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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Gr8 part.. Mish-Piya's talk was nice.. Sum1 should teach Madhu a gud lesson.. Poor Piya.. Wats wit d shadow..?? Eagerly waiting for Abhay's Entry.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
awesum part dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei,
i feel ur FF is entirely different from all other FFs in the forum..really i loved it..its fresh..kabir,misha,pia,t,ruhi,angad are best buddies..that is tooooo coooool..in addition they hav a band "living tarnado'..that is super cool..really t being in the gang is gr8 highlight..

once abhay enters other than pia will every1 hav a grudge against him for having ruhi transferred to the other class coz of him?
i wish abhay joins the band later..n they all get along very well with abhay..that wud be soooooo lovely...

hei by the way wats ur name?

PS:in ur title if u cud include the updated part no n page no it wud be easier for ppl to follow up..thread 1 is not apt here i think..coz it implies tat 150 pages..
coz of tat i missed ur 3 parts..just today i read it..


Okay i'll do that from now on...thanks for the suggestion
and i am Shivangi
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Before the update just wanted to share that my board exams are finally over...i am damn happy... just wanted to share my happiness with you all

-Aisi bhi ek Love Story-

Part 4

Mount College(next day)

Piya is all lost...because of the mysterious dream she had and didn't notice Misha calling her...She is worried..Misha senses her worry...

Misha- Kya hua Piya...subah se kahin khoyii hui ho...(to herself) Abhi to Hrithik ki koi film bhi nahi aayi hai...phir aise kyun behave kar rahi hai Confused
Piya- Kuch nahi Misha...a..a...a woh main Ruhi ke baare mein soch rahi thi..How is she??
Misha- Haan abhi woh theek hai...but i m sure going to kill the new admission jiski wajah se yeh hua hai Angry Aaj hi aane wala hai na...some Abhijeet...
Piya- Abhay Raichand
Misha- Haan Abhay Raichand... Achcha sun woh parking lot ke end mein Silver BMW khadi hai...mast hai na

Class

Teacher- Students... let me welcome our new admission Mr. Abhay Raichand...son of the great businessman- Chand Raichand...

A Tall,mysterious looking guy enters the class...in black mysterious attire with mysterious eyes having a butter-scotch tinge...a meek smile on the face

Teacher- Misha Dobriyal..could you please vacate your seat and sit with Kabir...
(to Abhay) Abhay take your seat beside Piya Jaiswal-our all-rounder of the College...
(to Piya) Piya Jaiswal...now it's your responsibility to see that Abhay gets  familiar with the College and the staff and since you are a bright student you need to help Abhay in assignment of the previous term that are required in this term even...is that clear to you Piya?

Abhay gives a meek smile to Piya which she retaliates with a cold face...he is definitely
hurt with this cold behavior...
Abhay- Hi I am Abhay Raichand...
Piya- So??
Abhay(extending his hand)- Whatsay???
Piya- Dekho mujhse friendship ke umeed mat rakho..samjhe tum?
Abhay- Lekin Kyun...tum to bright student ho...why can't you help me?
Piya- Hey Listen...main tumhari help kar doongi fine but tumhari wajah se Ruhi-my friend...she was shifted to some other class and in that shock she had a very serious accident and she is in ICU...so please mujhse issse zyada help ki umeed mat rakhna...

This was too much Abhay could tolerate...His eye-colour started darkening and Abhay just scuttled out of the class...this seemed strange!!!

Piya- What a freak!!

The entire week Abhay was scorned and disregarded by his fellow-mates and all he could do was sit alone in the canteen and see strange looks fastened on him...All this while Piya had started to melt and had sympathy for him...

During that week, Piya and Misha had managed to get Siddharth and Panchi together at a local saree-shop to bury their hatchet.Actually this was Misha's small plan...they had managed to take Panchi out on the clause that they were going to buy some clothes for Panchi to wear as Mrs. Mehra...
To thier luck Sidchi had patched up and with that Panchi's wedding arrangement got a new pace...their relationship was heading towards engagement which was soon to come.!!!!!!!!!!
Piya was still troubled with that dream which was haunting her every night. Piya had a sleepless week...Ruhi had returned to her home for complete bed-rest of a month and that added fuel to fire in Piya-Abhay relationship of hatred(only from Piya's side)...
The Living Tornado was also busy preparing for the extravaganza at delhi which was due in 3 months...Our fashion diva T was busy styling the outfits and costumes for her band and working on her cymbal skills.That Silver BMW was Abhay Raichands which gained greater attention than its owner.
After that week, Piya had gathered courage to beg pardon from Abhay for uttering such rude words...she had realised that how could Abhay, who had just come from Manali a week before, know about the problem he had caused here...it was none of his fault...


Precap- Piya Apologizes to Abhay!

Here I would add that in my ff Siddharth is not a vampire..he is a normal guy!!



Edited by CIDRoxx - 24 March 2011 at 11:23pm

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
gr8 update.. and hey, Abhay in ur ff isn't rude! infact he entered the class with a smile and tried to befriend Piya?! Wow! Thats gr8, simply awesome!!
Luv,
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
hei shivangi,
really loved this abhay who is coming in with a smile unlike our abhay in show..n pia showed her cold attitude..poor abhay..however she's going to apologise to him..hope he apologises her..i thought mish will treat him badly but pia did that..update was too short..as ur xams r over u better sit n write lengthy updates..ok?Smile

PS:abhay in ur FF does he hav some characteristics of edward in twilight?ie,butterscotch eyes which turns shades depending on his mood..



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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
First of all Congrats dat ur Exams r over.. U surely 'll b very Happy.. After all ur a free bird till d results r declare.. Enjoy...!! Abt d Update.. It was Gr8.. Poor Abhay.. In ur FF Abhay is totally different or should I say Opposite from d Show.. He is not at all rude n I loved dat.. Sid-Panchi patched up.. Gud.. Wanna know more abt Piya's Dream.. Precap sounds Nice.. Hope d Apology part goes off well n they 'll b gud friends soon.. Continue soon.. 'll b waiting.. Thanx for d pm.. lol:)

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