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FF: Jaane Tu..Ya Jaane Naa. Ch.25/26 Pg.81/82 12thMar14

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged

                  JAANE TU... YA JAANE NAA..

Hey guys... I'm Tich... I've been following many fictions in this forum. they were really great... So i wanted to try one.. This is my first fiction ever. So all that i need is the encouragement of you people... Any suggesions and criticisms are welcome...please dont hesitate.

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Index:

Prologue P.1
1: Mujhse Dosti Karoge! P.4
2: Its now or never P.6
3: At the airport P.9
4:  Bloody beginning P.14
5: Ila Gujral and the limited editions P.18
6: The Earth connection P.22
7: A New Employee P.22
8: First talk P.27
9: Tale of broken horse (Prithvi's POV) P.31
10: Dostana P.37
11: Safe in your shade p.43
12: Driving me crazy P.48
13: Crossroads P.52
14: Narrow Escape P.54
15: Futile attempt P.58
16: Bachelorette party P.60
17: The Reason P.63
18: Aftermath P.64
19: Oh I miss you P.66
20: Token of apology P.69
21: Plan-B and Famous Icecream P.71
22: Twilight P.73
23: A warm gesture P.75
24: Ego vs. Ego P.75
25: Diary of Mr.Gujral (Prithvi's POV) P.81
26: Misunderstanding P.82

 

 


Edited by TheDreamCatcher - 11 March 2014 at 2:32pm

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Prologue


Life's really crazy. Its always confused and even makes us confused. And sometimes it crosses all the limits of sanity. But why? At that moment we think, why? Why did this happen? To me? Where have i gone wrong? I don't deserve this.

Little do we realize that its our life and it can never be unfair to us? And all this happened to head us towards our destiny. And every human's destiny is happiness. If life's fair you are having pleasure. If its unfair you are given a chance to experience happiness. All that you need to do is not to give up. Nor to accuse the fate written by the Thee. Just move on. Take lessons and go forward. May be you're heading towards your happiness.

This is a story of such a destiny's child, Damini. Sole heir for a forty-five thousand group empire who didn't even get a chance to cry at her father's funeral at young age, who knew all the laws of physics and theories of economics never knew the feelings of her own heart. The biggest problem... she knows what she doesn't want... but doesn't know what she want. Will her knight in the shining armour make her realize the the true meaning of happiness? And will she able to find the soulmate she's destined to?


                          Jaane na kahan woh duniya hai
                          Jaane na woh hai bhi ya nahin
                          Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
                          Itni khafa nahin...
                                              - Jaane tu... ya jaane naa..



so guys please give your valuable comments... any suggestions and criticisms are welcome.  the first part is ready and i'll definitely post it next week...

love,
tich.





Edited by ...Tich... - 17 February 2012 at 3:49am

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Hey Tich,

A wonderful prologue...A pure-workaholic Damini and Prithvi showing her love..sounds interestingTongue
Waiting foor the first part...

Love,
Snehal

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Hi Tich... Er first of all thank you for your appreciation of my work... I'm truly humbled to know that... Just not very good at handling it to be honest.. LOL Dont be too hard on the writers who left their FFs.. sometimes you just get mad busy or you move on from the show and it fails to inspire you.. Real writers face writers blocks all the time and really it sucks to just leave your story like that because you cant figure out what to write next. 

Coming to your prologue.. Nicely done.. Yeah life and its games can really drive you up the wall at times.. I liked how you described Damini. Very nicely done.. Truly she is one character who knows everything about the world around but doesnt know her own heart or maybe she never really tried to explore.. Emotions were not for her.. Waiting for Prithvi to enter. Do continue :)

Maham

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
@ snehal: thanks.. but i didn't mention that damini is workholic....
@maham: feeling really happy that you commented on my ff. The first ever FF i read was your confessions of love.. and i'm really sorry if i hurt anyone's emotions its just that i have been following those FFs religiously as they were on prida...

And yes, may be you need to wait for sometime for prithvi... because my main focus right now is on damini's character... not prida.

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged

nice prologue.. do update soon.. waiting for it...

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Hey tich awesome prolouge plzzz update faster & pm me Smile
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
nice start to ur FF
story seems to be interesting....
waiting for 1st update

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