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FF-Aisi bhi Ek Love Story#1 See Page 154 (Page 120)

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear n please pm me whenever u update pleaseplease please pm me n update soon

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Hey I read ur whole FF in one go plz cntinue and add me to ur Pm list! :)

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Part 37

Abhiya were lost in each others eyes...

 

*~*~*~*

 

Abhay came back to his senses... and saw Piya was still out of her conscience. He cupped her face and placed a gentle kiss on her eye-lids. She gasped and sighed...

Abhay: are you hungry!

Piya: no! mujhe sirf tumhare saath rehna hai!

Saying so, she hugged him passionately and Abhay encircled her in his embrace.

Abhay: pehle kuch kha to lo!

Piya (like a kid): nahi!! Mujhe bhook nahi hai!

Abhay: mujhe bhi!

Piya looked at him and then both of them burst into laughter.

 

Abhay lifted Piya up in his arms... and carried her to the table. He sat on the on the chair with Piya still on his laps. Piya's head was tucked in Abhay's jackets and she continued to blush.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Piya: how divine you smell and feel to me!!

Abhay smiled as he put some Italian food in the plate and then took a lump of it in a spoon and brought near Piya. Piya still behaving as a child held her mouth wide open. Abhay smiled and put the food inside her mouth. He fed her passionately

Piya: wish I could do the same!

Abhay: you really wouldn't want to my jaan!

Piya: I am not scared of you!

Abhay: I know, tabhi to you had the power to warn me!

 

Piya apne dono haath se Abhay ke neck ko encircle karti hai: so to hai Mr. Raichand! Koi shak!

Abhay nods his head and kisses her again: achcha, to now what does my angel want to do!

Piya: umm!! let the angel think!!

Abhay smiled.

 

Piya: interrogation!!

Abhay: matlab!

Piya: matlab simple hai! I want some answers!

Abhay: hmm!! Okay!

 

Piya: hmm!! So tell me, us din delhi mein exactly hua kya tha!

 

Abhay's smile vanished but before he could loose himself and breakdown, Piya cupped his face: Abhay! Dekho we're together...that's what matters! Haina! But I wanna know ki hua kya tha!

Abhay: woh tumhara khoon bahut loose hua and main apne aap ko control nahi kar paaya...I sucked a bit of your blood aur phir jab maine hosh sambhala...to I treated you with morphine and-

 

Piya kissed him. Abhay hugged her back: agar kuch ho jaata to

Piya: kuch nahi hua Abhay! Dekho!

Abhay: lekin agar main nahi rukta to!

Piya: but u did!! Sshhh!!

Abhay: I love you!

Piya: I love you too Abhay!!

 

Piya was about to kiss him again when her phone rang. She checked the caller-ID and blurted out: Kabab mein tomboy!!

Misha: Piya!!

Piya: haan Mish...bol kya hua?

Misha: panga ho gaya yaar...tu jaldi se ghar aa ja bas!

Piya: kyun kya hua?

Misha: mom yr... wo abhi kuch der mein tujhse aur mujhse shaadi se related kuch discuss karne aa rahi hai! And tum yahaan ho hi nahi!!

Piya: omg! No ways! Kuch kar Mish!

Abhay: kya hua jaan?

Piya: Mish! Tu ruk main aati hoon!

 

Piya: Abhay! Mom aa rahi hai humare room mein! And I am not there!

Abhay: don't worry! Hum unse pehle pahunch jayenge!

Piya: pakka na?

Abhay: trust me!

 

Abhay asked Piya to encircle his neck from the back (just like Bella did in Twilight: when Edward called her 'spider-monkey')

Abhay: hold on tight!

Piya took a deep breath: yeah!!


Abhay left agilely through the thick forests and then landed accurately below Piya's room.

Abhay: chale?

Piya: hmm!

 

Abhay jumped in Piya's washroom without even a single letter of noise: well done Abhay! In time!

He was about to leave when Piya stopped him: tussi jaa rahe ho! (kuch kuch hota hai dialogue)

Abhay turned back with a smile

Piya: tussi naa jao!

Abhay: come here!

He stretched his hands for Piya who clung to him: I love you!

Abhay: I know! See ya tomorrow!

Piya: yup! Good night!

Abhay: good night!!

Piya smooched him on his dimpled cheeks which further deepened his dimples...

Piya: aww!! You look cho cute!! And ur dimples!! Main to marjaavan!!


Abhay blushed and jumped out of the window.

Piya ran towards the window: Bye!!

Abhay turned back after he landed on the ground: Bye!

Piya smiled and gave him a flying kiss! Abhay pretending to grab it...

 

*~*~*~*

 

Piya closed the door behind her.

Misha: so!

Piya: kya?

Misha: ho gaya?

Piya: kya ho gaya Mish!

Misha: tumhara coochie-coo?

Piya blushedEmbarrassed: Shut up Mish! Kuch bhi!

Misha: mujhe mat banao! Mujhe apni dono behno ne kaafi experienced bana diya hai...specially fatty ne!

Panchi: Mish, that's enough...huh?

 

Madhu: ladkiyon! Chalo, kal ke details le lo!

Misha(imitating her): chalo... kal ki details le lo...aisa lag raha hai jaise hum koi mission pe jaa rahe hai!

(whispering) waise fatty ki shaadi karana kaafi bada aur risky mission hai!

Panchi: kyun?

Misha: humein Sid jijz ko Bahaduri Puraskar dena chahiye!

Piya: kyun?

Misha: fatty jaisi vishal cheez ko pasand jo kiya hai!

Piya: ROFLROFL

 

Panchi: mom, yeh Misha aur Piya ko dekho na!

Madhu: Mish!

Misha: ji mom! Hum to kuch bhi nahi kar rahe!

While walking, Misha and Piya talk...

Misha: pata hai shaadi mein wo 7 vows hote hai na!

Piya: yeah, wo bride aur groom saath mein lete hai na!

Misha: you know, one is dono ek dusre ka saath kabhi nahi chhodenge and har ek kadam saath mein lenge! Ab tum hi socho! Fatty ka ek kadam, jijz ke 3 kadam ke barabar hoga! Imagine Sid jijz aur Panchi

 

Piya had tears in her eyes by now:LOL stop it Mish! Bas kar!! Baaki kal! Mera pet dard ho gaya haste-haste!LOL

Misha: WinkWink

 

Madhu: ho gaya tum dono ka? Happy now?

Piya and Misha drop their heads; though still finding hard to control their laughter.

Madhu: hmm! Piya, kal tum jaa kar Wedding Planners se baat karogi!

Piya: ji mom!

Madhu: and you Misha, tumhe boys ka kaam karne mein mazaa aata hai na! so you'll be going to the function venue aur parso ke sangeet ki tayyari karogi!

 

Madhu: now get back to sleep! Aur Panchi ko koi tang nahi karega! Aur haan! Tum log separate rooms mein so ge kyunki jahaan teen shaitani dimaag mile, wahaan bhoochal aa jayega!

 

Piya: k mom! Good night!

 

*~*~*~*

 

Piya closed the door of her and was bolting it when cold hands encircled her from behind

Piya took a noisy breath: Abhay! You scared me!

Abhay: finally!

Piya: huh?

Abhay: atleast maine tumko daraya to!

Piya: uff!! Kyun aaye ho?

Abhay: you'll see!

 

He lifted her up and then made her lie on her bed.

Piya: you'll be here?Shocked

Abhay: koi shakk!

Piya placed her head on his chest: bilkul nahi! My perfect pillow!

Abhay: achcha ji!

Piya giggled: sshh!! Sone do mujhe!

Abhay: ahem! Yeh sahi hai! Ek banda tumhare liye itni mehnat kar ke aata hai! And tumhe sona hai!

Piya: main tumhari tarah Vampire to hoon nahi! Mujhe neend aa rahi hai Abhay!

Abhay: no! today you won't sleep!

Piya: kya kar loge tum?

Abhay: why do you always challenge me?

Piya: ainvayi! Abhay! Kal subah pakka! Hum poora din baat karenge! Please! Sone do na!

Abhay: ok! (like a kid) so!

Piya: aww! My cutie!

 

Abhay placed his hands on Piya's hair as she slept and started caressing her hairs occasionally removing them from her eye-lids. He then brushed his lips against her strawberry scented curls and placed pecks on her eyes... Piya tightened her cuddle


Pratiksha ki philosophy: agar aap Vampire ho aur aapki girlfriend human ho to neend aapke beech mein 'kabab mein beautiful' banegi

shivy says: waah!! kya baat pratzz!!

 

Precap

Mount College: After a long time

 

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Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 03 October 2011 at 3:17am

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Posted: 03 October 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
finnaly mai mera dabba unreserve karne ja rahi hu, please sab salami do LOL
abhay pia ko romance wow yaar, kitne cute hai na dono, abhay pia ke liya aaya hai aur wo sona chahti hai, ye dono bevuf ke bevkuf he rahege,aur abhiya ke bhich mai handsome beautiful ke finally tomboy bhi aagaya ROFL, aur kitni list banegi pata nahi, but misha ka birdy ke upar joke, mast rapchik, khallas ROFL aaj ki philosophy, agar aap vampire ho aur aapki girlfirend human to neend aapke bich mai kavab mai beautiful banegi ROFL


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awesome Update shivy.  

kya yaar, abhay pia ke bedroom mein tha aur pia soti rahi. not fair Wink 



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hey!!!!!mera dabba itne peeche hai!not fair!
 
ye mat socho mera dabba tumhare dabbse piche kaise, comemnt karo LOL

hey but update bhi toh dikhai de...LOLshi magical letters mein likha hai kya dikh nahi rahaLOL
 
haila maine to tumhare dabbe ke comment pai comment kiya tha tum to meri comment par comment kar rahi ho, so no comemnt LOL

dabba dabbi comment no comment whatConfusedROFLROFLmujhe kuch dikhai nai de rahaLOL
 
tuje kuch dikhayi nahi de raha, ab dikhega, shivu ne update kiya hai ab comment kar LOL

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hayeee yaar update is so romantic and piyas dialogue and abhays blushed face haye mai mar jawaan :)

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Originally posted by pratiksha2009


tuje kuch dikhayi nahi de raha, ab dikhega, shivu ne update kiya hai ab comment kar LOL

haan!!!!kuch kuch **ahem**dikh toh raha hai!!!!Winkabhay***ahem****pia****bed*******ahem ahem ahemROFLROFL

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