
so good with hindi
wow maan came to save her
yippe love how maan was dreaming
geet so cute
love it  lovely update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhhh
muah thanks pm

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Seems interesting...Clap.Geet as a tawaif...hmmmm ??? Wud definitely like to know how that works out : Business Tycoon +  Tawaif luv story....do continue dear...I really wud love to read more of it....

Added after reading part 2 & 3 : 

AWESOME...Clap..SUPERB.Clap...LOVING IT !!!!.Thumbs Up....u have used a totally different situation & I'm sooooo glad that Geet is not sleeping around for money.....Haiiii MAANN....bachale Geet ko iss narg se....Day Dreaming


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Part 4

Adi told Geet that Maan was going to the mandir to pray. Geet was so in love with him that she would do anything to catch a glimpse of him. She went to the mandir and she saw Maan was praying. As soon as he turned around she showered petals at him..he looked annoyed

"Ye kiya behuda harqat hain, Bhagwan waha hain yaha nahin"
"Pata hain par mere liye toh Allah ke baad aap hi special hain".
He ignored her and came down to put his shoes. She followed him down.
"Suno mera peecha mat karo, akhir tum chahti kiya ho".
"Ye toh muje pata nahin lekin itna pata hain ke main aapse.."
"Bas ye baatein apne paas rakho aur tawaif aur pyar?"
"Kyon tawaif kiya pyar nahin kar sakti?"
"Ye shabd tumare moo se ache nahi lagte"
"Lekin uss din aapne kaha ta ke tawaif aik aurat hain"
"Haan tume bachane keliye, ye toh sab jaante hain ke tawaif ka muqaam society main kiya hain mmhh?"
Geet fought back her tears
"Haan taqdeer ne muje tawaif bana diya"
"Aur aaj ke baad khabardaar Maan Singh Khurana peecha kiya"
"Wo toh marte dum taq aap rok nahin sake ge".

Maan fumed to his jeep. Adi stayed a few moments
"Bhabhi roye mat wo aise hi baat karte hain, main hoon aap ke sath, toh gabrane ke koi baat nahin hmm?"

Adi left and Geet wiped her tears, she was not going to give in so easily.

The news travelled that Geet who the whole of the elite were trying to bed was in love for the first time with Maan Singh Khurana.

Adi called Geet to perform in one of their party. Maan was dressed in a black suit with a white shirt. He looked so damn good. The lights went out and Geet started singing
Baja berukhi hain ye sarkaar ki
ke main cheez hoon aik bazaar ki

Tawaif kaha kisi ke sath mohobat karti hain
magar jab karti hain tawaif kayamat karti hain

Gustakhi maaf mere lab pe ayaa hain naam shareefo ka
kehte hain log wafa jise wo kaam hain bas shareefo ka
tawaif kaha kisi ke sath sharafat karti hain magar jab karti hi tawaif kayamat karti hain

Main laaj sharam ke parde se bahar kabhi na aao gi
bas aik ishaara tum kardo main ghoonghat main chup jao gi
tawaif kaha tawaif se baghawat karti hain magar jab karti hain tawaif kayamat karti hain.

Tawaif kaha kisi ke sath mohobat karti hain
magar jab karti hain tawaif kayamat karti hain
.


Maan was annoyed at her and slapped her one. She held her face shocked.
"Besharmi ki bhi koi hud hoti hain, main tume akhri baar kehta hoon mera khiyaal apne dimaag se nikaal do samji tum?"
"Aapko mere pyar ki khadar nahi, lekin aaj main bhi aapse kehti hoon ke aaj ke baad aap muje nahi dekhe ge, balke aap ko mere paas aana hoga, ye mera aapse vaada hain".

Geet left crying and Adi felt sad for her. Adi told Maan off.
"Maan aaj toh tumne hud kardi, uss bechari ko kitna suna diya. Wo tume pyar karti hain aur tumne usse slap kiya aur beizzat kiya"
"Adi wo aik tawaif hain"
"Haan halaat ne usse tawaif bana diya, lekin tume pata hain ke uss gande bazaar main wo kitni paak hain?"

Adi told her story of how she was abducted and that she is very religious and she only sings and dances to stop them selling her. Maan felt bad but how could Maan Singh Khurana let go off his ego, he wanted everything perfect and her being called a tawaif was far from being perfect.

Maan got a call from Annie. She was distraught her husband was a bit of a player and he had gone to Culcutta also. Maan told her not to worry and he will try talking to him whilst he's here.

Geet was laying down lost in Maan's love. Heera bhai distracted her
"Geet beta ye kiya, na koi mujra tum karti ho na stage show"
"Maa mera dil nahi maanta"
"Jis keliye tum ye sab chor rahi ho wo toh aik din bhi nahi ayaa, beta tawaif ki kismet hi aisi hoti hain, chalo rath ko kuch nai log tumara mujra sunana chahte hain tayaar ho jao".

Geet reluctantly got up and dressed herself in a green dress with matching choridaar. She looked esquisite.

Precap...bhool balaaiyan aye ga Maan, ya ye hoga Geet ka abhimaan?

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 29 March 2011 at 7:33pm

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