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FF-Aisi bhi Ek Love Story#1 See Page 154 (Page 23)

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Amazing partz.
too gud.
gr8 part dear.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Nice part Shivangi!!! Twilight style!!Wink Anyways, its one of my favourite parts ever from a novel, loved it here to....Big smile
-Nidhi Hug

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
awesome update
pls cont soonnnnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhhhh

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Awesome Update Shivangi.. Loved Abhiya.. n d Dobriyals Dinner Part was Gr8.. Just waiting 2 know all abt Piya's Dreams.. Y is she getting all such Dreams..?? Carry on.. Thanx for d pm..lol.

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Ossum yaar...nyc ff...luvin it... Big smile

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great yaar!just awesome...
update soonWink

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Continue sooon and please add me 2 the PM list of ur both FFs

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                                     PART 19

Piya felt very strange regarding Abhay's behaviour' It had been 2 months she had known him and his behaviour changed everyday'rather every hour'may be every minute! As she was getting ready, various questions muddled up in her mind! On one hand, she had a strange infatuation for him' she herself didn't understand what the feeling was and what name did the world give to such feelings' Was it Love or mere infatuation'? She knew Abhay was waiting for her and so she hurried up. She gulped the glass of milk and when she came out'she saw he was waiting for her'
Abhay- Let's go!
Piya- umm' Piya felt strange' she wasn't really sure that if she could trust Abhay with their friendship anymore'
Abhay insisted- Chalo' what you're waiting for?!
Piya- umm'.nothing! chalo!
In the car, She wasn't really sure as to how to a conversation with him'he had made things so complicated'It was really awful' Abhay sensed hesitation and made Piya's work easier'
Abhay- kuch kehna hai?
Piya- umm'
Abhay- Say it!
Piya- You said we shouldn't be friends'you're not safe for me! And now you're like'you know'umm'hanging out with me'it's umm' strange!
Abhay smiled- Yeah'! Actually I said we shouldn't be friends not that I don't want to be your friend'you're a sweet girl'You get it?
Piya- hmm'
Abhay still looked straight forward' no change in his expression'
Piya looked lost'she thought-Shouldn't be friends'not that he doesn't want to be? What does this mean now? Abhay shook her when she realized that they had already reached the College'
Abhay- Lost..huh?
Piya- No'revising some notes'
Abhay made her come out of the car and escorted her to the class-room' Piya just gazed at him. All this while'she kept on thinking'Abhay's strange behaviour' When the class was over'she confronted him again'
Piya- I need to talk to you! Can We? She pointed out at the Coffee Shop where their friendship had blossomed'
Abhay- hmm' Okay!

COFFEE SHOP-

Piya and Abhay took a comfortable seat by the window. She wanted to speak to him'
Piya- I want some answers'
Abhay- Like what?
Piya- Can we start afresh with our friendship'I mean'you're a great friend'I can't loose you just like that' Please!
Abhay- That wouldn't be safe'
Piya- Please'I beg! Her tone almost would have broken down if Abhay hadn't held her hand and consoled her'
Abhay remained silent for a long time which made Piya restless'
Piya- So?
Abhay- hmm' okay'we can try!
A wide smile swept across her lips' Abhay felt so delighted. Piya shook his hands and continued with her coffee!
Piya- So what about'. Our history Project' that was when you disappeared!
Abhay- agar tumhe Pandher Fort jaana hai then you go alone'or take Kabir or Misha with you'I just don't like the ambiance of the Fort' I hope you understand
Piya didn't argue further' After all, she had got Abhay back recently!- yeah! That's fine! Absolutely okay!
Abhay relaxed- Thanks!
Piya- Anytime!
 
After the coffee, they went to a local mall and shopped for some of the dresses for Panchi's marriage' Piya bought a nice sherwani for Abhay'
Misha ringed Piya'
Misha- Kahaan ho? We are practising'you coming?
Piya- umm' me busy yaar! Will practise tomorrow! Sorry!
Misha heard Abhay's voice and understood everything- hmm'okay! Apni date enjoy karo!
Piya- Shut up Mishes' okay bye!
Misha- bye!
 
They walked leisurely along the footpath chatting with each other and then had dinner together at a Chinese Restaurent!
Piya- tum kuch nahi loge?
Abhay- umm'nahi'mujhe bahar ke khaane se allergy hai!
Piya- oh! Koi baat nahi' Cold- Drink to pee sakte ho na?
Abhay- Mujhe achchi nahi lagti!
Piya was shocked- seriously?
Abhay smiled- yes!
Piya munched her noodles and Manchurian while Abhay just watched her smiling and relishing each variety of food!
 
He dropped her back home at about 11:00 pm and returned back'
The Dobriyals were already asleep except for Misha who anxiously waited for Piya to return!
Misha- kya kiya? Kiss kiya? I love you bola?
Piya closed her mouth and then fisted her'
Piya- tu pagal hai kya'hum log project discuss karne gaye the'dumbo! Idiot! Fool! Kuch bhi samajh leti hai'
Misha- project koi raat ke gyarah baje tak discuss karta hai kya?
Piya- tumhe kya samajh aayega! Tumne to apne project abhi tak likha bhi nahi' tum kya samjhogi!
Misha- umm'.waise you're right! Chalo sone chalet hain'
Piya- hmm!
 
Piya stretched herself and went into a deep slumber-
 
She was lying on the same gloomy scene' Orchids and lilies blooming and raining! The shadow was pellucid this time'his eyes were visible'quite clear that they were Abhay's eyes! She drew near him' She asked him- Is that you Abhay? He smiled' She felt blissful' She went near him'She felt him' It was cold'she quivered! The shadow advance towards her cheeks and caressed her. She felt divine!
 
Piya moved comfortably in her dreams' Someone stood watching her sleep' She was so happy and joyous'she had got back her best friend! The feeling was mind-boggling' She had started loving him' She knew that somewhere in her sub-conscious mind'but her actual conscious mind would take some time to register and agree to the fact' In the midst of her dreams, she got a strange feeling that someone was watching her. That made her wake up suddenly. When she looked around, she saw Abhay by the window' Before she could call him'he was gone' She felt a tickle'she giggled again'
 
She dozed off again and woke up directly at Misha's call. It was a big day that day! There final rehearsal at Dehradun which was to be inspected by the Principal before they left for Delhi. She was very excited that day'
 
As soon as they reached the venue, they found Abhay was already waiting for them' the Principal came soon and they showed their first dance performance' They wore their dresses accordingly' Piya wore a black, elegant gown and Abhay wore a black coat with a sexy red tie'! He looked hot!
 
The music soon caught up pace and Abhay and Piya swayed along the tune of 'I am in Love'
 
Abhay and Piya
 
They swayed to the dance moves and their eye-lock looked mesmerising' They were lost in each other' forgetting the outside world'the band'their Principal watching' She whispered to Abhay' Its beautiful song na! Abhay lifted her up for the next beat
 Abhay and Piya

He murmured- Its really romantic' Misha'who was really close to Kabir..whispered to him'Dude! They look so perfect'divine'cutest! Kabir nodded'
 
Abhay and Piya
 
Kabir replied- Piya is so happy and smiling when he is around her' She looks different! Misha replied almost suddenly- hmm. I know dude! They continued with their tune while Piya and Abhay matched steps to the beat'
 
When the performance ended, Principal applauded and gave a standing ovation' Misha made Piya clap'that's what when both of them realized that the song was over' She whispered in Piya's ear- Piya! That was so romantic! Cool dude! You were fantabulous! Piya replied back- Thanks Meeshes!  Misha noticed that Piya was still holding Abhay's hand and so she poked her- Waise'ab haath chod sakti ho! Piya blushed and left Abhay's hand'
 
Panchi and Sid'who were watching the dress rehearsal ran and hugged Piya and Misha for their awesome-blossom performance' They even hugged Abhay and thanked him for taking out the group from the trouble when the group lacked a male performer' They even invited Abhay to join for dinner they had arranged for the band...

                                                  Precap
                                      HeartLove is in the Air?Heart
                                             -Prev PART 18-
                                             -Next PART 20-

                                Hope you enjoyed the Update!
                                     I tried to make it long!
                                 I personally loved writing it!
                                 Please do tell me your views!



Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 08 May 2011 at 1:00am

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