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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 4:39am | IP Logged
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awsum shivu... abhay was admiring pia... n asked4 dance dat was cool... i loved dat... n pia is really acting wierd... n waiting 4 d abhay surprise... how he cope up with d damage caused... n d 3 rules of madhu was halatious... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...
Thanks Akshi for a long comment
thats 4 u...
u said na u want long coment...LOLLOL
haan...so thanks for listening!!!
tum thanks baut bolte ho...LOLLOL
nyways ur welcomSmileSmile

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akshi0019

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awsum shivu... abhay was admiring pia... n asked4 dance dat was cool... i loved dat... n pia is really acting wierd... n waiting 4 d abhay surprise... how he cope up with d damage caused... n d 3 rules of madhu was halatious... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...
Thanks Akshi for a long comment
thats 4 u...
u said na u want long coment...LOLLOL
haan...so thanks for listening!!!
tum thanks baut bolte ho...LOLLOL
nyways ur welcomSmileSmile
ok baba...ab se no thanks...!!! LOLLOL

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awsum shivu... abhay was admiring pia... n asked4 dance dat was cool... i loved dat... n pia is really acting wierd... n waiting 4 d abhay surprise... how he cope up with d damage caused... n d 3 rules of madhu was halatious... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...
Thanks Akshi for a long comment
thats 4 u...
u said na u want long coment...LOLLOL
haan...so thanks for listening!!!
tum thanks baut bolte ho...LOLLOL
nyways ur welcomSmileSmile
ok baba...ab se no thanks...!!! LOLLOL
thats better!!!!Smile

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Abhay bent down and raised his hand towards Piya: Will you be mine?

Misha and others were shocked. They had never imagined Abhay and Piya together. Panchi had tears in her eyes seeing her little sister being loved by someone so much!

For Piya, it was the most beautiful day of her life. She had loved Abhay more than her life and whatever had happened last few days had greatly disturbed her, so much that she was going to lift her trust on the term 'love' She stood there numb. Abhay stood waiting for his answer from his angel. Tears didn't seem to stop from her eyes.

Misha frustrated: Piya! Ab haan bol bhi do na! bechare ke ghutne mein dard ho raha hoga!

Panchi poked her: Shut up! Don't come in b/w them!

Misha: Ooops!

Piya gasped and sighed: yes! I love you too!!

Abhay smiled and blushed and then lifted Piya up in his arms and caressed her forehead.

There was a thunderous clap and people made way as Abhay lifted Piya to an unknown place for a surprise.

The place was somewhere in the heart of forest and it was exquisitely decorated with Piya's favourite orchids and candles. Abhay left Piya down so that she may admire the place.

Piya first turned towards Abhay naughtily and pushed him: Abhay Raichand!

Abhay smiled: hmm!

Piya: agar agli baar tum mujhse door gaye na...to dekh lena!

Abhay: kya? You are warning me?

Piya (haq se): yes! I will kill you (she held him by collar) samjhe Mr. Raichand!

Abhay: Ms. Dobriyal! you are warning a Vampire!

Piya: yes! And mind my words!

Abhay: tumhare liye to jaan bhi haazir hai Ms. Dobriyal!

Piya's eyes moistened and she hugged him: ab koi bhi stupid sa blood hum dono ke beech nahi aa sakta...samjhe tum!

Abhay: hmm!! I am sorry!

Piya: it's okay

 

Piya's eyes were still wet. She went and smelled the flowers closing her eyes and then proceeded. There was a table in the centre with rose kept on it! There was a champagne bottle in ice-bucket and then her favourite ITALIAN cuisine!

Abhay: you liked it!

Piya ran and hugged him: Oh Abhay! I loved it!!! It's so pretty! Tumne yeh sab mere liye kiya?

Abhay: humare liye!

Abhay lifted up Piya's face and then kissed her temple while she gasped: I love you my jaan!

Piya: I love you too!

 

Abhay went to the corner and started the music again. 

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon!!

kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon...!

he took Piya in his embrace

kisi zabaan mein bhi...woh lavz hi nahi

ki jinmein tum ho kya tumhe bata saku...

he placed a kiss on her forehead

main agar kahoon...tumsa haseen... kaynaat mein nahi hai kahin...

tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Shokhiyon Mein Dooobi Yeh Aadayein, Chehre Se Jhalki Hui Hain
Zulf Ki Ghani Ghani Ghatayein, Shaan Se Dhalki Hui Hain


Lehrata Aachal Hai Jaise Badal
Bhaahon Mein Bhari Hai Jaise Chandani, Roop Ki Chandani

He started kissing her wherever he could...

Main Agar Kahoon Yeh Dilkashi, Hai Nahi Kahin Na Hogi Kabhi
Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi
Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..


Tum Huye Meherbaan, To Hai Yeh Dastaan
Abb Tumhara Mera Ek Hai Karwaan, Tum Jahan Main Wahaan


Main Agar Kahoon Humsafar Meri Apsara Ho Tum Ya Koi Pari
Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi


Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..
Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahon
Kisi Zabaon Mein Bhi Woh Labaz Hi Nahi
Ki Jeene Mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Mein Bata Sakun
Main Aagar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen, Kaynaat Mein Nai Hai Kahin
Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi


Abhay and Piya were lost in each other's magical eyes...

Shivy very tired to think of the precap...so you guys keep guessing
ab jaldi se lamba comment dena...and mere train kedibbo... apne dabbo ko edit karo and unhe lambe messages se bharo...
luv,Shivy/shivu/shi



Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 28 September 2011 at 3:12am

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amazing dr... it was just fab... abhay n pia r so mesmerizing... abhays surprise was wonderfull n kabeer is such a sweet heart i loved d way he helped abhay n pia... n all r really rocking... how dey support abhay n pia... n abhay made her favourate cusine.. loved dat n abhay pia dance is really cool dey always lost  in each other... n sry 4 d late coment nt in d condition  of doing nything... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...



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Ba mulahija hoshiya, mai apna reservation dabba unreserved karne ja rahi hu, aaste nigah rakho ROFL

 

Amazing update, aur kya boss 2 part de diye, very good, shivu wow kya style se love confirmation huva haiEmbarrassed, kash show mai bhi sadu raichand inta romatic hotaDay Dreaming, anyway love misha her naughtiness , & my abhiya so cuteDay Dreaming, and song selection to good,Clap and warning me usmar par to mai marjava,EmbarrassedBlushing haye show mai kina cutely kaha tha abhay ne, dhasu update love it so much



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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Shivi kya mast update hai yaar wo bhi do part i loved misha and kabir convo it wasROFL aur panchi chodo tarif ke liye shabd nahi haiROFLhaye kya romantic evening plan kiya abhay ne kitna romantic tha aur song caps ke saath awsum waise then he kissed wherever he wanted kya baat hai shivi *wink* thoda explain karna tha na *tongue* thanks for pm

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