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ff:2gethr ever aftr!!updated part 15 (2 july) (Page 2)

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
                PART 1 (edited:plz re-read)
Evening
Alka came back in her room after her bicycle ride in the woods. she ws humming the tone"BABY,BABY,BABY" on entering her room.
Annie asked her  "HEY Alka!wats the matter?alka n song?n tat 2 romantic!is everythng ok?"
Alka"yup dear!i ws just free 4m ma substage so m enjoying this"
Annie"oh!btw how did ur substage go?"
Alka"it ws awesome n guess who took ma viva?it ws our new teacher dr eric pattrison!"
Annie"Eric!man he z so dashing!i wish i had taken ma viva wid him!i wud hav loved it!u knw wat all girls drool over him!
Alka"stop it!he z just a teacher.n we shudnt thnk like tat abt him!"
Annie"oh!come on deary!he z afresh 4m medical school n z nt so elder than us!"
Alka"stop ur nonsense annie!"
Annie"oh u boring old lady!just keep dreaming abt ur prince charming n dnt take interest in handsome hot hunks!!n ull land up wid a poor soul like u or ll b alone 4ever!"
Alka"ma prince charming wud b simple,caring n nice unlike these stupid boys over wich many girls drool!"
Annie"oh u n ur stupid dreams!forget it!u wont get any1 ever n ll  single like tat"
Alka"annniiee uuuuuuu(throws a pillow at her)
Annie"alkaaaa(throws a pillow back)
they had a pillow fight n end up hugging each othr n lights out...
Chander z sitting on his reading table studying 4 his law test 2moro wen his roomie ralph enters wid food 4 them.yummy chicken sandwiches wid coke.he z so immersed in studies tat he doesnt notices ralph.ralph clears his throat 2 get his attention bt no use.so he goes 2 chander n gently strikes his head.chander looks at him abruptly.
Ralph"hello!good evening gentleman!come 2 the world mr chander!i hav been calling u since 5 mins"
Chander"oh sorry ralph!i dint knw u were here!i ws studying 4 ma law test!u tell wats the  matter??"
Ralph"mr chander n his books!no interest in anythng else!u knw wat chander apart 4m ur creapy books thr z a beautiful creature in this world called girls.i thnk u shud also take a look at them"
Chander"m here 4 studies so tat i wud b the best lawyer n then i d go 2 ma country n join politics"
Ralph"if u hav 2 join politics anyways,wats the use of studying law?y waste urself 4 smthng u dnt wanna follow in future?"
Chander"i wanna knw how 2 bring a change before becoming a part of it.our leaders gandhi gee n nehru gee were also lawyers b4 they became leaders"
Ralph"make some love 2!add some colours 2 ur black n white life mr chander!u n ur philosophies.life z so sweet!donot waste it gentleman!u only live 1ce so rejoice it!"
Chander"love n defeat dnt exist 4 me"
Ralph"god!u n ur dialogues!y dnt u ecome a script writer?"
CHANDAR"stop it man!"
RALPH"ok lets eat!"
n they both eat n go 2 sleep.
Recap:back 2 india
Note:I want 2 make some thngs clear before proceeding wid the story!abhishek alka n chander nandini r siblings.chander,alka,abhishek n nandini r childhood frends.they share many memories 2gether bt wen they wr 12 alka n chander went abroad 4 studies.they live in the same city bt never met each othr.coz chander s mother savitri doesnt like his n alka s proximities n she created a huge misunderstanding in chander s heart tat alka z jealous of him n in alka tat chander beefooled her n z a casanova.so both hate each othr n never met aftr moving abroad.
If u like this plz do not 4get 2 hit the like button n leave some comments.it z a treat 4 me 2 read ur comment.they really make me feel gr8!so plz comment!!!u can also write suggestions,criticism.if u want me 2 add somethng or remove smthng,do lemme knw.
love tinaBig smile


Edited by tinatartari - 09 April 2011 at 5:33am

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged
awesome part1 of story tina dear.....Embarrassed 
i loved all the scenes n i went to heaven/dreamland aftr readin each line.....EmbarrassedDay Dreaming
plz.. plz.. continue writin n do continue the story......Wink

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@sv thnks.ill update soon

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged
awesome update Tina...loved it ooh chalka misunderstanding...update soon
oh, and btw, pls dont type the whole thing in capitals, its against IF's rules...thanks

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
@suvi against if rules?oh m so sorry i dint knw.

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
nice.. plz continue...
its difficult to read in capitals ... Pinch

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           part 2
morning
annie"alka!alka!wake up!u r getting late 4 college"
alka"ok m getting up annie!"
she gets up stretching her arms upwards,quickly get out of her spread,rush 2 brush her teeth,wears a pink top n jeans n get ready 4 college.
chander has already woke up n aftr getting ready z studying.ralph woke up lazily n gets ready n they went 2 college.
3 months later
its end of term n vacations
alka z packing her bags n so z chander.both of them r returning 2 their home town aftr 6 yrs.
alka s POV
she z very excited 2 come back home.she ll smell her soil again n ll meet her parents.c the place whr she spent her childhood.meet her dear brothr n her childhood frends.bt still she z a bit gloomy n depressed of meeting her first,unexpressed secret love admiration chander who hates her nw due 2 MU his mum created.
yes,anothr twist in the story.chander z alka s 1st love 4m childhood.she always dreamt of being wid him bt his mum shattered her dreams n she never expressed her love due 2 fear of getting rejected
chander s POV
he has a definite mission in mind tat he has 2 fulfil(tats a mystery n ll b revealed aftrwards).he doesnt want 2 go home 2 refresh those memories of his childhood tat hurt him n r a hurdle in his mission.he doesnt want 2 c alka s face ever again.
aftr packing their bags,alka n chander leave 4 the airport.annie n ralph say them goodbye n they board the plane.
recap:in india
p.s sorry 4 the small update bt i wrote it twice cz wenever i write it on IF ma lap top gets struck n i hav 2 restart it.it doesnt get struck any othr time.
plz press the like button if u like it n do leme knw if u want any changes in it!
love tina


Edited by tinatartari - 09 April 2011 at 5:46am

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
awesome update Tina...ooh Chandu has a mission...update soon..wanna know..
(oh and if it keeps getting stuck, then write it on word or somewhere instead so that it is saved ;)

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