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ff:2gethr ever aftr!!updated part 15 (2 july) (Page 4)

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 2:14am | IP Logged
nic eparts tina..ooh abhi fell in love with nandu darling lool

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
thnks suvi 4 ur cmnts.next epi m writing
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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
                    part 6
alka turned off her lap top n went 2 abhi s room.both of them had a gr8 talk n alka tells him abt her life in boston,her frends,her activities n all.then abhi took her 2 show different places of the city.they made a plan 2 do camping.wen they told NNT,he ws furious
NNT"alka u r here aftr so many yrs n u havnt stayed 4 2 days n u wanna go back"
alka"plz papa!let us go!it wud b fun"
abhi"yes papa we ll enjoy a lot"
NNT"n wat abt me?ill b all alone here wich i dnt want 2!"
abhi"cmon papa!dnt do this wid me.ma best frend z here aftr so long n u dnt letting us 2 enjoy.nt fair!"
NNT"ok ok u cn go"
alka abhi simultaneously"yay!!!"
they hugged NNT
abhi n alka go camping
they enjoy 2 whole days n then come back.
1 month later
tiwari house
alka z packing her bags as her flight z 2moro
shukla house
chander packing his bags
1 day later
alka n chander leave 4 the airport 4m their houses.abhi n nandu accompanying them.
at the airport.
alka bids fairwell 2 abhi n chander bids fairwell 2 nandini.they didnt came across each other aftr so many years 4 wich alka z sad she dint see him in those 6 yrs n nt nw on this trip bt chander is in estasy remembering abt her dream girl he met in the flight n who invades his heart n soul nw.he has completely 4gotten abt alka as she means nothing 2 him nw due 2 the MU.
final call 4 the flight.
both rush inside,go thru the security check n board the plane.
chander has got anothr seat wid sme old lady.he saw his dream girl at the other seat wid an old man beside her.as the plane ws abt 2 take off,the AH came 2 him n asked him
AH"sir ll u plz exchange seats wid that sir!(points 2 the old man sitting beside his lady love)this lady z his wife n they want 2 sit 2gethr."
chander(delighted inside)"yeah!sure!y nt!"
AH"thnks sir"
chander gets up n goes 2 the seat of the old man n he takes chander s seat.as he sits he says hi 2 the lady.the lady replies hi.
chandu"so miss!how ws ur trip?"
lady"it ws good.i came back home aftr a long time"
chandu"tats good.i also came back home aftr long time"
(nw 4 those who knw our beloved chandu baba z a shy type ll b wandering how he managed 2 talk 2 the lady n even more importantly,initiate the talk:the credit goes 2 lovely nandini who gave him courage n counselled him 2 talk 2 her if they met again)
meanwhile AH comes n asks"sir u want anythng?"
chandu"a coffee 4 the lady n 1 4 me"
lady smiled.chandu baba smiles back.
chander asked the lady whr does she study n she says she z a medical student at harvard.he z delighted 2 knw tat she z 4m the same university he z studying.he tells her he z a law student a harvard.
it z said tat good times fly quickly.same happened wid chander n the flight ws ready 2 land.the AH makes announcement wich leaves chander sad.
plane landed
both make their way out n the lady disappears like wind.
chander comes back 2 his hostel n ralph welcomes him.
precap
chander s love blossom


Edited by tinatartari - 09 April 2011 at 3:44am
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            part 7
note:frends i ws so engrossed into writing this ff tat i actually dreamt tonight of chalka tat they r studying wid me in ma clg.
morning
chander n alka r getting ready at their places 4 their morrning classes.
they reach their respective institutes n attend their classes according 2 the routine.
chander z lost in thoughts of his myster woman he calls angel.the teacher notices it n asks him wats the matter?
chander"nothing sir!i ws just missing home"
teacher"r u sure"
chander"yes sir"
teacher"then pay attention"
chander"sorry sir"
aftr the classes were over,chander roamed around her school building bt cudnt get a glimpse of her.he came back
later in the evening
ralph"chander wanna join me 2 the party at the simon s club?it wud b fun.girls,drinks,music n dance"
chander"no thnks ralph as u knw i hate parties.i dnt wanna go"
ralph"cmon chander!dnt b a spoil buddy!u knw its the birthday party of ma frend jenny.she z 4m HMS.all her frends r coming.it wud  b gr8 2 meet future drs thr"
chander(aftr thinking 4 a while:HMS yay!my angel also studies thr.may b i get a chance 2 meet her)"ok ill go"
ralph"great man!tats like a champ.quickly get ready.we hav 2 get a gift 4 her 2"
chander gets ready quickly wich leaves ralph a bit surprized bt still he ignores it n both go 2 the market n take gifts 4 jenny.
meanwhile thr alka z getting ready 4 her frends bday party(n as u hav guessed:its jenny)
at the party
every1 ws enjoying the party bt chander ws sitting on one side looking at the entrance 4 his angel 2 arrive.she hasnt come yet.
finally as the dj switched off the lights 4 dance,she came in her beautiful white dress.she looked like an angel.smile automatically formed on his lips n he unintentionally rose 4m his seat.she ws so serene,so perfect,such a flawless beauty tat he cudnt shift his gaze 4m her.
wen jenny introduced her 2 every1 tat she z alka,chander ws delighted 2 hear her name(chander n alka dnt knw each other s real names.every1 used 2 call chander chandu baba n alka as guriya(doll) so they r unaware of each other n nw tat we knw chander s angel z alka bt he doesnt knw)
coming up:jenny s bday party


Edited by tinatartari - 09 April 2011 at 3:52am

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
res....
havnt read from part 3 hun....Ouch
will read from part 3 till part 7 n giv u a full blown commentWink


Edited by sv003 - 09 April 2011 at 3:37am

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
guys plz at least spam smthng.i hav written 7 parts bt it hasnt crossed even 4 pages.m so sad! CryCryCryCryCry

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              part 8
after the introduction,alka goes wid annie n meet other ppl.chander keeps standng thr,constantly eyeing alka 4m a distance.he ws msemurised wid her beauty.he had nvr seen such a beautiful girl before(at least tats wat he thot!LOL)
then the dj started songs n called everybody on the dance floor.kartick,a class fellow of alka approached her 4 the dance n they began.chander could nt tolerate her dancing wid any1 else.he got up n went 2 the dance floor.
as he reached the dance floor,the lights went out n the song changed n the dj asked 2 swap the partners.wen the lights came,he saw alka standng infront of him.his heart started dancing.n then they were lost in each othr.
alka s pov
this guy reminses her of her childhood frnd.she wsnt sure wat attracted her 2 him.his smile,his style,his thnkng,his talkng,his face or wat?bt 1 thng she ws sure tat she ws falling 4 this guy.he had some unknown attraction tat she cudnt resist him
chander s pov
this girl has an unknown attraction just like a magnet he want 2 stick 2 her,take her in his arms,kiss her,make love wid her,stay wid her 4evr.wenevr she ws AROUND him,naughty n nasty ideas preoccupied his mind n wen she ws near he cudnt thnk of anythng bt her.
tat night as they danced 2 the tunes of the songs being played,he cudnt refrain himself 4m touchng her body parts.though he ws nt tat type of guy bt this girl drived him crazy.he cud feel tat wenevr he touched her,she shivered n also blushed.he ws gettng crazy over this.
then the dance ended.he asked her 4 a drink.
chander"hey alka!cn i get u a drink"
alka(smiling)"sure"
chander"wich 1?"
alka"i wud like 2 hav a coke"
chander"ok.ill b bck"
he takes the drink 4 her n him.they kept talkng n askng abt each othr s likes n dislikes.
at the end of the party,they bid farewell 2 their frnds n went out.annie had gone wid ralph.alka ws walkng on her way 2 hostel.
chander came closer 2 her on his bike
chander"hey alka!cn i drop u home?"
alka"no thnks ill go by myself"
chander"cmon alka!dnt b formal!come ill drop u home!"
alka"ok"
n she sits on the back of his bike
chander"hold me tight or ull fall"
alka"ok"
n she holds him by his waist n sends thousands of elecric shocks ovr his body.it ws the first time since she touched him.
precap:first hugEmbarrassed


Edited by tinatartari - 13 May 2011 at 8:10am

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                part 9
chander n alka were lost in each other wen they reached her hostel.
chander"so here we r!at ur hostel!(thnkng damn!y this hostel came so early?)
alka(loosening her grip on his waist)ok thnks 4 the ride n the dance.it ws fun
chander"ma pleasure"
alka"c u then!"
chander"if u dnt mind cn i ask u smthng?"
alka"sure"
chander"cn i hav ur cell no.i mean so tat i cn talk 2 u.ill nt dstrb u"(thnkng man!i v nvr ask 4 it n idk hw 2 ask.i hope she gives)
alka(confused n a bit shocked as nobody evr asked her)"ok"
n she gives her no 2 him.he s so happy as he z found a treasure.
alka"good nyt chander"
chander"good nyt alka!c u !tc!bye!"
alka(smiling)bye.tc
n she goes inside
chander sped his bike faster as if its a rocket.n reached hostel.
as he z enterng the room,he z humming a song.pehla naasha pehla khuwwaar!naaya pyar e naya intazar!
ralph z already thr
ralph"wow!its a miracle!chander shukla enterng the room late at nite n humming a song!is everythng ok??"
chander"yes ralph!plz dnt pull ma leg.m so tired n sleepy"
ralph"ok good nyt"
chander:good nyt"
n he lays on his bed n starts thnkng abt alka.he cudnt sleep due 2 ovr excitement so he comes out of his room n watches the stars in the sky.its full moon nyt.he calls alka.
alka z surprized seeing his no.she cant sleep eithr.
she quickly picks up the call on the 1st ring
alka"hi chander!how r u?"
chander"m gud.how r u?did i dstrb u?"
alka"no!nt at all.i cudnt sleep so i ws out in the sky.watchng the stars at nyt z so good!i love it!"
chander"hmmm!!!who r u searchng in the stars??"
alka(hesitantly)wat?no1!
c"lolz..i ws joking"
a"chanderrr"
while talkng both of them r lookng at the sky n they see a shootng star!
both of them stop talkng,close their eyes n make a wish!
chander"did u see wat i saw?"
alka"i saw a shootng star"
c"yep!do u believe in shootng stars"
a" "nt actually
c"so u sint make a wish"
a"wen did i say tat?"
c"so wat did u wish?"
a"if u tell ur wishes,they dnt come true"
c"ok!"
n they kept talkng the whole nyt widout even realising.wen the 1st dawn ray stricked his face,then only chander realised how long hav they been talkng.
c"oh m so sorry alka!i kept u awake the whole nyt"
a"no prob!i had a gr8 time"
c"me 2!"
a"ok i v 2 rush 4 the college as its ma presentation 2day"
c"best of luck"
a"thnks!tc!bye"
c"bye"
n both rushed 2 get ready!
precap:first hugLOL


Edited by tinatartari - 13 May 2011 at 8:21am

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