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PART 19

Geet came and saw that Maan was eating his lunch... she ran towards him and snatched away the plate Main khilaaongi Maan smiled and opened his mouth in front of her... she naughtily stuffed a bite full of chillies in his mouth... he first chewed his bite and then realizing the taste...he opened his eyes wide in horror and groped for water...Geet giggled and pulled his cheeks... Geet...yeh kya kiya tumne Geet extended the glass of water towards him Sorry! lijiye...paani Maan readily took the glass and emptied it in one draught... She extended another bite and Maan looked at her suspiciously... is baar nahi...pakka!! Maan smiled and gulped that bite... She made him eat the lunch and then fell on his lap gazing at his perfect self... She thought how perfect he was...his muscles...his body...his eyes...she cuddled in his lap... he caressed her forehead and then her cheeks and she giggled softly... waise aap waapas kab jaoge? Maan smiled and repliedtum kaho to yeh majnu humesha ke liye yahin ruk jaye...! Geet smiled- haan...ruk jaiyye! then she stopped...thought and replied again na baba na! aap jaiiyye...main kab tak aapko Veerji aur Daarji se bacha paongi...na babaji! waise bhi...kuch dino mein to main aapke paas aa hi jaongi! Maan embraced her waise...yeh bhi sahi hai... chalo...main chalta hoon... bye!! Geet stopped and hugged him... I love you... Maan wiped away her tears...I love you too... She helped him get out of the window then bid him good bye...back in her room... She embraced her pillow because it smelt like Maan...she cuddled on the bed as it also smelt like Maan...  She laughed at her sillyness... tu bhi jhalli hai... She had dozed off when Brij's wife entered Geet's room... She woke her up Oye Geet! chal...jewellery waale teri gehne lekar aa gaye... chal tu... dekh le...sab kuch theek banaa hai ki nahi... Geet yawned and replied ji bhabhi...aap chalo...main aati hoon...fresh hokar... She smiled and left... Geet stretched herself and got ready and rushed down... She jumped on the mat when Rano pulled her ears...ab teri shaadi ho rahi hai...thodi to lajja dikha! Geet covered her head with her dupatta and teased Rano... "kahiye na Maaji...main aapki kya seva karoon..." Rano tapped her kya mamma...tum bhi na! kamsekam main apne ghar to yeh sab nahin karoongi please...
Rano smiled and let the talk go... Geet took her necklace and looked at it very diligently... She wanted to look perfect in front of her Mr. Perfect... she turned her neck-piece upside down to check its uniformity...

Khurana Mansion: Delhi

There had been a huge chaos since morning as Maan was nowhere to be seen... Daadima had been calling the KC as well as other places where Maan possibly could have gone... She was going to report in the police when she saw Maan entering the Mansion... 
Daadi- Maan! aap kahaan the subah se?
Maan- kahin nahi...aise hi...
Daadi- Maan aap kuch chhupa rahe hai?
Maan- nahin to Daadima! aap aisa kyun soch rahi hai?
Daadi- hum subah se aapko dhoond ke pareshan ho rahe hai...humein seedhe se bataiyye...kahaan the aap?
Maan- ji woh...
Daadi- Maan
Maan- maine kaha na daadima...main kahin nahin gaya tha...
Daadi- Maan...
Maan- main Geet se milne gaya tha
Daadi smiled- kya?
Maan- haan daadima...aaj mujhe uski bahut yaad aa rahi thi...isliye usse milne chala gaya tha
Daadi- humein kyun nahin bataya?
Maan- mujhe laga aap jaane nahin dengi...
Daadi- hum waise to nahin jaane dete lekin hum jaante hain...aap apna dukh use dekh kar bhulana chahte the...isliye hum aapko nahin tokte
Maan felt guilty- Sorry daadi!
Daadi- koi baat nahi...jaiyye ready ho jaiiye!
Maan- kyun?
Daadi- humne kuch guests ko bulaya hai...aapse milne ke liye...
Maan- ji!

Maan left from there hurriedly and went to his room to change...

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Geet was lying on her bed...gazing at Maan's photo when his call came...
Geet- hi!!
Maan- hm...kya kar rahi thi?
Geet- aapki pho...nahin...kuch bhi to nahin...
Maan- tum kuch bol rahi thi na...meri pho...
Geet- nahin to! aap bhi na Maan...waise aapne daadima se kya kahaa...unhone aapko pakda to hoga hi na?
Maan- maine unhe bata diya ki tumse milne gaya tha...
Geet- bata diya?
Maan replied casually- haan!
Geet- hey babaji...pata nahin woh mere baare mein kya soch rahi hongi! Maan...aapko kuch samajh nahi hai
Maan- unhone kuch nahin kaha!
Geet- lekin kaafi kuch socha zaroor hoga! she spoke to herself-hey babaji...yeh kya kar diya!
Maan- Geet...over-react mat karo!
Geet- Maan lekin...
Maan- Geet! chup...
Geet continued- bilkul chup!! lolz!!
Maan smiled- you're typical...
Geet tapped her head- oh God! Maan...main typical sun-sun ke thak gayi!
Maan- sach kadwa hota hai!
Geet- aur boring bhi! Maan...main na typical sun-sun ke pak chuki hai...not again please... achcha yeh sab chhodiye! yeh bataiyye ki aapne phone koi kaam se kiya ya...ainvayi!
Maan- nahi...apna dhukda gaane ke liye...
Geet- matlab?
Maan- daadima ne kuch guests ko bulaya hai...dulhe se milne ke liye...
Geet laughed at this thoroughly!!- ab aayega mazaa!
Maan- agar mujhe mera mazaak banwaana hota to main tumhe phone karta kya... main phone rakh raha hoon...bye!
Geet- sorry sorry! kaafi anyaye hua aapke saath...waise aap kar bhi kya sakte hain...
Maan- mere paas ek plan hai
Geet- kya kya?
Maan- tum apna phone on rakho...taaki jab main bor ho jaon...main tumse baat karne lagoon...
Geet- kya great-shreat plan hai... okay done!
Maan- waise main pehno kya?
Geet- aap mujhe video call karo...i'll help you
Maan- hmm...

Maan and Geet now were on video-call...
Geet- hi again!!!
Maan smiled... Geet replied almost immediately...-Oye hoye! main vaari jawaan!!
Maan laughed- ab...dekho maine yeh sab choose kiye hain...in mein se batao!
Geet looked at the clothes and then made a puking look...
Maan looked confused- kya hua?
Geet- yeh hai aapki choice...I mean for a party...hey babaji...bahut kaam karna padega! khair...aap apni wardrobe dikhao!
Maan opened it and showed it to Geet- haan...woh black waala woh dikhao...apne upar laga kar
Maan- dekho
Geet- nahin...yeh bahut loud hai...woh white waala!
Maan- lo...dekho...
Geet- nahi...actually na woh black waala hi ok hai...wahi pehen lo!
Maan- you sure?
Geet- han haan!!
Maan- tum hold karo main pehen ke aata hoon...
Geet chuckled- mujhe bhi le chalo...apne changing room mein...mera matlab hain...phone ko nahi le jaoge?
Maan- nahi le jaonga! yahin ruko tum!
Geet giggled- okay!! i'll wait...
Maan went in and and then came out after 20 mins...
Maan- so...howz it?
Geet- ekdum changa! handsome! hot!!!
Maan- achcha!
Geet- haan!
Maan- it's nice na!
Geet- arey haa! lekin...ladkiyon ke saamne mat jaana! aaj aapko dekh ke woh behosh ho jayengi ya...apse flirt karengi
Maan- main tumhare alaava kisi ke baare mein soch bhi nahi sakta!
Geet- main jaanti hoon...aur haan kisi ka diya hua kuch peena bhi nahi...pata hai...woh log punch mein sharaab mila ke dete hai...
Maan- Geet...main bachcha nahin hoon...i'll take care...
Geet- waise main call nahi cut kar rahi...mujhe sab ki awaaz sunni hai...kaafi mazaa aata hai...
Maan- hm...ruko...main apne earphones theek se plug kar loon
Geet- hmm...
Maan- main jaa raha hoo!
Geet- all the best... be good...and don't loose temper...
Maan- haan! jhansi ki rani
Geet- aapke mooh se yeh word sunne ke liye main taras jaati hoon
Maan- Geet!
Maan- chaliye...jaiiyee! aap...warna daadima chillane lagengi...

The party was on in a full swing and Maan sat in one corner chatting with his wife...
Maan- kaafi shor hai!
Geet- uff!! Maan...party mein sab maun-vrat to rakhte nahin hai!
Maan- pur phir bhi...it's too much!
Geet- koi nahi...ab thode din to yeh sab chalega hi!
Maan- kya kar rahi thi?
Geet- um...nahin kuch nahi...bus...kuch bachi kuchi packing!
Maan- hmm...waise koi problem nahin honi chaiye na...kuch zarorat padegi to khareed lenge na...
Geet- mujhe yaad aaya...hum honeymoon ke liye kahaan jaa rahe hai?
Maan- tum batao...wahin jayenge!
Geet- hey babaji! abhi bata rahe hain? maine to search bhi nahi kiya...main aapko kal bataungi...aaj poori raat...i have to search
Maan- araam se batana!
Geet- hum jayenge kab?
Maan- jaise hi...shaadi ka reception ho jaye!
Geet- haan! yeh theek rahega!!
Maan- achcha! daadima dinner pe bula rahin hai! i'll mute the call...dinner ke baad call karta hoon

Precap
The Call and Haldi Ceremony
-Prev PART 18-

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Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 24 May 2011 at 11:44pm

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged
loved it shivangi
u r too gud
update soon

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Awesome update Shivangi.. Loved Maan-Geet's Convo.. Carry on..thanx for d pm..lol.

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nice update...
loved maan-geet convo

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
nice update... lagta hai dono ki call kabhi khatam hi nahin hogi... LOL
Loved the video talk... mujhe bhi le chaliye woh changing room main... LOL

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nice part...
maaneet are cute...
thanks for pm.
count soon...

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Tongueloved it

waiting for their wedding

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great update

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