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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 28)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged

This Maan is so sweet & romantic mushy guy  LOL

Very sweet part  Heart

Thanks for the pm ...

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Maan is not Maan in frnt of Geet
But majnu infrmt of her
Agar Geet ko yaad aaja whr they met Maan wuld hav been dead
Loved Maan's craziness now payal
It was realy fab n sweet update

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
maan is so romantic 
haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awww he took her payal
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
awesome.....
wonder what went wrong??
maan wud never do anything to hurt geet...but we will know as the story progresses...
cant wait for maan to propose geet....
update soon...

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 3:25pm | IP Logged

                                    FF:Revenge from the lover

                                                  Part 5

 

Savitri devi and Madhavi went to the special children school where they met geet.Savitri devi(SD) liked geet.So she asked geet about her family and education.Geet told her that she has only her mother which is her family.Geet's phone rang.Geet excused SD and madhavi.

 

Geet:Hi pinky!Kya haal hai tumhara?

Pinky:Main theek hoon per yaar mujhe abhi adi ne bataya ke DD ne humain honeymoon ke liye two weeks ke holiday de hai.Aur switzerland ke tickets as gift diye hain.Main soch rahe thi ka mere pas garam kapre nahi hain tu main shopping per jao.Tum mere saat chalo na geet.

Geet:Tumhara dimag tu theek hai na aaj hi tumhare shadi hoye hai aur aaj hi tumhi shopping per jana hai.

Pinky:Tu aaj hi shopping per jao ge kal morning ke flight hai humare.Chalo dopahar main shadi karne ka fayada hua.

Geet:Pinky tum bhi na.Adi se pocha hai?

Pinky:Haan pocha hai ab tum jaldi se ghar aa jao.Ok?Bye!

Geet:Haan bas aa rahe hoon.Bye!

 

She came back to savitri devi and madhavi.

 

Geet:I'm sorry ma'am mujhe koi kaam hai so i have to go.It was nice meeting u.

SD/madhavi:Bye beta!

 

When geet went away.SD talked with madhavi.

 

SD:Mujhe yeh ladke bohat pasand hai.Dev ke liye kaise rahe ge?

Madhavi:Per main tu maan ke liye soch rahe thi.

SD:Beta aap ko pata hi hai maan kisse rishta ka liye manta nahi hain.Hum dev ke bare main iss liye soch rahe tha kyuki yeh ladke responsible lagte hai.Dev ko mature bana dein ge.

Madhavi:Per mere khayal hai ke aap pehle maan se poch lein.Agar woh nahi mante tu dev ke liye iss ladke ko choose kar lein ge.Kyuki maan settled hai unlike dev.

SD:Ok as u wish.Aaj hum maan se baat karein ge.

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Maan was in office when he received adi's call.

 

Adi:Hi maan! Woh pinky ko koi shopping karne thi tu main aur pinky shopping per ja rahein hai.Main wahan bore hoon ga agar tum aa sakte ho tu aa jana.

Maan:Tumhi pata hai mujhe shopping se nafrat hai per bhi tum mujh se poch rahe ho.

Adi:Woh kya hai na pinky ka saat geet bhi ja rahe hai.

Maan(His face lightened with happiness):Acha chalo main bhi aata hoon.

Adi(Teasing him):Per tumhi tu shopping pasand nahi hai.Tu tum mat aao.Hum chalte hain.

Maan:Khabar daar jo tum log mujhe chor kar gaye warna office bola loon ga two weeks ke choti cancel kar ke.

Adi(Laughed):Acha per jaldi se aa ja.

 

Maan happily finished his work and quickly went towards adi's house.In whole the way to the market,Maan kept looking at geet from the rear mirror adi just shaked his head.In the market,Pinky and geet started to do shopping.Maan and adi were following them from one shop to another.

 

Geet(Made baby face):Pinky tumhare waja se maine pehle cotton candy nahi lee.Dekho ab woh cotton candy wale uncle bhi chale gaye jo yahan ghoom rahe tha cotton candies le kar.

 

When maan heard geet's talking.He went away to search the man.After searching for 15 minutes,He found the person who sold cotton candies.He brought few cotton candies and give it to adi to give them to geet.Adi gave cotton candies to geet.She was very happy.She thanked adi when adi was about to tell geet that maan brought them.Maan stopped him.After shopping,They dropped geet at her home first.Then they went to adi's home.Adi told pinky that maan wanted to talk to him in private.Pinky understood and went to her room.

 

Maan:Adi main geet ko propose karna chahta hoon.

Adi(Questioningly):Itne jaldi?

Maan(Seriously):I know main jaldi kar raha hoon per main nahi chahta ka mera pyar ke waja se geet ke koi badnaami ho.Badnaami iss liye kha raha hoon ke jab main geet ke samne hota hoon tu mujhe apna hosh nahi rahta iss ke waja se iss ko aage koi problem na ho iss liye main yeh shadi jaldi karna chahta hoon waise bhi main yeh long affairs pasand nahi karta aur aik baat yeh bhi hai ka mujhe iss ke khonay ka dar hai kyuki woh itne ache hai ka kisse ko bhi pasand aa sakte hai.

Adi:Theek hai tum isse propose kar do waise bhi maine pinky se pocha hai tu iss ne bataya hai ka geet ke abhi kahein baat nahi chal rahe.

Maan:Theek hai jab main England wale meeting attend karke aao ga tu isse propose kar do ga.

 

Adi wished him best of luck and prayed in his heart about his friend's happiness.

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Maan came at the dinner.

 

SD:Maan beta aaj hum jis special school main gaye tha iss main humain aik pyari se ladke milein thi hum soch rahein tha ka ab aap ke shadi kar de jaye.Agar aap ko woh ladke pasand aaye tu hum aap ke shadi in se karwa dein ge warna dev se kar dein ge.

Maan:Sorry dadi maa per mujhe aik ladke pasand hai aur main iss se shadi karna chahta hoon.

SD(Happily):Sach.

Madhavi(Smiled):Tu aaj kal aap iss liye khush nazar aate hain.

SD:Theek hai hum dev aur aap ke shadi aik saat karein ge.

Maan:Dadi maa pehle main iss ladke se baat kar loon per aap log iske ghar proposal le jaye ga.

SD:Ok per inka kya naam hai?

Maan:Iss ka naam G....

 

Maan's phone rang.Maan excused dadi maa.He attended the call.Maan quickly came back.

 

Maan:Sorry dadi maa mujhe 2 hours ke baad wale flight se England jana hai main two weeks ke baad wapis aao ga.

SD:Ok beta.Bye!

Madhavi:Have a wonderful journey!

 

 

 

Precap:Maan proposed geet!!!!

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Thanxxx for commenting and liking the previous part.
I have added u guys in my pm list.
I hope u all like this part.
I know this part is not gud.
But please leave ur comments even if u don't like this part.
If u have any question regarding this ff u can pm me.



Love,
Fatima

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
wow lovely update...
when maan will come back geet wedding will fix with dev...
poor maan
pls cont soon

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear
uff why does he have to go now
by the time he will be back geet marriage will be fixed to Dev
update soon

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