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Posted: 12 years ago
aww ix lovly...
keep it up namy...😳😳
Posted: 12 years ago
namy, i agree with mitzi.. why do it need to end here..  Always like "To be continued" more than end :) Scene written with such a briliance does deserve the continuation :) So do consider it...

And Cow delievery.. i was lol there :)  Love this phase of AN a lot where they were falling for each other and not realising it either..
Posted: 12 years ago
Namy!!
U made both of them animal specialist doctor dat was hilarious. But emotion their share together during delivery was marvellous.
 
picture abhi baaki hain mere dost!!
 
Love
Shale
Posted: 12 years ago
awww namy very very cute and funny and little sad update πŸ‘ first i thought naina was hari;s wife but after reading that she was the cow i was just πŸ€£ that was just so cute and love tthe way u described abhi emotions and niki reaction too  very very cute and brilliant job done dear πŸ‘ namy try to continue this and plz tell us about abhi past why he stop doing surgies πŸ˜ƒ and plz complete ur other ff its only u waiting eagerly for that too πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
loved ur scene Nammy. nice job. do write more :)) and continue if possible. thanx :)
Posted: 12 years ago
Nammy , Im here ... but whers part 2 ???
Posted: 12 years ago
Well girls, I've been writing poems recently, or rather, trying to πŸ˜³ I've written three, and they all seem pretty much the same...they're long and boring and senseless but oh well πŸ˜† If I've taken the trouble to write them, then you have to take the trouble to read and comment πŸ˜‰

I'm not a poet...blowing my own phata huwa trumpet, I say that I write better scenes than poems, any given day πŸ˜³ But still. Joote mat phenkna...ande bhi mat phenkna, please. Gaaliyaan de do, chalega :P 

So...posting all three, one after another. And the torture begins...πŸ˜ƒ





Poem by Khushboo_AN:


I open my eyes and
The night fades away.
I see the world as it is -
It's bathed in sunlight, it's beautiful.
It's like you.

You made me laugh,
You made me cry,
You hurt me badly,
You didn't apologise.
And then
You hugged me when I didn't want you to,
You wiped my tears when I said
I didn't need you.

You stood beside me
Through thick and thin,
Gave me the push when
I didn't know how to begin,
Got angry when I didn't listen
To you.

You brought my smile back,
Stood beside me when I was scared.
You didn't protect me
But helped me face my fears.

And that is why
I love you.
You've stuck with me through everything -
Seen my worst
And loved my best,
You take me for who I am.

I want you and I need you,
But baby let's be real
Happily ever after is overrated.

I can't promise that I won't fight
But I know that in the end you're
My guiding light.

Tomorrow
Is a different day.
And while I can't promise forever,
I give you all of my today.

Posted: 12 years ago
Poem by Khushboo_AN:


Through the Storm

Facing reality -
It's like gazing into the Sun.
You know of its blatant honesty,
But the glaring truth blinds you.
It's hard to stare back,
It's hard to accept what life throws at you.

And sleeping under your wings
All this while baby,
I've become used to
These rose-tinted glasses.
The thorns pierce my skin
Like hot needles.
The roses have
Lost their softness.

Now that I'm out in the rain,
I long for your shelter
But you're
Out of reach.
I breathe in your scent
But you're too far away,
The ghost of your touch
Lends me volatile comfort.
I can almost feel you even now
But it's just not enough.

And as the lightning strikes -
I run for cover.
I'm not too sure
I'll make it through
Without you here beside me.

Because I know
You didn't want to leave;
I know you wished
To guard me through
All the storms I'd ever face.
I was too used to your protection -
I was too used to your presence.
And so I shiver in the cold wind
Today.

I know I'll have to fight
And brave it all,
Grit my teeth
And swim through.
Because that is what
You would have wanted
And that is what
I try to do.

You've been my Saviour,
My Sunshine
Through the hardest time.
Now I promise to protect you too,
With every breath
And every sigh;
For I have in me
Your strength.
And I know it will
Guide me through.
For you, for you.

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Poem by Khushboo_AN:


Looking up
At the night sky,
Talking of heaven, and the stars -
And thinking about forever,
Lying in your arms.

-Oh, these dreams were so cliche-d,
But yet so sweet.
I longed for the perfect kiss,
I yearned for a moment where
Nothing would be amiss.

And like a candle in the night,
You would guide me with your light.
Burning bright, yet soft to my eyes.
Truthful, yet not blinding.

But they were dreams.
Beautiful, yet untrue.
I was told that love would
Sweep me off my feet,
Shower me with roses and
Take over my senses.

But this is different.
There are roses, and I feel the thorns -
The pain makes this real,
It makes me feel.
Dreams are sweet but
There I'm numb.
So this is sweeter
For I can feel you in my senses.
I can breathe you
And touch your hair
And kiss your lips
And cry in my despair.

Because nothing compares
To the feeling of being in love,
Of being with you
And in your arms.
Nothing compares to what is real.
I don't need the red roses,
I don't need the violins,
The scented candles
And the walks in the moonlight.
I don't want them.

For slowly I realise
How much I love you,
And it overwhelms me.
It is too much to hold inside me,
And so I cry into your chest.
I can't breathe,
I can't think
I can't let you go.

I cling to you like
I never wanted to,
Trying desperately
To latch on to a sense of comfort,
Of belonging,
And a sense of peace
Only you could provide.

And you may not even be mine,
But still I hold on to you.
For as I stumble and fall,
I know you'll hold me up
And stand strong like you do.

Or maybe like me,
You're broken inside too.
I can't look into your eyes
For mine are hazy with tears;
But I can hear your heart
And I love the way
It beats so fast.

Because come what may
And whatever you say,
At least for now
I know just one thing.
That I love you,
Way more than I should.
And I trust you,
Way more than anyone ever could.

Wherever you are,
Whatever you do,
I love you
And the fact remains.

I know you know
Why I cry - And maybe
You feel my pain too.

I seek not my dreams,
I seek the love in you.
The strength in your arms
And the scent in your sighs.

I'll take the roses with the thorns,
For ever if I'll find you,
And as our breaths intermingle
In kisses of passion, I feel -
Maybe someday,
Our love to me will bind you.




This one was a very emotional one for me...do tell me how it is. It literally sapped me of energy once I finished writing.

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Khushbi,nah dear galiyaan nahi phekungi...yoour poem was superb!

 toucing ...those who r in love can actually feel it! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ 

if thats the case wid them I mean...lol nt talking abt "we r forever n ever after" people. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

nice nice..keep it up. πŸ‘πŸΌ


Edited by ANrucha - 12 years ago

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