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part 15
nice sweet part...
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nice ff... read it in one go... could u pls add me to ur pm list?? Thnx :)

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She tried to concentrate on her work but her mind and her heart...both were waiting for Maan's call!.. Late night Maan called her...she hadn't slept expecting his call!
Geet: Maan!
Maan: hmm!
Geet: itni der laga di phone karne mein, akdu! Oops sorry! Majnu!
Maan smiled: tum sach mein typical ho!
Geet: nayii cheez bataiyye koi...typical...original piece...yeh sab to bahut suna hai!
Maan: achcha! um...jhalli...!
Geet: next...
Maan: joker...!
Geet: chi! next!
Maan: ab mujhe kuch nahi soojh raha! achcha ek minute...(he revised some of his old lessons regarding love) inamorata?
Geet: jab tak aap is word ko bolenge...tab tak to main so jaaongi!
Maan: umm...Juliet!
Geet: shut up...yuck! Maan...thodi to akal lagaiyye...Once Upon a Time!
Maan: taang kheench rahi ho?
Geet (clicked her tongue in rejection)...
Maan: tumhi batao!
Geet: chodiye... Geet hi theek hai!
Maan: hmm...right!
Geet: to! aur bataiiye! kya kiya plane mein...business! clients! waise plane mein client to nahi mil gaya! wahi deal final kar di hogi...workaholic!
Maan: actually...client mila to tha...pur usne meeting nahi ki...kaafi time waste ho gaya!
Geet: hey babaji...! pata nahi Maan aap ka kya hoga!
Maan: kyun?
Geet: nahi...kuch nahi...aapka dimag to sirf business mein hi chalta hai...
Maan: aur kisme chalna chahiye...(Maan asked wickedly!)
Geet: rom... (Geet stuck out her tongue) main kyun bataon?
Maan: bata bhi do ab!
Geet: Waise Maan! hum bahut bakwaas baat kar rahe hain... kuch interesting hai! jaise gossip! OMG...aap to gossip ka 'g' bhi nahi jaante!
Maan: arey haan! tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai?
Geet: haan...theek hi hai! pata hai mamma ne karele ka juice pilaya...the feeling was like puking!
Maan smiled again...then he heard footsteps from his phone...he also heard Geet tucking her phone in the pillow and pretending to snore loudly...he giggled again... he whispered: Kya hua Geet!
Geet replied annoyingly: Ssshhh Maan! bhabhi aa rahi hai...ssshhh!
Maan: hmm...

Maan continued with his work while Geet was still on hold... Daadima came in and brought a glass of milk with her.
Daadima: lijiye Maan! milk le lijiye!
Maan: nahi daadima! doodh nahi! please!
Geet scolded him still in a soft tone: Maan...chup chap doodh pee lijiye warna main phone cut kar deti hoon...
Maan: achcha daadima...de dijiye...main pee loonga!

Brij's wife came in Geet's room and sat beside Geet on her bed!
Geet: kya hua bhabhi?
Bhabhi: tujhse khoob saari baatein karni hai! chal bata...kya dekha Delhi mein...aur Benaras mein kya chal raha hai...
Geet: ji...bhabhi...sab achcha hai...aur aapko pata hai ladkiyan to itni cool hain na ki kya bataon! bilkul naye zamaane ki...humare punjab ke gaon ki tarah nahi...Delhi mein maine kahaan zyaada ghooma...sirf library aur connaught place! nothing else...phir mujhe zyaada ghoomne ka shauk to hai nahi...aur na hi zyaada bolne ka...

Maan smiled and thought: zyaada bolne ka shauk nahi hai phir bhi jo milta hai usse bolne lagti hai...ab tak to bhool hi gayi hogi ki mere se baat kar rahi thi!...jhalli hai Geet! (he whispered to her) Geet...sshh! suno na...apni bhabhi se bolo na ki jaye...
Geet: oye teri..!
Bhabhi: kya hua?
Geet pretended to yawn twice or thrice loudly...
Bhabhi: arey Geet! tu so jaa! mujhe abhi bahut kaam hai...
Geet: ji bhabhi! good night!
She hugged her and then resumed her call...
Geet: sorry sorry Maan...main to bilkul bhool gayii thi ki aap phone pe hain! Embarrassed
Maan: hmm...
Geet: aapne doodh piya?
Maan: hmm...
Geet: that's like my coochi-co!
Maan thinks: coochi-co! me! strange!
Geet: pata hai...umm sorry...bhool gayi...kya batana chahti thi! sorry!
Maan smiled again...
They chatted for 2 hours and then Geet dozed off while on her phone. Maan heard her gasps and felt contented and happy. He didn't care to wake her up...he was so lost in her sweet little world. She smiled twice in her dreams and giggled four times. Maan smiled simultaneously! She was so adorable...

Next morning, Geet woke up...stretched herself...fixed her earphones and spoke to Maan: Good Morning Maan!
Maan: hmm... Geet heard some lashes and strokes as if someone was gymming
Geet: aap kya kar rahe hai...gym mein hain?
Maan: hmm...
Geet: headlines- YEH HAI MAAN SINGH KHURANA KI MUSCULAR BODY KA RAAZ (she giggled again)
Maan grinned  and continued with his Marshall Arts...Geet again called him an hour later and started chatting...
Geet: aapne naashta kiya? kya kiya...
Maan: bread and butter!
Geet: chi babaji...mareezon waala naashta...maine to aloo ka parantha aur dahi khaya...yumm!
Maan: haan...woh to dikhta hi hai!
Geet: ho! aapne mujhe moti kaha! Maan main aapse baat nahi karti... (Geet hung up the phone)
Maan called her again but she didn't pick up...he called again and she didn't answer again...

Giving up, Maan got ready and departed to Khurana Constructions...
he couldn't concentrate on his work...while Geet was trying very hard to pretend to be angry but she simply couldn't...she gave up finally and called him...
Geet: Maan!
Maan: thanda ho gaya gussa! jhalli...pagal!
Geet:aapne mujhe moti kyun kaha!
Maan: eh lo! Maine kab kaha! maine to yeh kaha ki tumhare face pe glow itne achche naashte ki wajah se aaya
Geet slapped herself and both of them laughed thoroughly! After a while, Maan continued with his work and Geet went on with her studies again... Maan had an important meeting regarding development of a mall and so he cut Geet's phone and went for his meeting.

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Beautiful part

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awesome ...

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