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hi
i just read ur ff
i just love it
really this story admires me alot
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the next part asap
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It was a nice update. What has happened to Maan, critical hai. Usko jaldi se thik kar do. Abhi to bahut salo baad mile the.

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PART 9

Geet tried to sleep but her attempt failed. Anvesha too wasn't able to sleep. She was gazing through the window with tears continuously rolling down her cheeks. Geet wiped the tears off and forced Anvesha to take rest on her lap. Annie agreed after a little more argument. Geet was thinking of the night she had spent with Maan on his laps. She sent a prayer to the heaven. Babaji, mere Maan ko bacha lo! please babaji...aap jo bhi sazaa dena chahte ho...mujhe do...unhe nahi (sob)(sob). After a while Geet to dozzed off leaning on Annie.

DELHI STATION

Nakul was waiting for Geet and Anvesha on the station. He had 2-3 servants with him.
Nakul- Anvesha Madam, aapko aur Geet Madam ko Daadima ne ghar se fresh hokar hospital aane ko kaha hai. Chaliye aapko ghar le chalta hoon.
Anvesha- Nahi Nakul, main pehle Maan bhai ko dekhne hospital jaa rahi hoon.
Geet- Nahi ruko Annie, Nakul sahi keh raha hai. Pehle ghar jaa kar fresh ho lete hain phir hospital jayenga!
Anvesha- Par Geet!
Geet- Anvesha! please ghar chalo!
Anvesha and Geet reached the Khurana Mansion from the station. 

KHURANA MANSION

Geet freshened herself in the guest-room and headed straight to Maan's room to have a closer look. She saw his pictures taken when he would be practicing Martial Arts. She was mesmerized. Soon, Anvesha called her.
Chalo Geet!! 
Haan! chalo...

AIIMS

Geet inquired  about the cabin Maan was in. They headed straight to the 7th floor where the ICUs were there. Daadima was sitting helplessly on the sofa and crying. Geet went straight to console daadima. Daadima was too happy to see Geet. She hugged Geet and started crying. She had wanted a shoulder for so long and finally had got Geet. Anvesha moved towards the ICU to have a closer look of Maan. He was covered with machines and tubes from top to bottom. His injuries had made him impossible to recognize. He was unconscious and nurses were trotting here and there around him to get the tests done. Geet handed Anvesha the charge of taking care of daadima and herself got up to see Maan. Her heart stopped beating seeing Maan in this condition. She wanted to cry but couldn't. She had Annie and Daadima to console. She ran straight to the small temple at the end of the corridor and sent a prayer to heaven. After a while she came back to daadima and asked about the attack.
Daadima, Maan ke saath yeh sab...kaise...
Geet beta, humari company pe jis client ne case kiya tha, woh koi aur nahi balki khud humare company rival tha.
Maan ko kaise nahi pata chala!
Beta, woh client usi rival company ke side se bheja gaya tha. Yahaan aakar jab Maan ko pata chala to unhone ne us company pe case karne ki dhamki di. Us din woh raat to ghar laut rahe the to ghar ke paas kuch gundo ne unhe roka aur bahut maara aur humare ghar mein lakar phek diya. Raat ko nakul ne Maan ko dekha to hume bata diya.
A long tension sweeped across the corridor. The doctors looked tensed. Something was terribly wrong. Doc! The pulse is dropping in cabin no.2 Geet froze as she heard the nurse calling the doctor and informing about Maan's pulse being dropped...The doctor immediately decided to shift Maan to OT. As Maan was being taken out to the OT, just outside the entrance his hand touched Geet's and then the stretcher went inside. After 2 hours of tension. The doctor proclaimed that Maan was safe. They took him back to the ICU and also allowed daadima to meet him. He was all conscious now. Daadi decided to give Maan a surprise regarding Geet and asked her to return home and make preparations for Maan's comeback. On her way to KM she called rano
Hello mamma! Geet bol rahi hoon. Aap kaise ho? Amritsar pahunch gaye?
Haan beta pahunch gaye? Hum sab theek hai! Tu bata Maan kaise hain aur maaji...zara unse baat karwa meri to!
Aa mamma mein abhi daadima ke paas nahi hoon. Maan ab bilkul theek hai to main ghar jaakar unke ghar aane ki tayyari karne wali hoon. Daadima abhi bhi hospital mein hain. Aap ko baat karni ho to main daadima ka number doon aapko?
Haan de to zara?
likho- **********
Main khud hi unse baat kar leti hoon.
Mamma unhe ye mat kehelwana ki Geet kaisi hai. Maan nahi jaante ki main yahaan hoon. Agar aap mere baare mein daadima se poochengi to Maan ko shak ho jayega. chalo main ghar pahunch gayi...baad mein baat karoongi mamma.
Theek hai beta...apna khayal rakhna!! bye!

KHURANA MANSION

Geet had so much to prepare for Maan. She first ordered Nakul to decorate the house by messages like- WELCOME BACK, GET WELL SOON. And then her next target was the kitchen area. She didn't know what Maan ate so she ordered the chefs to prepare whatever Maan liked. Then she decorated his room in white orchids. Now she sat on the sofa waiting for Maan.

AIIMS

Maan was totally conscious now. Somewhere in his sub-conscious mind he knew Geet was there. Daadima and Anvesha entered his room. He turned towards them and shifted here and there as if to locate Geet!. Daadima and Annie giggled.
Maan bete, kisko dhoond rahe hai. Kisi ko bulaya tha aapne.
Umm...nahi daadima kisi ko nahi...main to bas aise hi...!
Hum sab jaante hain ki aapki aankhein kisko dhoond rahi hai!
Ji!
Maan! Geet yahaan nahi hain. daarji ne unhe yahaan aane ki ijazat nahi di! Humne bahut koshish ki par koi phayada nahi hua.
Maan bhai, this is very bad! Jo hain yahaan pe unki parwah nahi hai aapko! Hum yahaan pe subah se baithe hain aur aapko Geet ki yaad aa rahi hai. 
Achcha sorry meri maa! Geet se zyada to tum Jhansi ki Rani lagti ho! Daadima, meri Geet se baat to karwa dijiye na?
Maaan! aap pehle theek ho jayen! Phir main Geet ko yahin pe bula loongi...bina daarji ko bataye! Achcha lijiye kuch kha lijiye!
Daadima, mujhe bhook nahi lagi! Mujhe nahi khana!
Annie aap hi sambhaliye Maan ko. Hum ek phone kar ke aate hai. Geet ke ghar waalon ko bhi bata de ki aap theek hain na! Woh log subah se phone kar rahe the!
Pur daadima! mujhe nahi khana! Meri Adi se baat karwaiye! Annie mera phone do please...
No Never ever chup chap khana khaiye...bas chup!
Ji mom!!!
Shut up bhai!
 
Daadima outside was on a call with rano.
Haan rano beta, Maan ab bilkul theek hai. Aapka bahut bahut shukriya ke aapne Geet ko bhej diya. Humara kaam aasaan ho gaya! 
Maaji main nahi bhejti to Geet humse lad ke aa jaati! Bahut ziddi hai..phir uske brij veerji uski bahut help karte hain. Humein bhi unhone tab bataya jab Geet ki train jaa chhuki thi.
Brij ko bhi humari taraf se thank you bol dijiyega! Achcha ab hum rakhte hain. Tumhe phir se phone kar denge jab Maan ghar pahunch jaayenge! Hum rakhte hain.

Next she called Geet
Haan Geet, saari tayyari ho gayii. Maan ke discharge papers ready hain. Hum unhe lekar bas thodi der mein nikal rahe hain. Ek minute Geet Maan aa rahe hain...aa.. phone mat katiyega!... Haan Nakul aapne sab kuch banwa liya na! Chaliye aapne bahut achcha kiya...Maan ka kamra theek karwa dijiyega...Hum log bas thodi der mein aa rahe hain!
Ji Ma'am abhi chote sahab ka kamra theek karwa dete hain... (Geet cuts the phone and bursts into a laughter)
Kya hua daadima, kisse baat kar rahin thi!
Nakul se beta. Chaliye! Ghar chalte hain.
Ji chaliye...ek baar main Geet se baat kar lo..aap chaliye...main aata hoon. 
Maan...humari Geet ki mummy se baat hui. Geet apne College wapas chali gayii aur apna cell phone ghar chod gayii hai. Aapke phone ka koi phayada nahi hoga...
Main keh raha hoon daadima, is jhalli ka kuch nahi ho sakta...pata hain ab mujhse naraaz ho jayegi ki maine phone nahi kiya...khair chaliye...! Ghar chalte hain
Haan Maan chaliye! (giggles on the way)
Anvesha and Daadi help Maan get into the car and orders the driver to drive slowly without jerks. Maan is not focussing. He is muddled up thinking of ways in which he can contact Geet. He checks on his mobile for the helpline number for BHU. Anvesha snatches away the phone. Maan bhai, aap abhi se shuru ho gaye... No kaam...is that clear! Ji teacher ji.. Stop it bhai! Lijiye hum ghar bhi pahunch gaye... driver dheere se rokna...jhatke se nahi! 
Maan enters KM and sees the mansion is dark.

KHURANA MANSION

Something tells Maan to got to his room. Anvesha and daadima try to stop him but he doesn't. His room was shining brightly although it was dark. He could feel some presence in his room. He groped for the switches when near the switches he felt some soft hands... The touch was familiar. He burst into tears... He could feel the same reaction in the hands which shivered by his touch!... He switched on the lights and found his soul mate standing next to him crying softly!
Geet... Maan sobbed
Sshshshhh! chup rahiye...kuch mat boliye... (sob) Yeh kya haal bana rakha hai aapne apna...mujhe nahi bataya na aapne...(sob) Aap letiye...main jaa rahi hoon...Aap theek hai...mujhe ab apne ghar jaana hai. (sob)
Geet...please meri baat to suno... yeh sab tumne kiya...
Haan to! Maan please mujhe bakwaas baatein nahi karni..I am leaving.... Bye!


Precap
Maan manaofying Geet!!
PREVIOUS -PART 8-  

I REALLY HOPE YOU ENJOY THE UPDATE...PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS!


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yes yes enjoying & loving it..thanxs


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nice update
waiting for more..............

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
loved the update...............actually didnt expect this accident.............cant wait for the next update to c how maan gets to manofy his geet

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