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ff:2gethr ever aftr!!updated part 15 (2 july) (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
Thats awesome.....plz continueWink

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Originally posted by tinatartari

                PART 1 (edited:plz re-read)
Evening
Alka came back in her room after her bicycle ride in the woods. she ws humming the tone"BABY,BABY,BABY" on entering her room.
Annie asked her  "HEY Alka!wats the matter?alka n song?n tat 2 romantic!is everythng ok?"
Alka"yup dear!i ws just free 4m ma substage so m enjoying this"
Annie"oh!btw how did ur substage go?"
Alka"it ws awesome n guess who took ma viva?it ws our new teacher dr eric pattrison!"
Annie"Eric!man he z so dashing!i wish i had taken ma viva wid him!i wud hav loved it!u knw wat all girls drool over him!
Alka"stop it!he z just a teacher.n we shudnt thnk like tat abt him!"
Annie"oh!come on deary!he z afresh 4m medical school n z nt so elder than us!"
Alka"stop ur nonsense annie!"
Annie"oh u boring old lady!just keep dreaming abt ur prince charming n dnt take interest in handsome hot hunks!!n ull land up wid a poor soul like u or ll b alone 4ever!"
Alka"ma prince charming wud b simple,caring n nice unlike these stupid boys over wich many girls drool!"
Annie"oh u n ur stupid dreams!forget it!u wont get any1 ever n ll  single like tat"
Alka"annniiee uuuuuuu(throws a pillow at her)
Annie"alkaaaa(throws a pillow back)
they had a pillow fight n end up hugging each othr n lights out...
Chander z sitting on his reading table studying 4 his law test 2moro wen his roomie ralph enters wid food 4 them.yummy chicken sandwiches wid coke.he z so immersed in studies tat he doesnt notices ralph.ralph clears his throat 2 get his attention bt no use.so he goes 2 chander n gently strikes his head.chander looks at him abruptly.
Ralph"hello!good evening gentleman!come 2 the world mr chander!i hav been calling u since 5 mins"
Chander"oh sorry ralph!i dint knw u were here!i ws studying 4 ma law test!u tell wats the  matter??"
Ralph"mr chander n his books!no interest in anythng else!u knw wat chander apart 4m ur creapy books thr z a beautiful creature in this world called girls.i thnk u shud also take a look at them"
Chander"m here 4 studies so tat i wud b the best lawyer n then i d go 2 ma country n join politics"
Ralph"if u hav 2 join politics anyways,wats the use of studying law?y waste urself 4 smthng u dnt wanna follow in future?"
Chander"i wanna knw how 2 bring a change before becoming a part of it.our leaders gandhi gee n nehru gee were also lawyers b4 they became leaders"
Ralph"make some love 2!add some colours 2 ur black n white life mr chander!u n ur philosophies.life z so sweet!donot waste it gentleman!u only live 1ce so rejoice it!"
Chander"love n defeat dnt exist 4 me"
Ralph"god!u n ur dialogues!y dnt u ecome a script writer?"
CHANDAR"stop it man!"
RALPH"ok lets eat!"
n they both eat n go 2 sleep.
Recap:back 2 india
Note:I want 2 make some thngs clear before proceeding wid the story!abhishek alka n chander nandini r siblings.chander,alka,abhishek n nandini r childhood frends.they share many memories 2gether bt wen they wr 12 alka n chander went abroad 4 studies.they live in the same city bt never met each othr.coz chander s mother savitri doesnt like his n alka s proximities n she created a huge misunderstanding in chander s heart tat alka z jealous of him n in alka tat chander beefooled her n z a casanova.so both hate each othr n never met aftr moving abroad.
If u like this plz do not 4get 2 hit the like button n leave some comments.it z a treat 4 me 2 read ur comment.they really make me feel gr8!so plz comment!!!u can also write suggestions,criticism.if u want me 2 add somethng or remove smthng,do lemme knw.
love tina



@tina...awesome...u r a good writer...but plzzz write about abhini also...im dying to read their story imagined by u


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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged
@anjali sure ma next epi wud b abt them.i hav made the story already bt cnt find time 2 wwrite.sorry 4 tat ll update soon

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
only 4 ppl read ma ff!!no response 4m any1 else :( do i write tat boriung????
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                PART 3
india
a young boy comes out after having a bath.he z in a towel.wen he comes out,he shouts:bahadur!whr r my clothes"
bahadur replies"abhishek sir!they r here"
abhishek wears them n get ready.they r casuals.
ram comes running."chotey saab baade sahab z calling u"
abhishek replies(in an irritating tone)"tell him im coming"
then he goes 2 NNT s room,knocks at the door.NNT gestures him 2 come in.
abhishek"yes papa!wats the matter?u called me?"
NNT"yes son!i wanted 2 tell u 2moro at 6:30 in the evening u hav 2 go 2 geeta dancing academy as the chief guest.
abhishek"no papa!m v busy.i cant go"
NNT"an order z an order son.u hav 2 go"
next day
abhishek gets ready 4 his date wid reeta,his new gf.ram comes wid a reminder.
gopal"sir u hav 2 go 2 geeta dancing school"
abhishek(makes faces)"damn man!papa thinks of me as his puppet!"
he calls reeta n apologizes n sets out 4 the event.
he z given a warm welcome thr.then every1 gets seated n the show starts.
they call different dancers bt abhishek z busy txting reeta.then comes a dancer nandini.this name strikes his mind n he looks up whr he sees an angel face dancing on the tunes of chalka chalka re.
he got msemerized by her beauty.a fair colored tall girl wid dark brown hair,blue eyes wearing a white dress.
the dance ends bt abhishek still lost in her.she performs n goes back stage.abhi s eyes started searching 4 her.he forgets everythng.he then decides in his mind she wud b his new gf.the owner z sitting beside him.he asks her 2 give him the contact details of the dancer n fix his meeting wid her.
after the function z over,the owner takes him 2 his office n comfortably seats him.then he asks his peon 2 call nandini while abhi having his tea.she comes.he introduces himself n asks her 4 a coffee outside the next day.she reluctantly agrees cz of the gesturing of the owner 2 say yes.
the next day
abhishek gets ready 4 the date.he wears his best clothes n applies his fav perfume 2 enchant women.
nandini comes in the cafe.
abhi"hi"
nandu"hi"
abhi"come sit!(pulls out a chair 4 her)
nandu"(sits n looks at him in expressions of wat does he wants??)
abhi"u r looking beautiful.ur eyes,ur hair they r so beautiful."
nandu"sir m sorry bt m nt tat type of a girl"
abhi"wat type?(naughtily)
nandu"wat u r thinking.m a middle class girl whose values n self respect z everythng"
abhi"i dnt mean 2 degrade u.just wanted 2 b frends wid u"
nandu"sorry sir!i dnt make boy frends"
saying this she gets up n goes
coming up:
abhi enchanting nandini


Edited by tinatartari - 09 April 2011 at 5:51am

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                part 4
chander boarded in the flight 4 india.wen the flight ws ready 2 take off,a lady came of nearly his age n sat on the seat adjacent his.she ws beautiful.tall,dark eyes,fair complexion,curly hair,confident looking.wen their eyes met,she gave him a smile.he smiled back n ws lost in those pretty eyes of hers.she then shifted her gaze 2 othr side bt he cudnt take his eyes off her.he fell in love wid her at the 1st sight.
time ws passing n india ws coming near n near.he wanted 2 b like this close  her 4evr.the air hostess came n asked"sir u want anything?"
chander"ladies 1st plz"
girl"thnks.i want a hot coffee"
AH"ok maam!sir u want anythng?"
chander"same as hers"
though he dint like coffee n he used 2 take tea bt he just cudnt thnk of anythng.he wnted 2 impress the lady.chander shukla who has never even looked at any girl ws nw trying 2 impress her.he dint knw y bt tat girl had smthng tat ws attracting him.
the airhostess made an announcement
"respected passengers!we r abt 2 land.plz take ur seats,fasten ur seat belts.switch off ur mobiles."
chander s heart went like as if it had stopped beating.he just said 2 the lady
"maam cn u plz pass me the newspaper."
she did.then the plane landed n the passengers moved out.he unwantedly got up 2 go.the lady has already gone.he then went 2 the luggage place 2 get his bag.he took his bag n came back.
alka came 2 her home 4m the airport wid abhi.he came esp 2 pick her up.they met aftr 6 yrs n both of them were so happy reminising their childhood.she ws very excited n wanted 2 give every1 the gifts she had brought 4 them.wen she opened her bag,she ws really very shocked 2 c tat it had male clothes.she then realized tat her bag got exchanged wid sm1 at the airport.she went back 2 the airport n asked the enquiry services.
meanwhile wen chander also went home,he ws shocked 2 c his bag his ladies clothes n many gifts.he rushed 2 the airport.
chalka at airport
 chander got his bag 4m the lady it got exchanged wid.n alka got it 4m the man it got exchanged wid(wat did u guys thot?their bags got exchanged wid each othr?no!lolz..c here ws another twist.i told u ma story z different 4m the others!)
but a good luck happened 2 chander aftrwards.he gotta c the lady sitting wid him thru out his journey.he ws once again msemerized by her beauty.both of them were moving out of the airport wen he saw her.somebody wid the luggage thrashed the trolly on her n she ws abt 2 fall down wen he got hold of her 4m her waist.he kept looking into her eyes.she said"im ok.thnks."
he quickly left her n she straightened herself up.
then they both went out of the airport n went 2 their destinations.
recap
chander meets the lady again.
 


Edited by tinatartari - 09 April 2011 at 5:53am

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             part 5
note:in this part 4 the 1st time i hav mentioned chander,alka,abhi n nandini 2gether.hope u enjoy it.plz plz plz give some comments.im dying 4 them.
abhi kept thinking of nandini n chander of his new found love.savitri noticed chander z nt taking any interest in anythng though he has came home aftr so long.she thot he might hasnt liked india.she kept asking him the matter bt he told nothing so she felt he might hav changed in those yrs.he went out 2 c different places.he went 2 c historic places wid chand,his driver n he also spent some time wid nandini whom he ws very close 2.they shared many secrets in childhood 2 n he told her everythng.she nvr shared it wid savitri.
one day they were sitting in the lawn sipping coffee which she made esp on chander s demand.
nandini"bro!u never had coffee b4!y this change?"
chander"nothng sis deary!its just tat i hav started loving coffee more"
nandu"no bro!i cn sense thr z smthng fishy.u nvr changed urself since childhood n u nvr changed till nw.then y sme changes?y r u so lost in thots nwadays?everythng alright?"
chandu"absolutely ma sis deary!im fit n fine n the same old chander u knew b4!boston cnt make me different!"
nandu"dnt lie chanduuu!!!"
chandu"hey stop calling me chandu!u nanduu"
nandu"ok jokes apart tell me wats wrong?"
chandu"ok.look thr z a girl i met at the airport"
nandu"oooooo girl!chandu baba struck!who z tat unlucky 1 stuck wid such an unromantic man!"
chandu"stop it nandini or ill nt tell u anythng!"
nandu"ok baba m sorry.nw tell!"
chandu"i fell in love wid her at the 1st sight!"
nandu"hmm good.then"
chandu"then the plane landed n she left"
nandu"omg!how silly!u dint even stop her 2 ask her name."
chandu"i dint find the courage 2!"
nandu"man!nothng cn b done 4 u!ok nw?wat next?"
chandu"i truly love her n ma heart says tat if my love z true then ill find her anyway!"
nandu"ok lets c"
chandu"lets c!my coffee has becaome cold"
nandu"ok ill make new 4 u"
chandu"luv u sis"
nandu"np bro!"
meanwhile in tiwari house
alka z on her lap top video chatting wid her friend tina.
alka"hi tina!hoz it gng in NY?"
tina"just same as usual.ma parents keep fighting wid each othr n nw they hav filed a divorse.i just want 2 come back 2 boston!damn!wen r the vacations ending?"
alka"dnt worry tina!everythng ll b fine"
tina"nothng ll b fine"
as she ws chatting,abhi comes in her room n covers both her eyes wid his hands.
alka"stop it abhi!cant u c m talking 2 ma frend!"
abhi"u cn talk 2 her wen u r in boston bt plz talk 2 me nw.im tired of being alone!"
alka"ok just wait 4 5 mins."
abhi"ok"
alka(to tina):"sorry buddy!i ll talk 2 u later!bye!tc!"
coming up:
back 2 boston


Edited by tinatartari - 09 April 2011 at 3:42am

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