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-Pyaar mein Kabhi Kabhi-

PART 11

 
Geet was rushed to the hospital. Daadima and Anni were already present. They got startled seeing Geet's condition. Her face was flushed with sweat and had turned pale. Maan handed Geet to the doctor and advanced back to Khurana Mansion. 
 
KHURANA MANSION
 
He headed straight to his room and took out his rifle. He rushed to Sinha Residence and shot two of the dacoits who guarded the entrance.
 
SINHA RESIDENCE(Sometime ago...)
 
The leader of the gang which Sinha had hired rushed to him.
Maaf kar dijiye Sardar...Maan Singh Khurana bach nikla...
Abey! door ho ja mere saamne se...nahi to abhi sar shareer se alag kar doonga...
Sardar lekin...
Lekin-wekin kya?
Sardar, woh Maan Singh Khurana ki mangetar...use Maan pur chodi gayi bullet lag gayi...
Jaan, yahaan se! (murmurs to himself) Ab Maan Singh Khurana hume zinda nahii chodega!
Sinha hears gun-shot! He asks his men to take their positions. Sinha starts shivering...
 
That's like Maan Singh Khurana ke shaan...dushman bhi kaanpte hai!! Great going Mr. MSK!!
 
Kahaan hai Sinha saala! Saamne aa...apne aadmiyon ko bhejta hai...khud aane ki himmat nahi hai na tere mein.
H...H...Hu...Hum b.b...baith ..ke .bh..bh..bhi to ....bb..bb..baat kk..kar s...ssakte...hai...Mmmm....Mr... Kh...Khurana
Mere paas itna time nahi hai Sinha ke bachche...(targets his rifle on Sinha's head) Agar meri Geet ko kuch bhi hua na...isme jitni goliya hai na...sab tere bheje mein gaad doonga...samjha..tu?
Kuch nahi hoga Mr. Khurana...ey chote! Khurana Sahab ke liye chai bana ke laa,...kadak chai...
Mujhe chai-wai kuch nahi chahiye...bakwaas band kar...jab tak baat tere-mere beech mein thi...tab tak maine kuch nahi kiya...lekin agar Geet ko kuch bhi hua...to tu gaya..
Sinha murmurs to himself though his thoughts are very to be heard by Maan.
Mere saare aadmiyon ka kya hua...unhe to maine Khurana ko udaane ke liye kaha tha...?
Tere saare aadmiyon ki laash tujhe kuch der mein mil jayengi...
Sab ke sab?
Haan bey..sab ke sab...
Maan is ready to shoot Sinha when his phone rings...
Ji Daadima!
Maan bete...kahaan hain aap?
Boliye...kya hua...
Beta woh Geet...Geet...
Kya hua Geet ko?
Aap bas yahaan aa jaiyye...abhi...
Ji daadima...abhi aata hoon.
 
Saale...tu aaj bach gaya..lekin yaad rakh...tujhe chodunga nahi...kabhi nahi...
 
HOSPITAL
 
Maan rushed back to the hospital and found daadima and Annie looking tensed...He gazed in the ICU ward. Geet was on artificial breathing.
Kya hua daadima Geet ko?
Bete unke operation ke baad woh keval aapka naam le rahi hai...aur koi bhi dawai unpe respond nahi kar rahi hai.
Maan bhai! Ek baar aap Geet ke paas chale jaaiyye...use tassali ho jayegi to shayad medicine bhi asar kar jaye!
Main jaata hoon abhi...
 
Maan entered Geet's ward. She was awake...her eyes wide open...she was searching for someone and then her search became successful when she saw her Maan. He was weeping seeing Geet in that condition. Geet struggled to move. Maan rushed to her and stopped her from doing so. The doctor entered the ward.
Doctor, How is Geet?
She is fine Mr. Khurana if she responds to the medicines which are given orally. (looking at Geet) Kuch kehna hai Geet..(Geet nodded) Ruko main tumhare mask hata doon. Mr. Khurana aap Geet se thodi der baat kar lijiye...lekin zyaada bolne mat dijiyega inhe. Yeh medicines khilaane ki koshish kijiye.
Ji Doctor
The doctor leaves..
Maan!
Sshhsh...mat bolo Geet... (He kissed her hand over and over again and was wailing.)
Geet struggled to move her hand and then wiped off tears on Maan's face. He held her hand and kissed them. Tears dropped from her eyes...
Dobara aisa kiya na...to main khud apne aap ko maar dalunga...samjhi...jhalli!
Geet nodded though it really pained Geet.
Pagli...meri jaan nikaal di thi tumne...
Maan...agar...a..aap....ko....k..kuch....ho....jaata to...meri...jaan nikal jaati...
Aisa ek baar bol diya...dobara apne mooh se nikala na...to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...
Geet giggled softly...
Aap...filmi..dialogue bhi theek se...nahi bol sakte...
Maan smiled...Geet pulled his cheeks and she smiled...
Achcha lo...yeh dawai kha lo...
eww...mujhe nahi khana...
doctor keh rahe the ki dawaii respond nahi kar rahi hai...kaise karegi..jab maharani ko khani nahi hai...
mujhe nahin khaana...
kha lo Geet...
yuk...ganda taste hota hai...
dawa hai...ice-cream nahi...
Maan...
chup...bilkul chup...
Geet shut her mouth and looked at Maan. He was angry... She quickly gulped the tablets and glanced at Maan who was now smiling. Maan made her eat the food and then called the doctor for the check-up...
Mr. Khurana, inki haalat mein kaafi sudhar hai...inka liver wapas function karne laga hai..Geet lao main tumhara mask laga doon.Mr. Khurana aap yahi rukenge...yaa?
Ji main yahi rahoonga...
Main anesthesia de deti hoon...
Ji doctor...
Maan sat there until Geet again went unconscious and then he went comfortable on the sofa and watched Geet the entire night...
 
I wonder where Geet's family is?!!
 
The next morning, Geet got up early...Maan wasn't expecting the dose to discontinue so soon. She smiled at Maan. Maan called the doctor. She did her regular check-up and was very happy with Geet's condition...
Maan... Geet extended her hands towards Maan... Maan quickly jumped forward and grabbed them...
Mamma...papaji...nahi hain...
Geet...unhe raat ka ticket nahi mila...thodi der mein aa jayenge...
Mamma sochengi...Maan ko bachane gayi thi...khud goli kha kar bethi hai...
Achcha...tum zyaada hanso mat...stitches mein stress padega!
Yes Boss!
Geet smiled again...Maan was mesmerized by this smile...
Maan gets a call from Sasha-his secretary 
MK, How is Adi now?
Oh God! (murmurs to himself) main to uske baare mein bhul hi gaya! (to Sasha) he's alright Sasha...kuch kaam tha kya...
Haan MK, woh ...............................

Geet saw Maan angry while talking to Sasha...they were discussing of postponing the meeting on account of the destruction done to Khurana Constuctions. Maan went out leaving Geet alone. She was wide awake. The doctor didn't feel it necessary to give the anesthesia again. She was recovering fast!

Yeh Maan ko kya ho gaya...abhi to baith ke muskura rahe the aur ab phir dusht danav ka avatar le liya...khair...unke rival ne nuksaan bhi to bahut kiya hoga...tabhi gusse mein hain.

Geeeeet! Geeeet beta! Geet heard rano's voice. She giggled- eh lo! shuru ho gaya daily soap....bilkul TV ki actress hain mamma....
Rano entered Geet's ward and saw Geet smiling at them. Rano was wailing. So war raaji and brij veerji. Geet's papaji and daarji were looking tensed though not weeping. Daarji went closer to Geet...
Mera bachcha...kaisa hai ab?
Theek hoon daarji...
Aaj mujhe tujh pe garv hai Geet...! Mera bachcha itna bahadur ho gaya hai ki kisi aur ke liye apni jaan jokham mein dal liya...
Maan entered Geet's ward and when he saw Geet's family he bent down to take everyone's blessings. Daarji blessed him and Geet together and then asked about the well-being of Maan. After Geet's accident everybody had forgotten that a day before Maan to had been in the hospital. When daadima saw them, she immediately left all the work and attended to them. Rano wept bitterly in daadima's shoulder and both Geet and Maan exchanged naughty looks at this spectacle. Daadima proposed to take Geet's family to Khurana Mansion but they replied that they would not enter Geet's to-be house. Geet blushed at this.

5 HOURS LATER-HOSPITAL

Geet's family had gone back to the guest-house arranged for them by the Khuranas. They had to freshen up. Maan was still with Geet in his ward and every time the doctor came for the check-up, Maan would diligently listen to what she would say regarding Geet's condition. The doctor said that it was safe if Geet stayed at the hospital for a day more. Geet made a nasty look at Maan who pretended to listen to the doctor...
Maan, mujhe abhi ghar jaan jai...
Sshh Geet hum kal baat karenge...abhi so jao...
Nahi...Nahi...Nahi....mujhe abhi jaana hai...
Geet!
Maan....mujhe abhi jaana hai...bus!
Geet! no!
Maan please....
Maan spoke softly...- Jaan...please
Geet was mesmerized. She asked him to say that again...He repeated again and then again...
Geet and Maan giggled as Geet slept in Maan's arms and then Maan too dozed off then and there only!!!

                                               Precap
                                        !ALL IS WELL!
                                   Prev PART 10  Next PART 12


Edited by CIDRoxx - 13 April 2011 at 1:35am

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wow thats an awsome one yaar ...loved it 

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