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 PART-55--PG-1
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 PART-57,58--PG-11
 PART-59--PG-16
 PART-60--PG-20
 PART-61--PG-25
  PART-62--PG-30
PART-63--PG-37
PART-64--PG-48
PART-65--PG-54
PART-66--PG-58
PART-67--PG-66
PART-68--PG-73
PART-69--PG-78
PART-70--PG-84
PART-71--PG-89
PART-72--PG-94
PART-73--PG-98
PART-74--PG-109
PART-75--PG-113
PART-76--PG-121
PART-77--PG-126
PART-78, 79--PG-141
PART-80--PG-145


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PART-55

saxena haveli , soon after the breakfast :
 
pratigya was helping her kesar bhabhi to clean the dinning table.krishna was sitting on a sofa and reading a magazine.

nainaji:'pratigya , yeh ghunti lal ka waqt hai... ussko bhuk lag geye hoge...Smile'she told to pratigya.

pratigya:'mai thayk thi hun mummy...Big smile'she stopped cleaning the table.

pratigya:'chalo...aap bhi mere saat..Smile.'she called krishna .
 
krishna:'kahan..? Confused' he closed the book , kept it on the tea table and got up from the sofa to go with her.

pratigya:'chalo...chalo....Big smile...i want to introduce you to my ghunti lal ...Big smile'
 
krishna:'ghunti lal! Confused...what do you mean by ghunti lal?Confused...'
 
pratigya:'kyun ki wo moo se kuch bolti nahi hai...srif ghunti hila kay bolti hai...Smile'
 
krishna:'gungi hai kya?Shocked...'
 
pratigya:' a kind of...Smile'
 
krishna:'tuc! tch!....Ouch' he felt sorry for her.
 
pratigya:'par wo bahut achchi hai...Big smile'
 
krishna:' really!Big smile who is she?...tumari dadi hai kya?'
 
pratigya:' nahi tho...'
 
krishna:' fir?Confused...'
 
pratigya:'umm...Confused...meri behen jaisi...'
 
krishna:' behen! Shocked...you never told me that you have a sister...badi ya choti?....Smile'
 
pratigya:'umm...one month elder than me...'
 
krishna:'only one month!Shocked...how come?Confused even if she is your twin sister she should be few minutes elder than you isn't it?...is she your cousin sister?'
 
pratigya:'not exactly...Smile'
 
krishna:' is she married?...Big smile'
 
pratigya:'not really... par uss ka ek pyara sa... chota sa...cute sa ...bachcha hai....Tongue'
 
krishna:'kyaaaaaaa!!!Shocked shaadi nahi hue...par bachcha hai!Shocked...'
 
pratigya:' haan tho?Big smile...'
 
krishna:'besharam kahin ki...Angry'
 
pratigya:'please don't say to my ghunti lal like that...it hurts me...Ouch'
 
krishna:'uss ka nalayak pati kya karta hai?Confused...'
 
pratigya:'she don't know who is her pati...Confused'
 
krishna:Shocked...ewww...disgusting...'
 
pratigya:'issa maat boloAngry...wo bahut pavitr hai...hum uss ka pooja karte hain...Big smile'
 
krishna:'eyy eyy yaa!Shocked Angry
 
pratigya:'what 'eyy eyy yaa! i love my ghunti lal...if you meet her you will also like her...Tongue...trust me...Big smile'she took him to the other side of the back yard.they were talking and walking.
 
krishna:'tumari behen backyard mai rahati hai?Shocked...'
 
pratigya:' haan.....wo daykho...wahaaaan rahati hai...Big smile' she showed ghunti lal's house from distance.
 
look at ghunti lal's house!Wink
 
krishna:' tumari behen yahan rahati hai?Shocked...iss chopard patti mai! Shocked...seriously it is not fair yaar...bina shaadi kay bachcha hogaya tho kya?...tum log usse ghar se alag kaise kar sakte?Angry...galati tho sab se hoti haina?....jaise mujse bhi hue...Ouch...i am going to fight for her...gunti lal ko iss haveli kay ander lakar hi mai yahan se javunga...dayk lena tum...Angry...' he felt very sorry for ghunti lal and took pratigys to bring back gunti lal to haveli.
 
pratigya:'no need to feel sorry for herSmile...waise...she is happy here...Big smile'
 
krishna:'unbelievable...Shocked' they entered in to that hut.for his surprise it was a cow shed!
 
there was a grey fat, healthy and active cow standing with sharp horns, painted red, black nose tip,big red long tilak at the middle of her forehead stretched from nose to head. a small cute bronze bell / ghunti hanging from her neck...
 
look at ghunti lal and her ghunti!   lolLOL
 
 
krishna:'yeh tumari behen hai!?Angry.....'he was pissed.
 
pratigya:'haan...kitini pyari haina?...'Smile'she went close to her and touched her forehead with love.
 
krishna:'yeh gaay ko tumne behen kaha?Angry...'
 
pratigya:'haan...hum dono ekhi maa ka matlab ekhi gaay ka doodh pee hain...tho hue na sister?Wink...'
 
krishna:Angry
 
pratigya:' waise yeh tumari saali bhi hai...hahaha...ROFL...'
 
krishna: ' Shocked Angry chup...Angry...'
 
ghunti lol:'MMOOOO...'she acknowledged pratigya's love by shaking her head and ringing the ghunti ' tin tin tin....'

pratigya:'ghunti lalllllBig smile.....patha hai yeh kun hai?...Tongue'she started speaking with ghunti lal the cow.

ghunti lal:'MMOOO...'she moved her head  making 'tin...tin...tin'sound with her ghunti as a sign of NO.

pratigya:'yeh mere pati hai....Tongue..mujse bahut paayar karte hai...tumai pasand hai na?...Tongue'she asked her.

ghunti lal:.....stood still.

pratigya:'bolo pasand hai na?...Smile'she rubbed her back and asked.

krishna:'pratigya are you crazy?Angry you are asking the opinion of a cow....that too about me...the krishna singh!...Angry'

pratigya:'hamare leyeh yeh sirf cow nahi hai...hamari ghunti lal hai, meri behen aur best friend bhi hai...Big smile...hum iss ka pooja karte hai...'

pratigya:'bolo na ghunti lal...Big smile'she kept her hand on her head and rubbed it gently.

ghunti lal:'MMOOOO...MMOOO...'she kicked her leg and shook her head up and down with' tin tin tin... tin tin tin...tin tin tin...' bell sound as a  sign of 'YES'

pratigya:'yessssss!Tongue...daykho ghunti lal haan bola...Tongue'she jumped with excitement.
 
krishna:Angry Shocked Tongue...he stood with mixed and confused emotions.

pratigya:'i love you gunti lal.i lub youBig smile...muahhh!'she kissed on her forehead.

krishna:'Tongue...Big smile..'he was wondered to see the reaction of the cow.
 
pratigya:'you too touch...Big smile'
 
krishna:' it is ok...Approve'he was scared and stood far away from the cow.

pratigya:'daro maat...she will not harm you...Big smile'pratigya took little green grass and gave it to krishna and told him to feed the cow.

krishna:'pratigya no...i am scared...'he moved back.

pratigya:'come...'she pulled his hand.he went hesitantly close to the cow and showed the grass to the cow from far away.

ghunti lal:'MOOO....MOOO...MOOMOO...'she ate happily by shaking his head and making ' tin tin....tin tin...tin tin..'sound.

pratigya:'pata hai...? ghunti lal don't eat from strangers...but look!... it is eating from you.that means it likes you...Big smile'

krishna:'thanks ghunti lal  for supporting me...Big smile'he touched her head lovingly.

ghunti lal:'MMOOO....tin tin tin' she shook her head while he was rubbing her back.after feeding the cow stomach fully they came in.krishna went up to his room. pratigya went to kitchen and brought a big bronze glass full of lassi for krishna.
 
  


Edited by shumi. - 22 March 2011 at 5:32am

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like the way you presented gunti lal had child no marrideLOLLOLLOLROFL
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Wow the haveli is awesome......... man i wanna see places like that .......
 
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Congrats shumi di for starting a new thread.... Clap . Hav to leave for clg in a while, so wil read d chap in evening and then comment.... Hope its fine... Muaahzzzzzz di... Byee

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Kudos to You for this Awesome and Brillant idea Shumi Ji!Thumbs UpI've lost count the number of times i've read it!! It was beautifully written with breath-taking details that really made me picture the scene so well! I like how you make Prat mischievious also and makes baba frustrated!LOL Loved the part where Krish was feeding Ghunti Lal! Very touching! I enjoyed the whole chapter immensely but i don't know if i will be able to keep a straight face when i see ghunti lal dadi on screen!!LOLYou're a fantastic writer Shumi Ji! ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarThumbs UpThumbs UpHug

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