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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged

Hi Guyzz! I am starting A fan fiction for the first time on this forum.....eventually this is the first fan fiction in my life.....Its about a young girl and a young man....There are going to be many twist in this story


Hope you will Like it.....

Characters:( Only Lead)

Diya: A sweet and a humble girl studying in Mount College. She can't see any one  sad because of her, and she is a childhood friend with Rahul.She is really Beautiful.She don't have a family currently is living in hostel.

Rahul:  A young handsome and a confident guy. He is a cool dude, he flirt with the girls.The college girl are crazy on him.


Guyzz If you liked it so please tell me so that I can write chapter 1

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
carry on my friend
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
u r welcome ..... plz continue .........
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Sorry If there are mistakes my first time



Chapter 1:






Divya is walking in the college...The air is blowing and her shiny hairs are covering her hair. A broad smile is on her. Everyone is busy with their work. "Diya! Diya!" Suddenly Rahul appear shouting and running behind Diya.



Diya turn around and now the beautiful face is clear.(no hair covering)

Diya:Rahul! Kya Koha?

Rahul: Beta!Bol gayi...Tumay aaj Sneha kay pasay denay han?

Diya(Confused):Kon say?

Rahul:Shart kay...Rs.5000

Diya:Mai Rs.5000 rupee kya say lahho gi?? Wasay kon si Shart muje to yad nahi hai?

Diya start to think and is unable to remember..Diya turns around, At the same Time Sneha(Diya Best Friend) approach. Sneha don't notice Diya and come shouting to Rahul

Sneha: Kya Rahul Diya Ko bewakoof bana ya? Jaldi Bata ho

Diya heard sneha and a small smile approach on her face...

Rahul trys to make sneha stop but she mutter every thing up...

Then Diya turns around.

Diya:Rahul!! To tum dono mujey bewakoof bana rehay thay?? Aur Sneha tum!!

Rahul:Sneha tum nay sab kuch bar bad kardey....Is ko thoday aur chedathay..Aur Per ye roonay lagti....Acha ab ma jata ho...Larkay mera intezar kar riye hogi (he rans away)

Diya(angry): Rahul!! Ma tumey dek lo gi. Aur Sneha tum...kisi dost ho tum



Sneha:Ab..Ma....maaaaa Jati ho.....Bye(rans after rahul)

Diya:Roko....



"Diya!!" Suddenly a angry voice approach from behind Diya is very scared and she know who she is? She slowly turns around saying Oh! NO in heart.



To be contuined.....



How was it?



Who do you want that person to be who was angry at Diya?

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