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LAST BENCH-mayur...(par2 updt)

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged

hey..well i have an xam tmrw..but just got this idea...

its a story on mayur..well my first attempt so just bear with me..trying to make this a fun filled story abt colg days....

so now starts our story.

mayank, samrat and adhiraj stay in hostel...and also share a room...so just have a peek in their room...:)

its pretty big room...with three beds arranged to the three walls and each bed has a table beside it..one bed is as neat as a new one..white bedsheet..pillows perfectly placed and the table is neatly arranged with books with a timetable stuck to the wall above the table...well seems like this boy is an agnyakaari student...hey theres a book placed on the table..lets just check the name....MAYANK SHARMA...oh.so this is the bed of mayank??
wait theres some person(p) picking the book...
p:  hey mr gyani baba..lo tumhara book..mera table kyun use karrahe ho tumhari is book ko rakne keliye..aur
waise bhi ye ek hi notes tho hain tumhare paas...ise bhi gavaa dega kya???
arey mayank utt!!!! kitna sotha hain.. abey ..utt....
M: kya hain..kyun meri neend ko kharab karne main busy ho..jaake project complete kar..mainbhi tho tumhare
team main hoon..and i dont like to submit the project late...
P: get up mayuuuuuu....mere sweetu..project tumhe bhi karni hain..
M: adhi tu ruk..tumne mujhe mayu kaha????teri tho....#$%^$##$%^&&

so here is our mayu..he is extremely intelligent and he knows this fact..he never studies day and night but always scores gud marks...and adhi is a sincere student who does all his works on time..and is a life saver for mayu...

hey wait theres someone else also coming out frm the wash room.."tum dono phir shuru hagaye?? koi aur kaam nahi hain kya??mera bath dream pura khoarab kardiya..."
M,A: bath dream???????
""haan bath dream..main aur katrina shower ke neeche.....ek saath....""
A: chi chi ..chup kar..main aur nahi sun sakhta....
M: Sammy tumhe sharm aani chahiye..kal tune kareena ke sath night dream aur ab katrina..ke sath bath
dream??????
S:kya karu yaar sab girls itne ache hain...
M:girls aur ache..no way..wo sab areas main hamse peeche hain..chahe wo studies ho yaa sports yaa....
S:but looks main tho wo hamse aage hain..
M:kyunki wo itna saara makeup lagathe hain..
S:tujhse baat karna hi bekaar hain..and anyways colg keliye late horahe hain chal jaldi ready hoja.
M:main jaldi hi ready hota hun..tumhare dreams tho mujhe aate nahi na..;)
A:hey plz yaar ye sab band karo..aur jaldi tayyar ho ja...main chalta hun...bye..
M,S: bye..hum 10 min main aate hain..place bachake rakhna....LAST BENCH hame milni chahiye....


so this is our super sweet gang of boys....adhi-Mr.sincere, Mayank-Mr intelligent, Samrat- Mr.Cool
and yeah there r side effect of being intelligent..mayank is stubborn, always wants to win, and is totally hot with
attitude...specially with girls.
so we have to wait wat magic our nupsie does on him so that he gets bowled over..


so howz the concept..shud i continue?? i need frank answers...and yeah the title for this story wud be...
LAST BENCH---well the title can be intriguing but this plays a major role in the story..
my way of story telling can be diff..so just tell me if its nice or not...

part-2
hi..thanks for liking the nonsense which i wrote...and well tried writing
other part...hope its ok..
so lets get to the story..
adhi has gone to college and as instructed saved the last bench for
their gang and started his usual study work.after exactly 10 mins we
see the 2 dudes entering the class..mayank with a black shirt and blue
jeans..and samrat with a violet t-shirt and jeans..all the girls are just
gawking at them..and samrat was excited ,as always, seeing the
attention he is getting from the girls..and mayank, well he just gives
them a cold look and goes to his seat and hi fi's his frnds sitting
around...
M: hey adhi ..hogaya kya hamara project ?? jaldi kar yaar... aur ye
samrat kaha chala gaya????
A: woh dekho....
All boys together..SHEEEENAAAAA
M: oh god ROFL...ye phirse samrat se chipakgayi???? kaise handle
karta hain isko ye???
we see sheena malhotra.."the chipku of the class" seriously sticking
with samrat..and our cool dude as usual is frustrated but cannot
help..he is just giving a forced smile to her....
this scene has become a daily entertainment for the whole class...
suddenly we see shocking expressions on  adhiraj's face...
A:heyyyy guys just look up and see our sammy..
M:wats so special in him????haan???
A:plz yaar mayank ek baar usse dekh...
M:kyaa de..
and he just forgets his words....seeing the scene in front of
him..samrat is happily and genuinely smiling listening to some stupid
nonsense of sheena..!!!!!!
M:ise kya hogaya??plz dont tell me he is interested in sheena....arey
adhi mujhe pinch kar...plz bhagwaan ye sapna hona chahiye..
A: abey tere nautanki bandh kar....usse pooch araha haina.ask him
urself and plz dont eat my brain...and anyways OUR project in which
YOUR part is still not yet started has to be submitted next
week,remember????
M:plz yaar adhi ..i wll complete my part dont worry..worry abt ur
part and i have more important things to worry abt..ohk.
just then sammy enters and takes a seat beside mayank and he still
has a sweet smile playing on his lips..
M: excuse me mr.shergil..if u dont think i am disturbing ur private
thoughts..can u plz tell us wat was that with sheena????(
totally inquisitive)
S: hey i am so happy today..plz mayank dont spoil my mmood..with
ur irritating questions...
M:wat??plz yaar have some taste atleast while choosing girls...
S:tu nahi samjhega...:)
M:samjha to mujhe..tujhe us sheena se????
S:mayank yaar hum aaj se coaching institute jaa rahe hain..mba
entrance keliye...:)
M:kya????tu aur mba??ye tho mera aim tha...tu kabse isme
interested hain?? kahi iski wajha sheena to nahi???
S:plz yaar questions baad main..sir is coming....and i have enrolled
our names...
M:itna jaldi??kaise..
S:sheena ki help se..usne phone karke sab set kardi hain..aur hume
aaj se jaana chahiye..
A:guys stop ur discussion sir is in the cls..
M:oye padaku...tujhe pata hain humhe aaj se mba coaching clses ko
jaana hain....
(a bit sarcastically or u can say mayankish dialogue..)
A:kya????(totally shocked)lekin mujhe MS karna hain yaar....ye mba
kaha se aagaya..aus itna suddenly..
M:ab tu kyun itna shor macha raha hain??? well all rules are for
others ..right??
A:plz yaar..acha i am srry..ab to bata..ye suddenly???
M:mujhse math puch..woh cool dude haina usse pooch..lekin idea
bura nahi hain agar coaching pe jayenge tho seat milne ki chances
bahut hogi...aur waise bhi ab hame anyways jaana chahiye to ab kyun
nahi..arrey haan yaar sammy ..tune bahut acha kaam kiya..
(well this is mayank for u...he is focussed in his life but also fun
loving..sometimes sadu..sometimes mastikhor..)
A:lekin suddenly???
M:sammy ko us sheena ne kuch bataya..aur ye hamari admission
karvadi...
adhiraj looks at samrat and sees him completely immersed in his
dreams....
A:abey..ye poora pagal hogaya..
M:ye to hain lekin bhagwaan kare ki sheena ke peche pagal na
ho!!!!!
these r the boys who r geared up to go to their coaching institute..
well one totally focussed for mba..and one totally focussed on dont
know what;)..and one doesnt know why he is going to the institute...
srry for not introducing the girls..but they will make an entry in the
next update..
so how is the update???is it ok..well suggestions are always
welcome..well the story may be childish but i am writing something
for the first time..so will surely try to improve...:)


Edited by preethi09 - 23 March 2011 at 6:13am

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it seems nice......pls continue soon........................

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Wow dear
its an awesome start
veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice
loved ur concept Boys chars
plz do cont it and pm me
take care
all the best

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
very nice story. plz continue

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
it was really good........plz pm me when u update

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Really Nice.........
and do continue.
add me in ur pm list too

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great update dear............

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part 2
it was amazing............waiting for nups entry

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