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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 117)

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 123pritha

awesome update
continue soon plzzz


Thanxx for liking the partBig smile!
I will try to update soon Inshallah!

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                         FF:Revenge from the lover

                                         Part 15

 

In the morning,Maan was waiting for geet near the car.When he heard the sound of heels.He turned around and saw geet.She was looking stunning.

 

Maan(Thinking):My geet is simple yet beautiful!

 

Geet:I'm sorry maan hum late tu nahi huay?

Maan:Nahi, Waise geet maine adi se baat karle hai.Woh tumhi sab se introduce karwa de ga aur tumhi tumhara kaam bhi samijha dega.

Geet:Ok per mujhe aap se kuch khana hai.

Maan:Haan khaho.

Geet(Hesitated):Woh main... nahi chahte ka kisse ko office main pata chale ka aap ...mere husband hain...Kyuki..

Maan(Lightly smiled):Mujhe pata hai ka tum extra attention nahi chahte iss liye maine adi aur pinky ko pehle hi kha diya hai ka woh humare relation ka bare main kisse ko na batayein.Aur koi problem tu nahi hai na?

Geet(Smiled):Nahi, But thank u for understanding.

 

Maan and geet went to the office.In the office,When maan and geet entered everyone greeted maan.Maan looked at adi and signalled him from his eyes and went to his office.Adi went to geet.Pinky also saw geet and hugged her happily.Sasha and tasha were looking at them.

 

Tasha:Sasha i mean ma'am Yeh ladke kon hai jo MK ka saath aaye hai?Kahan yeh MK ke fiance ya girlfriend tu nahi agar aisa hua tu...(Sasha glared at tasha) Silly me aisa kaise ho sakta hai MK tu sirf aap ke saath suit karte hain.

 

Adi introduced geet to everyone.Then he showed geet her cabin which was next to Maan's cabin.Adi got a call from maan.He attended the call.

 

Maan:Adi tumne geet ko sab se milwa diya hai aur isse iss ka cabin dekha diya hai kya?

Adi(Smiled):Jee sir maine aap ke love..Oops aapke secretary ko inka cabin dekha diya hai.Kaam bhi samijha diya hai aur sab se milwa bhi diya hai (Teasingly) Waise aap chahein tu agar kaam karne ka dil na kare tu aapne right side per inhe dekh bhi sakte hain.

Maan(Smiled):Jee thank u for your help.Bye!

Adi:Its ok bye!

 

Pinky and geet were talking to eachother.

 

Pinky:Acha hua geet jo tumne office join kar liya iss se tum bore bhi nahi ho ge aur DD ko bhi ache tara jaan lo ge.

Geet:Haan inhe main aur ache tara jaan loon ge.Kyuki inhe business se bohat pyar hai na.Iss ka liye woh kuch bhi kar sakte hain.

Pinky:Haan inhe business se pyar hai per iss se zayada inhe tum...

 

Geet's phone rang.Maan called her to come to his cabin.She quickly went to his cabin.

 

Maan:Mujhe tumhi dictation dene thi.

 

After giving the dictation,Maan asked her to pick the file from the cabinet.She picked up the file and about to give it to maan when accidently the file hit the glass and the water in the glass fell on the file on which maan was doing work.

 

Maan(Shouted):Geet yeh tumne kya kar diya mera sara kaam kharab ho gaya hai.

Geet(Tears started to flow from her eyes):I'm really sorry...

 

Maan's anger vanished when he saw tears in geet's eyes.She was going towards the door when maan quickly went to her and grabbed her wrist.Geet could not balance herself and fell on the couch while saving her maan fell on top of her.

 

Maan(Whispered in geet's ear):I'm really very sorry geet mujh se galti hogaye.Please mujhe maaf kardo main tumse wada karta hoon ka main tum per kabhi nahi chalao ga.I promise.

 

Maan kissed her tears.

 

Maan(Slowly):Please geet mat ro.Kya tumne mujhe maaf kar diya?

Geet(Lightly smiled):Haan!

Maan(Looking at her lovingly):Thank u soo much geet!

 

They were staring at eachother when maan came out of trance.He was about to get up when Geet pulled him back by his collar.He was surprised and then he looked  at her questionly.Geet hugged him.

 

Geet:Jab bhi main aap ke karab hote hoon tu mujhe aisa lagta hai ka main safe hoon.

Maan(Smiled):Sach main?

 

Geet shyly nodded.Maan looked at her passionately then he slowly moved the tip of his finger from her neck to her shoulder.Geet closed her eyes.Maan thought he heard some sound but he ignored it.

 

Geet(Softly):Maan

Maan(Whispered in her ear):Geet i love you

Geet:Maan i love y...

 

Someone cleared the throat.Maan and geet came out of trance and quickly got up from the couch.Sasha entered after adi.Maan and geet thanked God that sasha had not seen that scene.

 

Geet(turned red):Sir main apne cabin main jao.

Maan(Embrassed):Haan.

 

Adi controlled his laugh while sasha and tasha gave glares to geet.Geet went to the cabin.

 

Geet(Angrily thinking):Yeh main kya kar rahe thi??Pata nahi jab maan pas main hote hain tu mujhe kya ho jata hai?Main apne aap ko itna safe mahsoos karte hoon aisa lagta hai ka woh mujhe sab problems se bacha lein ge.Geet tu yeh kya kar rahe hai tujhe apna mission baar baar kyu bhool jata hai?Chal ab concentrate kar apne mission pe.Revenge lene ka liye mujhe maan ke kamzori pata hone chahiye aur mujhe lagta hai ka business hi in ke takat aur kamzori hai.

 

On the other hand,Maan was in his cabin thinking about the incident.

 

Maan(Thinking):Mujhe lagta hai ka geet mujhe atleast like tu karte hai agar pyar nahi karte.Per mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ka woh mujh se kuch chupa rahe hai...Main iss baat ka pata lagane ke koshish karoon ga.

 

 

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Thanxx for commenting on previous part!
I have replied each one of U!
I know this part is so boring.
But still please leave ur comments!
I really hope that u guys like this part!
Because i'm not good at writing romantic sequences!


Love,
Fatima

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
G8 part
loved it
geet maan ki taraf khichi chali jarahi hai
ek taraf pyaar horaha hai toh dosari taraf badla lena hai
new entry kaun hai 
pls cont soon 
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nice update ... 




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AWESOMEEE BUT PLZZZ UPDATE SOONNN

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