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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Hey there girls! Hug

It's been a long time since I wrote anything, and I confess that even this one was written a while ago (read: more than a month ago LOL ) but I remembered it right now and wanted to share. Embarrassed As you already know, I'm no poet, and unfortunately my skills at poetry are very limited, so keep the chappals to yourselves :P I don't wanna be injured. Wink

Hard concept, but since I've written it, I consider it your duty to read it as well :P

Rant over, and here goes:




FIRE


Longing
For that love in your eyes,
I drown in them so deep.
They're soft and warm,
But I miss the fire.
I miss the fire I never saw,
The tenderness I never felt.
Oh, I miss the love I dreamed of.

I'm miles above the ground,
And I fear the fall, baby.
I've forgone the expectations,
I've given up on assurances,
I've fallen out of hope
But I can't fall out of love.

And I'm so broken, baby.
As I sit and count the pieces,
Think of all that we've been through,
I don't know how much more I can go.
Oh, fill the void inside my heart
For I miss the love I dreamed of.

Out of the broken pieces
You've taken a few to your heart
And left the rest to be.
But I want to be whole again,
Oh baby can't you see.

I'd rather be loved for who I am
Or not be loved at all.
But in between, it just hurts too much
So please don't make me fall.

And I can't even let go,
Damn my stubborn heart -
It's so completely taken to you,
I can't break us apart.

I feel your breaths,
I hear your heartbeats,
And I can breathe in your sighs.
But still I'm so broken, baby.
I can't escape this loneliness.
Let me breathe again,
Let me live again,
Let me ignite the flame I so long to see,
Because baby, I miss the love I dreamed of.



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Comments will be appreciated Embarrassed



Edited by Khushboo_AN - 30 November 2011 at 10:59am

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
So new poem Khush. Abhi I'm on my way 2 Chandigarh, so can't say much at present. Wapis aake rply karungi.

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
I love ur poem Khush. I always love ur writing dear n believe me u r very good in poem as well.

Ur poem remind me the time of Mich's ff where N completely fallen 4 Abhi but he was not taking step forward toward her (where her FIL advised her to "break him").

My curiosity of reading that book still hanging from the wall.

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
@khushboo.. not sure why you say this is not your field.. i think you are brilliant at poem writing too :)

can i say truth? *assuming yes continues*

I didnt read your poem the other day when i read pra's ff.. i wasnt in mood to read any poem.. But today i thought let me take a break from work and read it. I dint read the intro you wrote at all.. straight to the poem and this is what i felt.

For me it was combination of what A felt for N before, during and after the post riot meeting at keerti's wedding swimming pool..  it was the motions A's need to see N accept the love.. her not saying anything.. his decision to keep her away and teach lesson an then not being able to do it... And i love the poem :)

After this read and my own interpretation of those words.. i went to read what you wrote as a prolog or context and i didnt see it... but then arent all poems suppose to be left to user perceive them in their own twisted ways?

So my verdict.. i like the poem in my own context :) :) :)

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
@Neha...waiting for the edit Embarrassed

@Shale...thanks! Oh you can buy the book online, and Mich says that it's available in bookstores now as well! Go to rediff.com...you can buy it there :)

@Pri...thanks Embarrassed Actually when you look at it from that angle Ermm, it does fit well Approve Better, actually LOL I'll go and remove the explanation...frankly, yours makes more sense and is easier to understand anyway Big smile
Well actually this wasn't written as Fan Fiction in the first place. Hence the need to explain...none of my poems were written as Fan fiction...they're all original. Embarrassed Just wanted to share with you all, so I put it up...yep, yours makes more sense hehehe LOL
Again, thanks for the lovely words! Hug

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Posted: 01 December 2011 at 12:22am | IP Logged
@Pra, sorrt fr d late comment.. I've started reading ur FF again.. Coz I was hell busy in d last month n didn't get a chance to read after ur 4th update.. Its a beautiful read.. Will read n post my comment asap.. Glad to have another brilliant writer in ths dreamland :)

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Posted: 01 December 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged
@Khush, U always surprise me buddy! what a beautiful poem! I dont have words to describe my feelings but its simply awesome.. So touchy.. It has love n pain which is very difficult to describe in words.. Truly fab writing! Hatz off gal! Man gaye ustaad..!!!!

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Posted: 01 December 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Just announcing that a short story on AN is coming up.
Abhi is a bit more arrogant and Nikki bolder.
The age and position diffrence between them is more pronounced !!!!!!!!!!

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