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maris08

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged

This is another poem for Geethu's wonderful AV..We all can vividly recall that Kul Devi mandir scene, where the whole Saavan family assembled..So here are my few lines, for that scene, from Saavan point of view.. 

 

A Treasured gift-Saavan Family
 
A cherished gift we have
Our family's love
A gift bestowed on us
From the Almighty above

Embraces our  precious life
With open arms and warmth
We feel so honored and proud
Our family, our strength
 
You make me feel
Like I belong
A strange emotion
Once thought gone
 
Am always there for you
From now till eternity
You are safe and sound
In my Family's love and care
 
Our family's trust and belief
we'll always keep and uphold
Saavan family's love and affection
Is always to be treasured and cherished



Edited by maris08 - 26 March 2011 at 7:58am

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
correction: i made this sig for maris's poem Big smile

superb poem maris, you are the best, i am really missing your ff

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
You guys!! It's REALLY REALLY good! How do you guys do it?!!? We have a Such great talent here! This was one of my favorite scenes in BHPH as everyone were together at this time, plus shravan and saachi looked their best here!   Embarrassed Thanks for capturing the scene geetu, and Maris as always a BEAUTIFUL poem! We couldn't have said it better ourselves..

Edited by desigirl2 - 26 March 2011 at 8:47am

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Maris U R the BEST..and U Always Best in Expressing your Views in Poems...Wonderful And Fantastic....

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Maris, you are very talented .look at your poem ,wonderful lines!!!
 
 

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwww! That is soooooo sweet Maris and Sangeetha!!!!!

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Such a beautiful poem, Maris, for the lovely avi from Geetu!!! Clap

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WOOW!! Maris this a beautiful poem you wrote and Sangeeta wonderful avi!!Clap

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