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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 38)

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged
part 6
very sad..................had onlyMaan seen the pic before then this wouldnt have happened.................cont soon..................

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
superb part...loved it to the core...!

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
oops ..double post.

Edited by namita25 - 25 March 2011 at 6:37am

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s-o-m-m-i-e Goldie

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
itna zulm maan perCry
lovely update

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Poor Maan! Really interesting the way your story is going!

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namitasin Senior Member

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Oh dear i know this is gona b happen,so sad how culd she just say ki do bar milne se payar nahi ho jata. Uff well ur precap is shoking,update soon.

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pinku33 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
wow...too good :)

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged

                               FF:Revenge from the lover

                                             Part 7


They came closer and closer.He could hear the heart beats of both of them.He touched her lips.They were so soft.He wanted to feel them by his lips.He was about to kiss her lips.When his alaram clock rang.Maan wakeup at once.He couldnot sleep the whole night.He had only slept from 8:00 am to 9:00am.He was feeling disgusting.


Maan(Angry at himself):How can i dream about her like this?I should remember that she has married to someone else and that someone is my brother.I should try to forget about her.


He knew that he was trying his level best to move on and forgot her but he couldnot stop feeling about her.He composed himself and went downstairs for the breakfast.


Dev:Hi bro!!

Maan:Hi dev!Tum aaj bohat jaldi nahi uth gaye?

Dev:Woh kya hai na aaj geet ne sweet dish banane hai aur breakfast bhi wohi bana rahe hai.Loo woh aa gaye.


Geet served breakfast and sweet dish to everyone.Maan kept looking at his plate.


Savitri devi(SD) and madhavi:Wow! geet aap ne bohat acha banaya hai breakfast aur sweet dish.

Dev:Bro aap ko kaise lage sweet dish?

Maan(Looking down):Ache hai.


Dev kissed geet's hands.


Dev:Bohat ache bane hai sweet dish.

SD(teasingly):Dev beta no romance during breakfast.

Dev(Smiled):Ok dadi maa!


Geet was blushing.Maan was trying to control himself.He quickly finished his breakfast.


Maan(Quickly):Ok dadimaa main office ja raha hoon.Bye everyone.

Dev:Bye bro!!


Maan went to office.He tried to forget today's incident but the scene of dev kissing geet's hands was hurting him.


Maan(Controlling his tears):Mujhe isse bhoolna hi hoga aur agar woh mere samne rahe ge tu main isse bhool nahi pao ga.Mujhe yahan se dor jana ho ga.


He had got few projects in canada.He decided to do those projects so that he could get away from geet or else he couldnot control his heart and would create problems for her.He went to canada after telling SD and madhavi about his projects.He was relieved when he went to canada.After few days,Maan was going to office.Suddenly he remembered that he forgot his file in his room.He quickly went back to his hotel.When he was going to his room,he collided with someone.The girl was about to fall when he griped her.He looked at her and shocked to find geet and stand her up on her feet.


Maan(Shockingly):Geet tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet:Woh main aur dev yahan honeymoon ka liye aaye hain.


Geet:Maan thank u!

Maan:Kis liye?

Geet:Mujhe abhi bachane ka liye aur ...mere zindagi main koi problem na create karne ka liye.Waise mujhe nahi pata tha ka tum dev ka cousin ho.

Maan(Controlled himself):Its ok geet.Tumhi thanx khane ke koi zarurat nahi hai.

Geet:Mujhe pata tha maan ka tum mujh se pyar nahi karte yeh bas attraction thi.

Maan(Controlled his tears):you are right geet.Main tumse pyar nahi karta.


Dev came there.


Dev:Yeh bhabi aur devar main kya batein ho rahe hain??Waise bro aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan:Main yahan project ka liye aaya hoon.

Dev:Ok bro bye! main geet ko bahar le kar ja raha hoon (He kissed geet on the cheek) Chalein sweet heart.


They went away and maan slowly went to his room.Geet's words were ringing in his ears.


Maan(Controlling his tears but still one fell down):Tum theek khate ho geet main tumse pyar nahi karta balke main tumse ishq karta hoon.Mere dua hai tum jahan bhi raho khush raho.



Precap:Dev took one girl to the hotel room and someone was following him.

Note on page 39.

Edited by pickachu - 25 March 2011 at 3:41pm

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