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FF-Aisi bhi Ek Love Story#1 See Page 154 (Page 84)

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Hmm... toh abhay had bitten piya...
waiting for the next update
story getting interesting with every update
 
love-Piya

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wao amzinggg,superb
plz cnt soon.
luv u
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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged

fabulous update

love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
awesome update...
Nice precap...
Upd soon...

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged

Part 31

 

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Piya walked down...searched Misha and handed over the call

Panchi: you moron!

Misha: why are you boiling fatty!

Panchi: Piya ka dhyan nahi rakh sakti tum!

Misha: kya hua use?

Panchi: She was weak!

Misha: omg! Sorry di! I'll make sure she is fine from now!

Panchi: you better!!

 

***

 

Misha: Ok Panch! Don't worry'I'll make sure she's fit and fine!

Panchi: hmm! Please take care of her'huh?

Misha: you don't worry

Panchi: with you in, I am sure to have worries. Take good care of my princess!

Misha: yes boss!

Panchi: ok bye!

Misha: luv you fatty!

Panchi: *ummah*

Misha smiles'look at Piya and then hands over the phone!

 

Misha: Piya! You should have told me if you were sick!

Piya: But I am not sick Mish! I am just a bit tired and Panchi di is just over-reacting!

Misha: haan waise yeh to uski purani aadat hai!

Piya: yah!

Misha: but tum chalo kamre mein, I'll call the doctor, chup, argue mat karna.

 

Abhay had been eavesdropping and got really worried hearing about the doctor. He decided to follow them.

 

Misha made Piya slouch on the bed meanwhile the doctor stepped in.

Misha: Thank you doctor, glad you came!

Doctor: It's my duty Ms. Dobriyal!

Misha: aap Piya ka check-up kar lijiye!

Doctor: hmm.

 

She checked Piya while Misha lingered outside walking to and fro. Finally she was called in

Doctor: She is not at all well Misha beta!

Misha (tensed): Kya hua Doctor?

Doctor: She is over-stressed and over-exhausted!

Misha: omg!

Doctor: Haan Misha, you better take care of your behena!

Misha smiled weakly: Ji bilkul, aaj se 24 hrs meri duty!

Piya moaned: Doctor, main theek hoon!

Doctor: tum mujhse zyada khud ko nahi jaanti!

Piya smiled: ji!

 

Misha escorted the doctor. Meanwhile Piya closed her eyes and slept off- tired and sleep-deprived as she was! She didn't realise when someone entered her room and sat beside her on her bed.  She just kept on sleeping. Abhay swiped his cold finger-tips on her cheeks and she just moved clumsily.

Abhay went near to kiss her forehead: I love you!!

Piya moved again and then sweat appeared on her forehead. Abhay wiped it off and then kissed and went away.

 

Piya was sleeping restlessly. After so many days, the dream haunted her again.

 

*~*~*~*

 

This time, she stood at the edge of the cliff with faint voices from behind. They all yelled, Piya!! But she had a strange feeling and wish to jump down straight from the cliff. Misha called her- Piya! I will never ever see you again!! Arnab asked: Piya beta, mat jao.

But Piya just ignoring everything, jumped down. The cliff didn't seem to end and Piya found herself falling down without a halt. And then before she could scream, cold hands encircled her. She turned and clung to Abhay. He whispered- dekha, meri duniya mein aane ke chakkar mein tum apni duniya se kitna durr ho gayi! Ab waapas nahi jaa paogi! Piya replied- Till the time, main tumhare saath hoon, mujhe koi darr nahi hai! And then they landed on the ground. Around her, Piya saw the days and moments spent with Abhay floating in the sky while Abhay slowly drifted away from her. She called- Abhay!! He just replied- you'll hurt yourself Piya. Slowly and steadily, Abhay disappeared and Piya was surrounded by blood-craving Vampires from all around'

 

*~*~*~*

 

Piya rose up suddenly inhaling heavily and looked through the window. Faint orange light of the sun entered the room informing Piya that evening adorned the earth. Piya then wiped her face and then moved to the washroom. She splashed water several times before she retreated back on her bed. She was bored and needed something to divert her mind. "Calling di would be even worse, she would start worrying", thought Piya. Finally, she draped herself with a stole and then moved out. Her eyes dazzled because of being in dark for a long time. They were swollen, though a little better than how they were few hours back. As soon as she came out, Misha tracked her and then,

Misha: kahaan jaa rahi thi?

Piya: ainvayi thoda sa walk pe!

Misha: c'mon main bhi chalti hoon!!

Piya: theek hai.. but behave!

Misha: of course baba!

 

Misha and Piya found Abhay on the stairs. Misha poked him-

Misha: hey dude!

Piya looked at him with unfathomable pain in her eyes. She was trying very hard to stop the tears. Then she turned her face away coldly and continued to descend. Looking at such an ignorant behaviour, Misha whispered to Abhay-

Misha: pata nahi isko kya ho gaya hai! Do din pehle to theek thi, and ab dekho, kuch bolti nahi! Aur upar se fatty mujhe daant ti rehti hai!

Abhay: woh theek hai na?

Misha: yaa! Bas doctor ne kaha ki uske kaafi stress hai. Na jaane yeh stress kaunsa hai!

Abhay: hmm, Misha mujhe thoda kaam hai! Main tumse baad mein milta hoon.

Misha: ok, see ya dude!

Abhay: hmm!

 

Meanwhile, Misha hopped down the stairs calling, Piya!!

Piya: ya!

Misha: kya yr tum, ruki kyun nahi!

Piya: umm, arey Mish agar raat ho gayi to thand badh jayegi aur phir walk pe jaane se kya phayada! Haina!?

Misha: hmm, chalo!

Misha hugged Piya from one hand. Abhay turned back while walking and Piya turned her face back at the same time. Their eyes met, spoke to each other'demanding the reason for the separation and then they parted ways.

 

At Night:

 

Piya lay on her bed turning on her left side cuddled in the blanket still fighting with her emotions. Then she suddenly stood upright' wiped off her tears and thought: bas! Bahut ho gaya Piya! Tu us insaan ke liye ro rahi hai, jo tujhe ek chhote se haadse mein chhod ke chala gaya! Nahi wo darinda, tere aansuon ke kaabil bhi nahi hai! He's not worth it. Bas, jab tu kabhi apni mom ko yaad kar ke nahi royi! To kya ab us khoon peete jaanwar ke liye aansoo bahayegi? Bilkul nahi! Bas chup ho jaa!

She wiped off her tears, splashed water and then went off to sleep without reflecting over him.

 

Next Day:

 

This day was their final day at Delhi and the next day, Piya would be at Dehradun with her family. She thought- sab kuch normal ho jayega. Sirf aaj ki raat mushkil hai Piya. She looked at the watch there were 11 hours left for the final event and each member of the band was having goosebumps. Piya went to take a bath after which she dressed herself in her most favourite and comfortable attire- Jeans and Tee. She tucked her cell and her money in her pockets and then locked her room.

 

She reached the hall before anyone else and so she started recalling her moves and lines. She had practised them a dozen times and now they seemed monotonous and samey. Then there was a shriek of door opening. She turned around to find Abhay entering the hall. Piya turned her face so as not to face him and took out her cell;

Piya: Holla di!

Panchi: Good Morning princess!

Piya: kaise ho?

Panchi: fit and fine, tum batao?

Piya: bindass! And howz jijz! Is he there?

Panchi: Sid is okay! Aur thodi der mein aane waala hai!

Piya: aww! Lucky you di!

Panchi: nahi yr, mujhse humesha fikr rehti hai. Kahin mamma ne dekh liya to?

Piya: kuch nahi hoga di! Aap bas jijz ke saath enjoy karo! Kyunki once we come back, main aapko kisi aur ke saath time spend nahi karne doongi.

 

Meanwhile, Misha hugged Piya from behind: Good Morning birdie!

Piya: Good Morning Mishes!(to Panchi) ok di, time for practise'I'll call you later, cya!

Panchi: bye!

Piya turned back and hugged Misha tightly. Abhay saw the pain behind her smile and gloominess behind her fake bright eyes.

Soon Kabir and T entered and the practise commenced. During the entire act, Piya and Abhay's eyes never met and Piya tried to be as hard as she could. Abhay could but feel the pain in her touch and he felt too guilty to face her'

 

Actually Guys, had planned the performance in this part but when I started writing' it didn't seem to end so had to conclude forcefully over here'

 

Precap

Abhay&Piya- Song Sequence

 

Important Note:

I have two songs in my mind, one is Tum Mile (love reprise) and other Phir Mohabbat (Murder 2)

I want your suggestion as to what should I include in the song sequence



Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 25 August 2011 at 5:00am

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
awesome
wow
great
fabulous
fantastic
brilliant
splendid
excellent
continue soon
plz pm me

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Awesome Shivu..love it..
update soon..

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
gr8 update shivu... abhay is so caring yr!!!! but feel bad 4 dere seperation i hope dey will be togather soon... i cant bear dis pain nymore... n both songs r nyc n romantic but i prefer phir mohobbat...
i loved d update...


Edited by Akshi0019 - 23 August 2011 at 7:29am

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