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anjaane - FF - RT Part 7 (Pg 11) updated!!! (Page 5)

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Hey ur FF is realllyyy NICEE !!! Clap
I reallyyyy liked it !!!
 Thnxx for the PM & Update Sooonn...

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
loved it..... Enjoyed reading it. Do continue soon. (:

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thank you everyone for reading my FF and commenting on it... i will post the next chapter soon...

precap: everyone reaches home and....surprise surprise!!!!!!
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Good job keep up the good work...and the rest I will tell u t school :)
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Great work, rekon well i just read teh start sketch and it sounds nice, i am gonna read the two chaps and see how it is, but nice!
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Continue please, I want to know what happens. You should be a script writer for these TV Soaps :) You seem to be very interested in this,
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PART 3

At the airport:

Someone is announcing that British airways fight have just landed ( that is the flight that Arjun, his friends, Ishika and her family were in)

In the plane:

As soon as ishika hears the air hostess announce that they have reached their destinations, gets very excited and starts to pack her stuff to go her parents…while she is doing that arjun's friends come up to them

Neel: chal yaar, flight land kar chuki hai
Priya: haan hume jaldi karni chahie…kitni der ho gayi hai
Preet : agar hum  late ho gaye to…aur aaj to…
Arjun: chal raha hoon… mujh se zada to tum log tensed lag rahe ho…
(ishika is quietly listing to all this…btw she still hasn't seen arjun's face)
Preet: to chal na…kis ka intzar kar raha hai…or yeh mooh kyun chupa raha hai apna
Arjun: kuch nahin…thoda aaram karne ki koshish kar raha tha…lekin lagta hai ki ab to chalna hi pade ga…
(now ishika leaves as her packing was done)
Arjun now turns around towards his friends and takes his hat off his face…chalen he says
Neel: haan…tumhara hi intzaar kar rahe the hum…
Priya: chalo ab…
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Ishika reaches to her parents seats who are still gathering their belongings…she quickly starts to help them and asks them to hurry up as she wants to do as soon as possible…

Sashank: beta aaram se kuch reh gaya to… aur agar aap ko chot lag gai to…
Ishika: kuch nahin hoga papa…ap bas jaldi kariye…
(while she is doing all this she is thinking about how arjun was so chilled out about going out of the plane…she thought how could he be so relaxed and not excited)…she says out loud…shayad yahin se hoga…
Amrita: kya…kaun yahin hoga…
Ishika: huh…nahin kuch nahin ma ( main us ke bare mein yun soch rahin hoon maine to uski shakal tak nahin dekhi…uska naam tak nahin janti…mera usse koi lena dena nahin hai…aur vaise bahi mere paas aur bohut cheezen hai sochne ke liye…)
Amrita: ishika chale beta…(she and shashank were now standing and waiting for ishika who was still sitting on the floor and was in deep thoughts…)
Ishika with a surprised expression…haa ma chalo
And they leave the plane….

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About half an hour have passed…by now all of them have checked out at the airport and were proceeding; out of the airport with their luggage and handbags…
Ishika's handbag wasn't cooperating with her well so she was basically dragging it…
Shashank: kya hua beta…kharab ho gaya hai kya…ahar mushkil ho rahi hai to mujhe vo de do aur tum mere wala lelo…tumhe chalne mein aasani ho gi…
Ishika was looking towards her dad to answer his question and trying to control her handbag…koi baat…suddenly she bumps into someone and her handbags gets stuck in the weels of the other person's handbag…and she is about to fall when the person catches her…it is none other than arjun…ishika gets lost in his eyes…arjun pulls her back up and she comes back to her sense…and thinks to herself..yeh kya…
Arjun: tum hamesha se aisi ho yan phir aaj koi khas din hai
Ishika: sorry wo…lekin tum mujhe kaise jaante ho…main to tumse pehle kabhi nahin mili…
Arjun: jis isnsaan se poori flight pe baaten karti aayi…uski awaz tak nahin pehchanti…
Ishika: kya…tum vo ho..
Arjun: haan…hoon to main vohi…
Ishika: oh…thanks and sorry once again…
Arjun: koi baat nahin…thoda dhayan se chala karo…yeh india hai…
Shashank: yeh baat to theek kahi tumne beeta…thanks, tumne sahi waqt pe ishika koo girne se bacha liya…vaise tum done ek doosre ko pehle se jaane ho…
Arjun: jee uncle vo hum dono ki seats saath thi plane mein…
Amrita: beta tumhara naam kya hai…aur tum bhi india pehli baar aye ho kya…
Arjun: nahin aaunty main yahin ka rehne wala hoon…ek college ke trip ke liye London gaya tha…aur mera naam…
Neel: ARJUN!!!!! Jaldi kar hum late ho jayein ge…aur phir tu janta hai na ki kya hoga…
Arjun quickly looks at the time and says…sorry aunty main thodi jaldi main hoon mujhe jaana hoga…
Shashank: koi baat nahin beta phir kabhi baat karle ge…vaise tumhara naam bohut accha hai…
Arjun: thanks uncle… meri maa ne rakha tha…ab main chalta hoon, … and he runs towards his friends…
Ishika: bye… are par apna address to dete jaayo hum tumhe milege kaise…
Arjun yell back while running: tum chinta mat karo…agar aise hi chalta raha to hum kahin na kahin phir zaroor milen ge… saying this he runs out of the airport…

Now ishika and her family also proceed towards the car that was waiting for them outside the airport…
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In the mall
Ekam: kahan reh gye yeh log…subha to bada keh rahe the ki aaj to hamara kaam kum hai hum jaldi aa jayein ge…ab kya hua…kaam bad gaya ya neeyat badal gayi
Ashika: ofo maa…inta gussa sehat ke liye acch nahin hota…aur meri baat hui thi bhayia se abhi…vo keh rahe the ki  vo raste mein hai thodi der mein pohunch jayein ge
Ekam: chal hum bahar chal kar inzaar kartein hai…vaise bhi bohut der ho chuki haisneha ghar par akele kar kar rahi hogi…
Ashika:app unki chinta mat kare vo theek ho gi…ab chale…bhayia aur dad aa gaye ho ge ab tak..
Ekam: haan chal
They arrive out side the mall where a black BMW was waiting for them. They sit in it and the car moves…
Ekam: itni der kahan laga di
Veer: kuch nahin vo last minute pe ek meeting aa gayi thi
Ekam: haan haan janti hoon apki in meetings ko
Veer: are tum chaho to armman se pooch lo
Armaan: haan maa dad sahi keh rahe hain
Ashika: kya aap yeh sab baatein nas main nahin kar sakte…pehle ghr chale…
Armaan: vohin to jaa rahe hain…

They reach outside the door of their home but something seemed unusual…instead of it being all bright…it was all dark
Ekam in a worried tone: yeh kya hua…itna andhera kyun hai…sab theek to hai na…sneha ghar pe akeli thi
Armaan: ma light chali gayi hogi…hum andar chal kar dekhtein hai
Ashika: haan bhai jaldi chalo…
They all get out of the car and proceed towards the door. Armaan asks ekam to open the door. She open it, enter the home, and call out for sneha and suddenly all the lights go on.the house was beautifull decorated with flowers, curtain and lights. Some flower petals fall on ekam and everyone yells out surprise!!!!!!! Shashank and his family was also present there…ekam was very surprised to see all this done for her
Armaan: happy birthday ma…
Ekam: acha to yeh baat thi…sab ki mili bhagat hai…paka ashika aur sneha ka idea ho ga yeh sab…tabhi main sochu tum sab subha se intna ajeeb se behave kyun kar rahe ho…aur kisi ne mujhe wish bhi nahi kiya subha.
Sneha: ma ab chodiye in sab batob ko…
Shashank and his family proceed towards them and wish ekam happy birthday…then they all hug each other and introduce ishika to all family members…they all start talking to each other…
And the party begins…

Sorry for any mistakes…please do comment on it Smile


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