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OS - ...And the cup slipped...(Completed) (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
This was great - going back to watch the scene  again , so I can see what you said.

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
@ Diya - Thank you so much, Diya!! I originally intended this to be just a one parter, but in case some other scene inspires me to write - I might continue - anyway, thanks for reading honey!

@ ANJ4 - Thanks! The actual scene may not show what i'd depicted here - I just put a spin on Aham's thoughts!!!!

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
that was nice mridhu...could not ve put ahem's thoughts in a better way that was perfect

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Gud one, Mridhu.. Really classy write up!

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 10:43pm | IP Logged

Gopi is afraid of ahem - when she took the cup and saucer she was shaking  no wonder she can function in his presents.  poor girl.  your up was very well done - you got into ahem's head, which i really like.

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 1:27am | IP Logged
that was fantastic and provided us something to think about also it was nice to hear what aham actually thinks...if only it was also shown on the show

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
@ kav - Thank you so much!

@ Jake - Thanks Jake, glad you enjoyed it

@ ANJ4 - Yes, I completely agree - Gopi was afraid, and nervous i think. But this one I wanted to only put a spin on Aham's thoughts. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thought it was good. Thanks

@ Neetu - Thanks. Yea, most of us here are saying the "if only" - we never get Aham's POV in the show! I'm glad you liked my small OS.
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Oh, this is too wonderful for words

You know how you said to me the other day that you were re-watching the Vachan scene, and my fic made you re-think it

Well today. I read this, and then went and watched the tea scene again.

You do wonders for my hopeful nature.
You seemed to have his expression spot-on, but you leave hope for more

Oh mridhu, what you do to me

Please keep writing awesome stuff like this.

Yuks

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