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Part 35

Abhay sat on the bar gazing at the perfect body of Piya and her back which peered from her white backless top. Her black denim jeans went very well with her fair white skin and the beautiful danglers that hung from her ears was an icing on the cake. Piya's curls brushed against her skin and her hands traced them throughout her face clearing them off. She continued to lay the plates and the napkins on the table for the guests. Abhay slowly stood up and then went to the table fan. He gently directed them towards Piya and then watched her curls fly and float in the air and her white fingers trying to manage them. Uff! How striking she looked to Abhay. Abhay left his drink on the table nearby and traced his steps to Piya. He watched her; admired her; felt pride in owning her.

Abhay: Piya!

Piya turned back, still trying to manage her flying curls and then a wave of shock swept on her face and she blurted out, Abhay! And she thought whatever! I don't care if he calls me or not!

Piya: What?

Abhay: main soch raha tha, can I have a dance with you?

Piya: kyun?

Abhay: aise hi!

Piya: does it really matter, waise bhi party mein aur bhi ladkiyan hai!

Abhay: umm... actually koi tum sa khoobsoorat nahi hai!

Piya: oh really?Wink

Abhay neared her and then held her by her waist. He lifted her hand and then placed a small peck on her hand: Can I have a dance with a beautiful lady.

Piya grinned and placed her hand in his. Abhay led her to the dance floor and then he made her place her hands on his shoulders and he made his hands slip to her waist. She swayed swiftly in his arms with her eyes fixed on him as she gazed the perfectness of his face: He's perfect!

Abhay: kuch kaha tumne?

Piya blushing: nahi! Kuch bhi nahi! Kyun tumne kuch suna kya?

Abhay: nahi! Kuch bhi to nahi! Kyun?

Piya: aise hi! Kyun?

 

Oh k! that was all, both Abhay-Piya blasted out into laughter on their kyun not recalling there was something bad going between them.

Piya: lol! Now no more kyun!

Abhay: LOLLOL

 

Abhay lost in his princess' eyes, placed a small kiss on her forehead. Piya closed her eyes and gasped. Abhay realized that he had gone too far and both his mom-dad were watching. He slowly left Piya, smiled quietly and left the party to get some fresh air.

 

Haseena followed him out.

Haseena: Abhay!! ABHAY! Stop right there!

Abhay stopped and turned back.

Abhay: yes Mom!

Haseena: what was that?

Abhay: what mom?

Haseena: don't try to act smart Abhay, what's between you and that Dobriyal?

Abhay: umm...nothing mom! We're just friends!

Haseena: oh! Just friends? Or more?

Abhay: mom! Don't even think about that! Piya is not worth my love! Infact no one in Dehradun is! Coz I am not a normal; a common man right! I am a bloodsucker! Piya is just a filthy human!

Haseena: right son! Let's get back to the party before anyone notices our disappearance!

Abhay: ji Mom!

 

Haseena turned back and left. Abhay too took a step ahead when he heard!

Piya: Abhay!

Abhay turned towards Piya in horror: Piya! You here?

Piya: can't believe you just said that!

Abhay saw tears following one another on her cheeks.

Abhay: Piya! Wo jo bhi maine kaha!

Piya: use repeat karne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Maine sun liya! You were loud enough.

Piya wiped her tears and started walking when Abhay stopped her by holding her hands: Hey!

Piya closed her eyes in pain as Abhay cuddled her in his arms from the back.




Piya: leave-

Abhay: sshhh!!!

Piya: what?

Abhay: you're my only reason to be happy and to retain my human emotions.

Piya: what am I to you huh? A filthy human na!

Abhay: sshh! You're everything to me!

Piya: how can I know?

Abhay: Chup! Bikul Chup!! Samjhi tum!

Piya: kyun?

Abhay: bas ab main bolunga samjhi tum!

Abhay turned her towards him and then placed a kiss near her eyes and then her eye-lids: maine jo bhi kaha wo meri Mom se kaha! Tum jaanti ho na, how much she detests humans! Aur agar maine bata diya that.

Piya: kya?

Abhay: yahi ki you're my dost, then you know na what she'll do!

Piya: dost! I hate you Abhay Raichand!

 

She ran from there.

Abhay: But I Love you!!!Embarrassed

 

Abhay: I know you're angry... lekin tumhara itna dil toda hai to kuch to karna padega! I love you jaan! Aur kuch hi dino mein, yeh sab jaan jayenge! That's my promise Piya Dobriyal! coz I love you!

 

Piya re-entered the party all angry and puffed up with rage. Soon Misha caught up with her.

Misha: oye kya hua?

Piya took a knife and then showing it to her replied: don't talk to me!

Misha: behen? Are you drunk!

Piya: don't call me drunk I am angry!

Misha went away saying: no you're mad!

 

Piya started talking to herself: main! Dost! Sirf dost!! Abhay! You're so dead!! I'll kill you with this knife! Haan! I will! I hate you!

And then she smiled: what's happening to me! Lol! Main pagal ho jaongi!!! Abhay is confusing me! Main gussa houn ya hansu! Abhay Raichand!!!!!!!

 

After the party:

Madhu: Piya, Misha! And Panchi, neeche aao in 5 minutes!

Piya: ji Mom!

 

Piya, Misha and Panchi enter in their night dress.

Piya: yup Mum!

Madhu: you girls, meri baat suno dhyan se!

Misha: yup!

Madhu: Panchi ki shaadi is not far away now! To I am drawing an LOC for you!

Piya: LOC?

Madhu: hmm, all the three of you. Raat ko 9 o'clock ke baad no jagna! Subah jaldi nahi uthna and only fruit diet for Panchi!

Piya and Misha: ROFLROFL

Madhu: shut up! And tum dono, college se seedha ghar and no partying and anything!

Piya: aah! No Mom!

Madhu: Shut up! I don't want your skins to be tanned! And tum dono kal hi wedding planners se baat kar ke aaoge! And raat mein you'll go to the lounge and check the decoration planning with Papa!

Piya: ji ma! Anything more?

Madhu: hhmm, go back to sleep now!

Piya, Misha and Panchi: Good Night Mom!

Madhu smiled: Good night princesses

Next day goes away working on Panchi's wedding while Abhay is preparing for something...

 

Precap

 Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai jaane kya kar gaye,

Jaise andhero mein tum chandni bhar gaye!

 I Love you!!!Embarrassed

 ***

Please leave loads of comments... I am super excited for next part' but I'll update when you leave loads and big comments!! Please I wanna Update soon... Please Please leave comments... and press Like...



Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 23 September 2011 at 7:06am

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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
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Caught u updating and luckily today I had time Smile aur dekho aaj main sabse first
 
Okay so Abhay is admiring Piya and wants to dance with her aur dance k liye patane ka kya style tha tum jaisa koi nahi...hmm maska polish Abhay
 
Haseena k saamne Abhay jo kaha wo Piya ne sunn liya ... Poor piya she herself is confused whether she has to b angry on Abhay or not
 
Well Maan ka Dialouge CHUP BILKUL CHUP abhay k muh se sunkar thoda alag laga
 
Hmm...waiting for the song sequence
 
Love u Shivu
 
-Piya


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hmm
nice update dear
loved it

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Originally posted by piya-

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Caught u updating and luckily today I had time Smile aur dekho aaj main sabse first
 
Okay so Abhay is admiring Piya and wants to dance with her aur dance k liye patane ka kya style tha tum jaisa koi nahi...hmm maska polish Abhay
 
Haseena k saamne Abhay jo kaha wo Piya ne sunn liya ... Poor piya she herself is confused whether she has to b angry on Abhay or not
 
Well Maan ka Dialouge CHUP BILKUL CHUP abhay k muh se sunkar thoda alag laga
 
Hmm...waiting for the song sequence
 
Love u Shivu
 
-Piya
How many times...should I tell you... that I have become a fan of your Comments... and Congrats!!!! for your success... Student of the year!!!
anyways... are you on fb?

Maan-Abhay!!! both drive me crazy you know!!! Silly
so... I love you loads again...

LOVE YOU ALWAYS!!!!
LOVE YOUR COMMENTS!!!
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Posted: 23 September 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Nice update shivi nok jhok kafi cute thi and pias hair flying and she is trying to manage superb thanx for pm

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heyyy its  superb  fantastic awsome now we r eagerly waiting fr the surprise of abhay so plsss updateee fasttt and donttt makeee us waittt moreee plsss update fast :)

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awesome, fab, superb update!!!!!!!!!!!!1 waiting to knw abhay's surprise... plzzz update soon

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lovely update dear...

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