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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Praaa... 

oh wow...kya concluding part hai...awesome... ClapEmbarrassed

LOVE you!! Hug

"Abhi , the memory of my first kiss was very special ."

Oye Hoye so finally she said it.hmm Big smileBig smileStar

"I am glad it was special Nikki . Now let me tell you something . I always thought you were special , still think you are . "

Ohhh.Blushing... dis special word going to kill me now... EmbarrassedLOL

"Would you like to go out with me ?" , he asked and she looked up instantly . Her expression seemed so unreadable , he wondered if he had ended up being a little too direct . But then , they were two mature adults . If they weren't going to direct about their feelings , who would .

Aha...so finally puch liya... Dancing

His smile grew wider and he leaned towards her , taking her by surprise .

"That's how I am . I need to hear just what I need to . Don't worry you'll learn." , he said mischievously and swiftly caught hold of her hand and brought it to his lips . Nikki was caught unawares at that action and it made her blush furiously .

Day DreamingDay Dreaming

"Is that good enough?" , he asked , still not letting go of her hand.

@purple *shakes head negatively* she wants more than that... EmbarrassedWinkLOL


For a long time , he could feel her scent all round him. Could it be that he was already falling for her ? The thought made him smile . Of course , hewas falling for her .Cool  .Big smile

"I knew you would come back." , she said , as if in a state of trance.

"Really ? Then you would also know why I have come back." , he said , gently pushing her in and closing the door behind them .

Before she could reply , he pulled her into his arms and kissed her . The willingness with which her lips parted , made him go dizzy with relief . He was on the right track or rather , they were on the right track.

ShockedShockedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingBlushingBlushingBlushing

Yara seriously I was blushing so much...


He pulled himself away after what seemed like an eternity .

"Our meeting wasn't complete Nikki . Now it is ." , he said , as she struggled to stand on her own after getting out of the comforting support of his arms.

Now its PERFECT!! Thumbs UpStar

                                                          

Abhi moved closer to her , took both her hands into his own , lifted them up to his lips and kissed them one by one , looking deep into her eyes ."Will you marry me Nikki and come along with me ? I a, afraid I can't make it any more romantic for you . But , I can assure you that you are the best thing to have happened to me in a long , long time .Will you marry me Nikki ?"

"Yes Abhi , of course I will . ", tears streaming into her eyes . He took her into his arms and kissed her forehead . After all these years, it seemed like he had finally found his destination in life .

I loved this whole Para...Clap

Thank you so much for writing such fics...I really enjoy them...!! Star

thanks once again for extending ur OS...Big smileBig smile



Edited by ANrucha - 06 February 2012 at 11:19am

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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hapinezz13

Wooo I haven't been here in the LONGEST time...hellooo everyone!!

Arre deewanon...isse pehechaano...kahaan se aayiii...yeh hai kauunnn :P ;)

LOL LOL LOL

Well, hello to you too Mummyji Hug
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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
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You are genious in writing.. where were you till now :)
I love this fresh take on AN story.. Story progressed so well from N's naive rejection towards A and then finally back to him :) It was as if they were meant to be..  And the proposal was hatke too :) *Oh please , not another one of those stupid fantasies again* hahaha :) great dialogs that maintained the tone for the complete series... Bravo. 

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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
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@pra Read the last 2 parts of your ff in one go and I really loved them. I'm glad that you continued and more glad two finally find AN back together. Wink Both the parts were awesome Pra. You're a fab writer; I've already mentioned it several times. You should write more often. I would be looking forward for your next writing. Smile

Love
Neha


Edited by Nehu_1 - 09 February 2012 at 12:06am

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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Pra I'll read ur last 2 parts a few more times before i comment hehehe

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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
@Rucha ,
Thanks so much sweetie . That comment was like three cubes of sugar taken together Smile. I am glad you enjoy reading the stuff I write and that too consistently . Like Abhi said , "the pleasure is all mine Smile"
And I am glad I had you go allEmbarrassedEmbarrassed . That means my romance writing is getting better Big smile.
Thanks once again Rucha for your kind words.
 
@Pri,
Hey . Good to hear from you and so happy you liked this mini FF . Thank you so much for all those kind words.
 I know , I wish I had come across this forum before , Would have been so much better then . But never mind , better late than never.
And please , do continue your writing challenge 2 entry . It is at such an interesting point now , I am always salivating with the anticipation of new AN stuffSmile . Hope you continue it soon .
 
@Mitzi ,
Haa haa , I will be waiting for your comment then Big smile
 
@Nehu , thanks
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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Pra aaj ka OS kahaan hai ...
no excuse jaldi likho
how about giving your take on what happened after Abhi was pushed in the pool ??


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Posted: 07 February 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mitzification

Pra aaj ka OS kahaan hai ...
no excuse jaldi likho
 
 
Big smile , Mitzi . I need take multivitamins to write anymore . Eyes have started drooping again .zzz
 
Krupaya kuch din aur pratiksha kijiye . Hum OS ke saath avashya lautenge .
 

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