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FF-Aisi bhi Ek Love Story#1 See Page 154 (Page 32)

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its awesum yar..

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lovely !!

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awsm part dear.
plz cnt soon.
luv u
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wow nice partClapClap
madhu was so sweetEmbarrassed
so were abhay and piyaEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
hope so abhay will solve her mysteryConfused
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink

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amazing update
love it
pls cont soonnn
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hei shivangi,
its a nice update..pia being supportive for abhay..
poor misha..she is confused to see pia in this state n is suspicious of her behaviour..it would be fun when everyone comes to know abt their relation..dont take long breaks..plsss update soon..

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Part 22

Abhay was really not in a position how to reply to her answers' he decided to study her dreams'
Abhay asked her- What exactly did you see?
Piya replied joyously- umm'I see that I am on a very green and wet place' Orchids bloom all over and I am continuously followed by a shadow'and pata hai Abhay'woh Shadow'bilkul tumhari resemblance hai'I mean it's voice'feel, everything'mujhe kaafi amazement hota hai'but I feel nice even'dunno why!
Abhay kissed her hand- you don't need to worry jaan'
Piya was startled- what did you say?
Abhay- jaan!
Piya blushed and moved her red face away'
Abhay- jab bhi kisi Vampire ki takdeer mein koi ladki likhi hoti hai'us ladki ko aise hi indications aate hain,'
Piya grew curious- Sab girls ko dreams aate hai?
Abhay- nahin'zaroori nahin hai ki'
 
Abhay's sentence was left unfinished when he sensed Kabir coming'
Piya- ki'?
Abhay- Oh! Hi KB! How was your class?
Piya grew attentive'
Kabir- hmm'it was okay'but what happened to you dude?
Abhay- nahin'nothing serious'mujhe breathing mein problem ho rahi thi'
Kabir patted him- you're fine na dude?
Abhay- yeah! All's good! Thanks'
Kabir- aur Piya tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho'don't you wanna have a last practice'?
Piya- umm'haan'chalo'let's go Abhay!
Abhay- hmm'chalo Kabir!
 
Rehearsal Hall'
 
Misha and Ruhi were frustrated with Piya' as soon as she entered'
Misha- hey'let's welcome'Queen Victoria!
Piya- shut up!
Misha- oh'why shut up'don't you have a watch?
Piya- sorry yaar'
 
They started their rehearsals and after 3 hours, the group returned to pack their luggage!
Piya was packing up when Abhay called'
Piya- hey!
Abhay- kya kar rahin thi?
Piya- packing yaar'nopes'no yaar'you done?
Abhay nodded- hmm'done'
Piya- so'we gotta finish our convo'about my so-called dreams'
Abhay- yup'see you at the Airport'hey'wait a sec'I have an idea'let's go together'I'll pick you up'
Piya- oh..no! Kabir ne dekha na'to he'll tease me'no please'
Abhay- kuch nahin hoga'trust me!
Piya- umm'okay! See you then'
Abhay- Love you'
Piya- ya'! Love you too'
 
Misha had been overhearing the convo'Abhay overheard her breaths'
Abhay- Piya'Misha has been eavesdropping on you'erase the history of your calls'
Piya- okay'bye!
 
Misha entered- kisse baat kar rahi thi?
Piya- Kabir se!
Misha- oh' achcha! Chalo'you packed?
Piya- yup!!
Misha-chalo'neeche chalo'mom's calling'
Piya- yeah'I am coming now'you move'
Misha- okies!!
 
2 hours later'
 
It's time to leave and Piya and Misha's luggage are being brought down'Kabir and T enter the Dobriyal House hand-in-hand'
Kabir- hi guys!!
Piya- hey KB!!
Kabir- so Piya'ready to leave?
Piya stuttered- u-um'haan!
Kabir- chalen?
Misha- chalo dude!
Misha poked Piya- chaliye na madam!
Piya closed her eyes- Abhay, mujhe tumhare saath jaana hai!
 
At the spur of the moment, Abhay's car dashed in the Dobriyal driveway!
Piya gasped'Abhay came in completely dressed in his journey apparel'
Arnav- Abhay! Tum yahaan?
Abhay- ji! Main soch raha tha ki Piya ko main apne saath Airport le jaaon?
Arnav- Kabir to sab ko lekar jaa raha hai'
Piya jumped in the convo- Papa! Waise bhi'KB Is taking the entire gang there'it'll be a complete mess'I think I should go with Abhay'
Misha exchanged a glance with Panchi who smiled back'
Arnav- theek hai'phir main tumhara samaan Abhay ki car mein rakhwa deta hoon!
Piya kissed Arnav's cheeks- Thanks papa! And bye!
Arnav embraced her- apna khayal rakhna
Piya and Misha hugged him together'Arnav's eyes moistened'- my dolls!
Misha and Piya then hugged Madhu who applied tika on their foreheads and made them eat sugar-curd'
After hugging Panchi, the sisters left' Arnav hugged Panchi'he had already started missing his daughters'
 
Abhay's Car'
 
Piya- maan gaye'Mr. Abhay! You were awesome today'
Abhay- tumne bhi to mujhe support kiya' saying this Abhay kissed Piya's hand which he was holding'
Piya gasped and then kissed his cheeks'he smiled'.she was flattered by this smile' All the while Abhay drove the Car, he kept holding her hands and she shivered in his touch'She was happy' her love life was finally commencing!
 
Airport
 
Abhay and Piya checked in'They did the formalities and then bumped into a coffee shop to have coffee!
 
I wonder if this is a love story or a Coffee Story
 
They were sitting and chatting when the other members of the band came up'
Misha whispered to Piya- how was the ride?
Piya- are you stupid'tumhe in sab ke alaava kuch nahin soojhta kya?
Misha stuck her tongue out- sorry'ready to dazzle the dance floor'
Piya thumbed up-totally ready!
 
They waited till the announcement to board the flight was made' Abhay and Piya had got seats together and were extremely happy' They boarded the flight and sat on their allotted seats'
Piya entangled her hand in Abhay's and rested her head on his shoulders'The flight took off and Piya dozed off too' Sometime later, Piya woke up and found that Abhay was looking at her and smiling'
Piya- Abhay'tumne mujhe sone kyun diya? I wanted to hear about my dreams'
Abhay- tum sote waqt kaafi cute lagti ho!
Piya blushed- haan'so continue with your revelation'
Abhay- hmm'it's not necessary ki dreams hi aaye'but it's common'kuch bhi ho sakta hai'it's just a way to make the girl understand that her destiny is decided not by her but by someone else'
Piya was amazed- this is Incredible!!
Abhay told her some more things of the Vampire World' his family'
Abhay- our family, we only hunt animals! Not humans'
Piya- kyun?
Abhay- hum apne aap ko monsters nahi kehelwana chahte
Piya hugged him closer- to tum mujhe hurt nahi kar sakte!
Abhay grew serious-mujhe nahi pata ki how long I can control myself!
Piya patted him- forever Abhay!
Abhay smiled and kissed Piya's forehead, then he took out his hand and looked away'Piya felt odd' Then she saw Misha coming towards them and understood everything' She moved away and looked at the window'
Misha- Piya! Tumhare paas apna iPad hai kya'.I need it'
Piya took it out and handed it over to Misha- lekin net mat on karna' it's not allowed here'
Misha- I know ya'duh!
 
The plane landed at Delhi and that's when Abhay woke Piya up from her slumber'
Abhay- utho'Piya!
Piya mumbled- hmm'
Abhay- c'mon'Delhi aa gaya!
Piya- oh' (Rubbing her eyes)
 
They fixed their luggage in the Hotel and went out for site seeing' Abhay and Piya strolled at the Connaught place and had a coffee'

Oh! Man'Coffee again'
 
After a while, they reached the rehearsal area and then practiced before the round 1 competition which was due the next day' Piya and Abhay's chemistry had become the talk of the town'
 
Precap
The extravaganza- Round 1
-Prev PART 21-
 
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Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 22 May 2011 at 3:02am

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