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ff:2gethr ever aftr!!updated part 15 (2 july) (Page 6)

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                                              Part 14

note:before the most awaited SR,this epi z exclusively dedicated 2 abhini.
in india
abhi ws so heart broken tat he started drinking more.1 day while he ws returning back home tat he saw nandini chased by goons.he stopped the car n went thr.he tried 2 stop the goons bt they dint.then he fought wid them saving nandini.she hugged him n said thnks 4 saving me.then she realized wat she just did n she moved bck.abhi lowered his eyes n said"plz sit in my car.i ll drop u home"
n"no thnks ill go myself"
a"if u go urself,thr z a solid chance tat the goons again catch u n i wont  thr 2 save u again"
n they both laughed.
nandini guided him 2 her house.wen he reached thr he ws shocked tat it ws shukla mansion.
he quickly dropped her n reached home.he thot he ll 4get her 4evr cz she cnt b his.
shukla mansion:
nandini started feeling 4 abhi n she thot he z nt as bad as i thot.he z a nice guy.may b i misunderstood him n thot wen she ll meet him nxt,he ll apologise.
next day at coffee shop
nandini saw abhishek flirting wi a girl.she ws heart broken.still she managed 2 drag herself n came thr
n"hi abhishek jee"
a"hi!"
n"cn i sit?"
a"ya sure"
girl"hey abhi darling!whoz this?"
a"oh i dnt remember.btw lady wats ur name"
n"m nandini.remember u helped me??"
a"oh ya!poor lady!she ws chased by goons 2 days bck n i saved her n then dropped her home"
girl"poor girl!!good tat u helped her"
a"ya!i knw m gr8!N laughed"
n"ok so i take ur leave"
a"sit n have coffee"
n"no thnks.i hav some imp thng 2 do"
a"ok bye"
n"bye"
she came bck home cryng
mr shukla"wat happened nandini?"
n"nthng papa!"
s"tell me wat happened?"
n"somethng got into my eye"
n ran 2wards her room n threw herself on the bed n cried a lot
 
precap:maha fightDead


Edited by tinatartari - 02 July 2011 at 4:34am

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                                        Part 15
alka headed 2wards her room.
c"stop"
a"wat happened?"
c"whr u gng?"
a"m gng 2 my room 2 sleep"
c"bt mrs shukla 2nite z our SR.r nt we supposed 2 b 2gethr?"
a"(shied)chander u r gettng naughtier day by day"
c"tats bcoz of u baby!"
a"stop it chander"
c"honey"
n he headed 2wards her.she ran in his room.he too started running.she yelled
a"stop it chander"
bt he kept progressing.she started throwing pillows,cushions bt cudnt stop him.finally he came closer 2 her wen she ws just close 2 the bed.he hugged her 4m the back n caught her hands in his.
a"no chander dnt do it"
c"how ll u save urself 4m me 2day??"
a"chander plz"
bt chander dint listen
a"plz leave me chander"
bt chander made his hold tighter.he removed her hair 4m her neck n kissed the nape of her neck.alka closed her eyes wen she felt his warm breath on her neck.chander progressed furthur n kept kissing her
alka kept blaberring"plz stop it chander.leave me"n her blaberring became dimmer n dimmer n wen he straighten her,it ceased.
he cupped her face n as he moved his lips 2wards her lips,she shrieked
a"stop it chander"
n ran out of his hold.chander held her wrist n bring her closer 2 him.
wen he again came closer,she closed her eyes n he kissed her on the lips.both were lost in each other.then they broke the kiss 2 take some breath.
he took her in his arms n headed 2wards the bed.he made her lie comfortably n lie on top of her.
he turned off the lights.
precap:chander knowing alka s family
note:frnds m nt good at writing romantic scenes cz till date i hav nt written any n i hav nt experienced it even so all this tat i got z 4m the books i read n dramas i watchEmbarrassed
nt 2 forget the ff s tat i read.hope u all like my effort.till u dnt get the epi,enjoy wid this update
 


Edited by tinatartari - 02 July 2011 at 4:54am

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wow..! tina buddyHug
i loved chalka marriage wala sceneDay Dreaming and chalka SR wala sceneDay Dreaming

what..!Shocked abhini r gng to fight in precapShocked too badUnhappy plz make abhini patch up soon in next update tina dear...Tongue

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I was wondering , every one is talking about marriage, but no body speaks about SR Wink Blushing ...LOL...Day Dreaming
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@shweta no worries dear they ll patch up soon bt i really miss abhini in dlmh.Cry
@fragrance nw i fulfilled ur wish.enjoy SR 2 n tat in a unique way.Embarrassedno wonder they cnt show an SR a s i hav shownLOL


Edited by tinatartari - 02 July 2011 at 5:59am

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it is superb  tina...
u write superb and the rest comes wid xperience...
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thnks oozy
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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged

frnds though we got a full-on fun packed ME 2day n we saw marriage of chalka,uniting step 1 bt they missed SR uniting step 2 n final stepEmbarrassed

i hope 4 tat u cn enjoy it here n a lil bit of tat ws shown in original epi just like my ff wid the exception of the place.Smile
donno wen they r gonna show the SR or ll they ever show it?Cry
bt i ll update my ff soon wid all the dreams i have seen 4 chalka n no matter if chandr dies in dlmh or nt bt he wont die or goes missing in 2gthr ever aftrWink


Edited by tinatartari - 02 July 2011 at 10:43am

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