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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Hey Khushbi,nah dear galiyaan nahi phekungi...yoour poem was superb!

 toucing ...those who r in love can actually feel it! EmbarrassedDay Dreaming 

if thats the case wid them I mean...lol nt talking abt "we r forever n ever after" people. WinkLOL

nice nice..keep it up. Thumbs Up




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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ANrucha

Hey Khushbi,nah dear galiyaan nahi phekungi...yoour poem was superb!

toucing ...those who r in love can actually feel it! EmbarrassedDay Dreaming 

if thats the case wid them I mean...lol nt talking abt "we r forever n ever after" people. WinkLOL

nice nice..keep it up. Thumbs Up

Thanks Ruchu Hug

Nah, I don't believe in forever...dreaming about happily ever after is a waste of time, frankly...if you love someone, go grab them right now and suffocate them with a hug...and I'll leave the rest to your imagination Wink Put today to some good use Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Lovely poems Khush!!!! Honestly speaking, I'm not a poetic person myself though I've written a few but that was just for a try but I liked your poems, actually the way you've written them...
Indeed a nice try...Well done gal!!!
And ya you don't deserve gaalies but an applause for sure...Clap

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 8:11am | IP Logged

Khush ,

These poems are lovely . I just came across this thread and saw your poems on the last page. Lots of other nice stuff too , will check it out later . Read your poems first and they are beautiful and very true in not just AN's context but pretty much every sensible and mature (couple in love)'s context . Very nice and very true.

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
@Neha...thanks! Even I don't understand much of poetry myself LOL, but those were somethings I just couldn't put into a scene, I couldn't put it in AN's context...well, at least not directly. So poems seemed the best way to put the thoughts across without mentioning any names.


@Pra...thank you! Do check out the rest of the works here...as well as in the previous threads. Our writers are indeed very talented!
Yes well I didn't write the poems in AN's context at all, actually. I wrote them and I thought I might as well post them here, since they didn't go too bad with AN's essence. These were my feeble attempts to put my own thoughts and feelings into words...aah, I don't think I quite managed to pull it off.
Some things are just too complex to capture in words...they're best felt Wink

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged

Khush ,

Will definitely check out . In fact I have been reading quite a lot of stuff on the first writing challenge and its all so nice . No doubt about all our writers ; they are all really very talented and have supreme imagination. Discovering these FFs and other writing has been such a pleasant surprise.

 
And about your poem , ohh , I definitely understood this kind of writing can only come up from one's feelings  . I know they are not just for AN , must have worded my comment wrongly. You pulled it off perfectly . And I really mean it . I have never experienced such stuff , but then this would be my perfect idea of love , maybe that is why I like AN so much .
 
Brilliantly written .  ClapClap


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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
hey mitzii plzz continue ur PYT soon... i m waiting yaar... that's cute ff :)) n also ur GMEOY Big smile

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
Hey Khush,
 
This is such a beautiful piece...so much love intermingled with pain...it breaks your heart to read this one...no wonder it sapped u of ur enery...tum intni deep baatein likhogi sweets toh tumhe Maa bolna padega...loved it!!

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