mY dEfleCtiVE ShaDe GamE oVEr (level FINAL)!!! - Page 5

Sorry for late reply. I can just say one word, MINDBLOWING!!!👏👏👏👏 u have done a great job truely!⭐️ but still, I would be more happy, if the criminal was caught. "muzrim chahe kitna bhi chalak kyun na ho, CIDse kabhi bach nehi sakta."😉 so plz think about it, while writing your next story. otherwise this story is ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. Edited by shreela - 13 years ago

hmmmmmmmmmm..... jus NOW read NEEME DII and SHREELA
FEEDBACK..... yani dono ko STORY buhat pasand nahi aayii....😭
hmmmmm.... nahi SHREELA.... ur idea was correct.... magar najany kyun.... shayed agar wo CULPRIT pakra jata... tou ACP Sir zyada hurt hoty.... cz kafi kuch case chalnay kay procedure mein open hota.... magra shayed!!!!
chalo... i m really SATISFIED with the END... agar her MUJHRIM pakra jata tou i dunt think kay RETURN of JEWL THEIF ya RETURN of CLOWN jesay achay episode bantay.....
so mujhay koi REGRET nahi..... kay mujrim CID say bach gaya.....
BUT phir bhi SO SORRY to both of U... that kay aap kay EXPECTATION BAR say story low ho gayii...
but better LUCK next try.....
try to be on UR EXPECTATION in future.....
thanx alot.... GUYS.... fabulous FEEDBACK and enjoying da PARTY as well....

I understand your feelings. although he is a criminal, he is truely an intelligent and talented person. and you don't want to send him jail or be hanged like an ordinary criminal. but how can we forgive the person who tortured our loving team so brutally? he can take cyanide, if u don't want him to be caught, but our team must find him. please think about it. it's a request.

hahahhahha..... SHREELA.... ab kya karun!!!!
ab tou tum nay MUSHKIL ker di hay.... 😉
yaar i knew about UR PAIN..... but secretly DUO told me they felt very happy coz they turned mentally very much STRONG.... and now their access and motivation towards the CULPRIT was so much HIGH... coz now they READS sum unusual CULPRIT MINDS easily.....
hmmmmmm..... SO SORRY buddy really..... 😭
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤢
 

sorry for late reply..

i'll try MOONLIGHT..... but really agar aap log jesay READERS na hun.... tou shayed main LIKH na paaon...... really i m speechless... at that moment.....
my new story was also at forum..... if u want a stress buster....
but buddy thanx alot.... n NO need of this SORRY..... cz its really HURTS specially wen came from SINCERE READER like U.....

I also liked the story/ And yes I understand your point of view. 

WOW...... TONS of THANK YOU NANDNI DII..... ya thanx alot to understand my point.....
buhat SHUKRIYA DII.....