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ManeetFF:Revenge from the lover(Continued on th:2) (Page 104)

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutee987

awesome updates.


Thanxx for commentingBig smile!

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                                                           FF:Revenge from the lover

                                                                      Part 14

 

Geet searched rahul's card and called him.He told her that he was out of the city.He would meet her at 5:00pm in the spice tree restaurant.Geet thought to go the orphan house for the job.She went to the orphan house and talked with the head for the job.After discussing about the job,she went to the restaurant and saw that rahul was waiting for her.She went to him.

 

Rahul:Hi bhabi! aap kaise hain?

Geet(Quickly):Main theek hoon mujhe tumse important baat karne hai.

Rahul:Jee baateyein!

Geet:Tumhi kaise pata ka dev ko maan ne marwaya hai?

Rahul:Actually jab maan sir aur dev sir america meeting ka liye gaye tha main bhi wahan per hi tha.

 

FLASHBACK (STARTED):

 

Rahul was going towards his room when he heard noise from dev's room.He went to dev's room.The door of the room was slightly open.He saw dev and maan in a heated argument.Suddenly maan slapped dev so hard that he hit his head on the table.

 

Maan(Shouted):Don't u dare say that again!! If i saw u doing this again i will kill U without thinking twice! This is my last warning to U dev and one more thing i'm not going to give u any money from the business.

 

He angrily walked away while rahul hide near the door.Rahul followed maan.He heard that maan attended a call.

 

Maan:Ok so u have done my work.

Maan(After hearing from the other side):Theek hai main dev ko iss car main bhej doon ga...Remember i don't want any mistake this time.Ok bye!

 

FLASHBACK (ENDED)

 

Rahul:Dev sir jis car main gaye tha iss ka 5 minutes baad maan sir dosri car main airport gaye per last time dev sir mujh se hi baat kar rahe tha tu inka accident ho gaya.Main jab tak iss jaga per pohancha tab tak dev sir iss duniya main nahi rahe tha iss liye ka koi inhe hospital nahi le kar gaya tha.Sorry bhabi main dev sir ka liye kuch nahi kar sakta kyuki maan sir ke pohanch bohat oper tak hai.

Geet(Shocked after hearing the detail):Per maan ne aisa kyu kiya??

Rahul:Mujhe lagta hai business ke waja se.Maan sir ko apne business se bohat pyar hai aur inhone is ka liye bohat mehnat bhi ke hai.Shayad woh yeh nahi chahate ka koi aur iss ka profit le...(Looked someone at geet's back)...Maan sir aap yahan??

 

Geet turned to find maan standing there.He surprisingly looked at rahul and geet.

 

Maan:Hi rahul tum aur geet yahan kya kar rahe ho??

Geet(Quickly):Woh main yahan apni dost se milne aaye thi tu mujhe rahul mil gaye.Inhone bataya ka in ke dad apke dad ka saath kam karte tha.

Rahul:Ok sir main chalta hoon.Mujhe aik kaam yaad aa gaya hai.Bye sir bye bhabi!

 

Rahul walked away.

 

Maan:Chalo ab hum bhi ghar chalte hain.Mujhe yahan client se milna tha iss liye aaya tha.

 

Geet just ignored him and went away.

 

Maan(Upset):Pata nahi mujhe kyu lag raha hai ka geet mujh se jhoot bol rahe thi...Main bhi na pata nahi kya sochta rahta hoon.Geet kyu mujh se jhoot bole ge.

 

Maan followed geet.They sat in the car.Maan started the car.He stopped the car infront of a shop.

 

Maan(While looking at her lovingly):Mere saath chalo ge geet.

Geet(Looked away rudely):Maan aap ko jana hai tu jayein.Please jaldi jayein mera time na waste karein mujhe ghar per aik kaam hai.

Maan(Softly but feeling hurt):Ok main 5 minutes main aaya.

 

After few minutes,He was back while hiding something in his pocket.After getting home,Geet went to their room while maan went to the study room.Geet took bath and came to the room.She was brushing her hair when maan entered in the room.She didnot notice him yet.Maan was looking at her reflection in the mirror.She was looking breathtaking in blue saree.Katrina in the blue saree are the contemporary sarees or modern style

Maan couldnot stop looking at her.He was slowing walking towards her in a trance.Geet looked at maan from the mirror.She couldnot look directly in his passionate eyes.She started to breath fastly.Maan came close to her.She could feel his breath near her neck.She closed her eyes.She felt that he tied something around her neck.

 

Maan(Whispered in her ear):Geet i'm sorry main itna busy tha ka maine yeh notice nahi kiya ka tumhare pas mangalsutra nahi hai.I'm really sorry for that aur iss liye maine tumhare liye kuch aur bhi liya hai.

 

Geet opened her eyes.Maan held her hand from her back.They were standing in such a way that it looks like maan was hugging geet from the back.He slowly put bangles in her arm.


 Diamond Bracelets

Maan(Whispered in her ear):I hope you like the bangles.

 

Geet nodded shyly.Maan smiled and brought her hand close to his lips and kissed her hand while lovingly looking at her.Geet's eyes were closed.Maan hugged her from the back and put his chin on her shoulder and closed his eyes.He wanted to cherish this moment.Geet slowly opened her eyes and looked at maan.He also opened his eyes and looked at her.Their lips were inches away from eachother when maan's mobile rang.They came out of the trance.Maan picked the call.Geet started to think something.After the call,geet decided to talk to maan.

 

Geet:Maan main aapke company join karna chahte hoon.

Maan(Surprised):Per tumne tu kaha tha ka tumne orphan house join kar liya hai.

Geet:Haan per iss ke tu evening timings hain main subha se sham tak ghar main rah kar kiya karoon ge (Made a baby face) Please maan aap mujhe aapne company main job de dein.Pleaseee.

Maan:Ok baba main tumhi company main job de deta hoon per problem yeh hai ka abhi aik hi post khale hai jo mujhe lagta hai tumhi pasand nahi ho ge...Tu miss aap mere secretary ke job karna pasand karein ge?

Geet(Thought something):Haan main aap ke secretary bano ge.

Maan(Smiled):Ok then you can join tomorrow.Abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai.

 

Maan went to the study room.

 

Maan(Thinking):Chalo acha hai geet mere samne rahe ge.Main isse khush rakne ke pori koshish karoon ga.Kya pata iss doran woh mujh se pyar karne lag jaye (Chuckled) Now i have a new mission'make geet fall in love with myself'.

 

Geet(Thinking):Pata nahi maan ke samne mujhe kya ho jata hai ...Chalo ab main maan ke pas rahoon ge tu inse badla lena easy ho ga.Inhone ne mera trust thora hai.Aur inko inke kiye ke saza main doon ge.My mission is to take revenge from him.

 

 

 

Precap:Geet joined the office

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           Maneet moments

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            Geet's anger 

 



Edited by pickachu - 26 April 2011 at 6:18am

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Thanxx for commenting on previous part
 I have replied everyone individually!
I hope u guys like this part.
It was kind of boring!
But i have written longer part because this ff has crossed 100 pages!
Thank u soo much for ur support!
I will update next part after my exams!
Please leave ur comments!

Love,
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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged

Beautiful part

loved it!!!


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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Amezing update
I think rahul misunderstanding maan words
he make geet also misunderstand
let see what will happen
precap so nice 
pls cont soon

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