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Office Nok-Jhok!!---A Saavan poem...

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Dear all
Once again, Am writing some lines about our beloved Saavan..If its nice and apppealing, I wld appreciate all ur good comments..Even if its dull and trite, plz comment good things plzEmbarrassed 
 
 
 
OFFICE NOK-JHOK
 
The office staff began the humdrum
Making the hours and money flow.
 
We are both here and now dear
But to romance and love forever.
 
Serious and sincere, calm and collected
You seem to be poised and presented.
 
But with me around to disturb and irritate
How can we both ever concentrate.
 
Its office Nok-Jhok working overtime
Entangling and webbing us everytime.
 
Geethu and Maris  always unleash their creativity
As Saavan  we accept their adoration in all humility


Edited by maris08 - 21 March 2011 at 7:34am

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Lovely as always, Maris! :D

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Wow, Maris!!!! #1
 
 

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
very creatively written, Maris!!! Clap

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged
WoW Maris Very Well Written...Great and Superb....Thumbs Up

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Wonderful, Maris!!!ClapClap

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Wo-ho Maris! Very well written!

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Maris - I don't know how you do it!!  Very talented.

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