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FF-Aisi bhi Ek Love Story#1 See Page 154 (Page 30)

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
awesome updateClapClap
wow so pia finally knows the truthShockedLOL
and the good part is she accepted it easilyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thanks for the pmSmile
waiting eagerly for the next updateWink

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
lovely update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
nice update ...
thanks for pm...

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
awesome update shivu... thanx for the pm!

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                                             PART 21

Abhay rose up and held Piya closer...he pulled her to his chest and then caressed her forehead...She gasped at his ice-cold touch... He kissed her cheeks and then her temple again...She rose up to kiss his ice-cold cheeks and her lips shivered...Abhay grinned at this...Piya smiled and poked him but got herself a bruise... He kissed her bruise away... Abhay was too ahead in his thinking and he tried to take off her clothes...He was pulling the strap of her top when Piya stopped his hand and ran away laughing...She was too happy that day and couldn't help smiling... She ran home that day all smiling and lost in her own world...
Misha- Hey Piya! How was your day?
Piya didn't reply and went back to her room smiling...Misha wondered- Okay! Ab yeh kya tha...was it a response to my question! definitely not! Khair...woh ladki pagal to hai hi...
She continued with her dinner after which she retreated back to her room...She peeped in Piya's room and found that she was gazing at the window and smiling... Misha was amazed and so she bumped into her room...
Piya almost woke up from her trance and was shocked to see Misha in her room...
Misha- tumhe kya hua?
Piya pretended to be unaware!
Piya- kyun?
Misha- dude! look at you...you're turning blue, red and purple periodically..are you okay?
Piya sighed- yeah! of course I am okay...why are you asking such stupid question Mish?
Misha- tumhari haalat dekho...you're looking so different yaar!
Piya- I don't think so...at all... Misha! I am sleepy...Can I!

Piya pointed at her bed and pillow and then ordered Misha to leave...Misha, the stupid...having no knowledge of love and commitment left...with being suspicious for Piya! 

                                                         ~~~~~~~~~~****~~~~~~~~~~

It was nearly midnight and Piya was awake...still smiling and giggling to herself... Suddenly there was a soft rumble outside which made Piya crawl to the window and found that Abhay had pounced in the Dobriyal backyard...Piya smiled at him and in a moment...he was near her at her window!
Abhay- *phew* your guards are a thing...even for Vampires!
Piya giggled- My dad's kind of supicious! you know!
Abhay- *sighs* yeah! i know...waise...won't you let me in?
Piya grew conscious- oh yaa! ao na!

Abhay jumped in her room silently while Piya closed all the windows and doors... Abhay held her closer and bit her ears...She giggled and licked his bare...hard...stone chest...She was cuddled in his arms occasionally shaking and jittering because of her beau's ice-cold skin...
Piya- You're so cool!
Abhay smiled- and you're hott!!
Piya tucked her face in his chest and smiled...
Abhay- ahem! Shy!! I like it!
Piya poked him- Shut up Abhay!
Abhay- don't you have to sleep?
Piya- mm...nahi!
Abhay- you'll get ill Piya...chalo...
He escorted her back to her bed and she pulled him to it too... She rested her head comfortably on his chest

        
 
Abhay- kya hua?
Piya- you will never leave me naa?
Abhay sweeped his hand on her face- kabhi nahi...tum abhi so jaao!
Piya hugged him closer and slept...

Next Morning...

Piya got up stretched her hands and yawned... She opened her eyes with great difficulty and looked around to fine no one. She searched for his butter-scotch eyes and pale texture but indeed...there was no one... She sighed and got up...

Breakfast Table

Piya reached the breakfast table where Misha and Panchi were already seated...
Misha- Hey!
Piya- Good Morning Misha! Hi Panchi di!
Panchi- Good Morning Sweetu!

Madhu entered holding a tray with juices and then sat down...
Madhu- You girls...mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...matlab sirf Misha aur Piya se...
Misha was excited and so was Piya...

After the breakfast... Madhu called them in her room...
Misha- yes mom!
Madhu- baitho tum dono!
Piya and Misha took their proffered seats
Madhu- Panchi ki shaadi mein ab sirf do mahine reh gaye hain...aur tum logon ka Competition bhi next week se shuru hai...isliye...ab no masti...apna Competition khatam kar ke..I want both of you...to be employed in planning her marriage and her dresses...The relatives have started to arrive and most of them will gather after you return...so get going girls...
Misha and Piya together- ji Mom!
Madhu- jao..ab dono...College ke liye late nahin hona!
Misha kissed Madhu's cheeks and left...Piya felt strange but she started walking alone...
Madhu- Piya!
Piya gasped- ji maa!
Madhu- aren't you my daughter!
Piya gulped- ji!
Madhu- won't you give me the good bye kiss!
Piya was startled...tears welled down her cheeks and she ran and hugged Madhu... she kissed her and left... So much happiness all together... She was too happy...Kabir and her gang was waiting for Misha and Panchi in Kabir Islander...
Kabir- Hi beauties!
Piya poked- Hi again...Rathod Warrior!
Kabir patted her- Piya...tum nahi sudhrogi...
Piya- kabhi nahi!!! Chale!

Piya noticed a ring in T's finger...
Piya- Show Show!!
T blushed and held up her hand...
Misha- kitni pretty hai!
Piya- haan yaar! It's so very pretty! maan gaye KB!
Kabir pulled his collar- waise main khud ki tareef kabhi nahi karta!
Piya- Oh Really!

They reached the College where Abhay was waiting for Piya...she smiled and waved at him...He smiled and waved back...She signaled for Coffee after her classes and he nodded...

History Class

Piya sat next to Abhay and took out her study equipments... The professor entered the class and in Block Letters Wrote...

History of Pandher

Abhay's eyes darkened and his body grew colder and paler...Piya clutched his hands...now understanding his affinity to Pandher Fort...
Piya- Abhay! Calm down...please...

She rose up and called the Professor- Ma'am! Abhay isn't feeling well... Can I take him to the Medical Care Wing!
Professor- What happened?
Piya stuttered- M-Ma'am a-ac-actually Abhay...h--he has some breathing issues...Come...feel his skin...it's turning cold!
Professor went and touched his skin...he was taken aback...feeling the temperature...
She exclaimed- Go...rush him to the hospital...
Piya sighed in relief- Yes Ma'am!

Outside the Class

Abhay held Piya's hand and kissed her...- you're so...
Piya- humari relationship mein compliments ki koi jagah nahi hai Abhay...
Abhay smiled and then went away...Piya returned to her class...

Coffee Shop

However tensed and different Abhay would be...yet he never broke Piya's promise...so he was waiting for her at their so familiar Coffee House...
Piya- Hi! How do you feel now?
Abhay- *sighs* good! class kaisi thi?
Piya- pakau...!
Abhay smiled- tumhe mujhse kuch baat karni thi?
Piya- yeah!
Abhay- bolo?
Piya- Abhay...I told you na...mujhe kuch dino se...in fact mahino se ek dream aata hai...I dunno why!
Abhay- Ya...tumne mujhe bataya tha...
 
Abhay held her closer...

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Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 22 May 2011 at 3:01am

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Woww Shivangi Awesome Update.. Loved Abhiya.. I like Madhu now..she surely has changed a lot.. :) Finally Piya is happy.. D way Piya handled d situation in history class was Gr8.. U havnt reveal d suspense behind Piya's Dreams..waiting for it.. Continue soon.. thanxxx for d pm.. lol..

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